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1、小升初專題復習,書面表達,Lookatmy,bigbear.,Hisfeet(腳),arebig.,Im a girl.,Im short.,My hair is long and black.,My eyes and ears are big.,But my nose is small.,I have a doll.,Hes a big bear.,Look at my big bear.,His mouth is big.,Lookatmybigbear.,Hiseyesarebig.,Look at my big bear.,His ears are big,.,Lookatmybig
2、bear.,Hisarms(臂)arebig.,Lookatmybigbear.,Hislegs(腿)arebig.,Lookatmybigbear.,Hisfeet(腳)arebig.,Thisismybigbear.,The End,書面表達,命題作文,文字提示類作文,看圖作文,寫人,寫物,寫景,寫事,書信,日記,賀卡,邀請函,電子郵件,描寫,敘述,課標要求,1.,模仿范例寫句子。,2.,寫出簡單的問候語。,3.,根據(jù)要求、圖片、實物等寫出簡短的句子。,4.,根據(jù)課表規(guī)定的話題的語言表達形式，描述季節(jié)、天,氣、顏色、動物等。,5.,用短語、句子描述一系列圖片，編寫簡單的小故事。,命題作文、
3、主題作文,知識要點,核心內容,注意要領,命題作文,1.,仔細閱讀題目，把握住要寫,什么內容及時態(tài)要求。,2.,正確運用字母大小寫及標點,符號。,3.,在字數(shù)要求內安排好自己要,寫的內容。,正式動筆前應先打個草稿，不要急于下筆。,主題作文,1.,仔細讀給出的內容，從中確,定中心。,2.,確定時態(tài)句式等。,3.,正確運用字母大小寫及標點,符號。,有時會要求自擬題目，這就要從主題中提取信息，自己確定題目，然后考慮內容。,看圖寫作文、根據(jù)提示詞作文、寫信,知識要點,核心內容,注意要領,看圖寫作文,1.,掌握圖片中的人物、地,點和事件。,2.,用句子描述圖片提供的,信息。,寫多幅圖作文時，一定要將每兩幅
4、圖之間的銜接處理好。,根據(jù)提示詞,寫作文,1.,從提示詞中了解文章所,需要寫的內容。,2.,把提示詞恰到好處地用,到作文中。,注意提示詞在作文中的詞形、時態(tài)等的變換。,寫信,1.,仔細讀給出的內容，從,中確定中心。,2.,確定時態(tài)句式等。,3.,正確運用字母大小寫及,標點符號。,有時會要求自擬題目，這就要從主題中提取信息，自己確定題目，然后考慮內容。,1.,標題。,2.,標點的使用：常用句號，意思表達完整就用句號。,3.,大小寫：句首，專有名詞,(,人名，地名，星期,),月份等,等中文人名的寫法：姓名分成兩部分，每一部分的首,字母要大寫。,4.,審題清楚，,時態(tài)保持一致，盡量用拼寫有把握的單詞
5、。,5.,字數(shù)要求,50-80,字，語言力求準確，無語法錯誤。,寫作文時注意,1.,確定人稱，,I/ He/ She,2.,確定時態(tài)：,一般現(xiàn)在時 動詞原型或三單形式（,-s,）,現(xiàn)在進行時,am/ is/ are,動詞現(xiàn)在分詞形式（,-ing,）,一般將來時,will,動詞原型 或,be going to,動原,一般過去時 動詞過去式（,-ed,）,3.,句型：人稱、動作相應時態(tài)、地點、方式、時間。,美文欣賞,My last holiday,My family and I went to Qingdao last summer. We went there by car. On the fi
6、rst day, we went camping and rode a horse. On the second day, we ate fresh food. It was delicious. On the third day, we went to a park. My sister took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, we bought many gifts for our friends. Then we came back home. We had a good time in Qingdao.,How to write
7、 the composition?,審題、抓點,人稱、時態(tài),搭建、結構,改錯、謄寫,解題技巧,介紹人物 描述姓名，年齡，高低，胖瘦，愛好， 職業(yè)，如何上班，或者如何跟你一起做事情。,I have a good,mother,. Her name is,Lily, she is,32 years old.,She is,tall.,She is,thin,. She is very,kind.,She is a,nurse,. She likes,apples and meat.,She always,goes to,work,by bike,. She often,reads books wi
8、th me.,I love my mother.,以上可以用于介紹家庭成員，,father,、,mother,、,grandfather,等，也可以介紹鄰居,neighbor,，朋友,friend,，老師,teacher,。,She/ he/ it has.,他,/,她,/,它有,.,She/ he/ it likes.,他,/,她,/,它喜歡,.,關于時間，節(jié)日，假期等，敘述做的事情即可。,I have a buzy weekend,. I do my homework on,Saturday morning,. I eat lunch at home. I eat,turkey and p
9、otatoes,. I clean my room in the afternoon. I watch TV in the evening.,On Sunday, I play football with my friends.,I am happy,.,節(jié)日前用介詞,on,做的事情可以一樣，把時間換掉。,動物：描述大小，顏色，吃什么食物，經(jīng)常做什么,動作，可以擬人。湊不夠數(shù)可以描述五官。,I have a little pet.,His name is Tom. He is a,dog.,He is two years old. He is,black and white,. He has
10、two yellow,eyes and two big ears,. He likes,meat.,He likes playing a ball. Sometimes we play together. I like Tom,we are good friends.,范文修改：,動物園的動物,開頭換成,I have a dream. I want to have a little monkey.,把吃的東西換一下，熊貓吃竹子,bamboo.,其他動物吃草,grass.,顏色換一下。,結尾換成,This is my dream. I want to have a cute monkey.,如果
11、抽到,dream,背這篇即可。,范文修改建議：,描述愛好，或者最喜歡的東西。注意,like,后面跟動名詞形式，或者名詞的復數(shù)形式。,I have many hobbies.,I like,swimming, because I can swim in summer. I like,drawing,pictures, I like drawing rabbits. I like playing computer games. I like singing, my favorite pop star is Dongfang Shenqi. I like watching TV.,What abou
12、t you? Whats your hobby?,描述最喜歡的物品，從顏色、形狀、大小、味道、用途等方面來描述。,e.g. My favourite fruit is orange. It is orange, it is big . It is sweet and sour. I like eating oranges.,On,Sunday morning, it is,sunny and warm,my mom takes me to the,park, there are many,flowers and plants,. You can hear the,bird,is,singing
13、,. You can see the,fish,is,swimming,in the pool. I play with my,little sister,.,We are,happy,.,講故事，先描述時間，天氣，然后說地點，事件，簡單明了。,Page,20,I have a,big room,. There is,a blue bed,in my room. There is,a small desk,. I do my homework on the desk. There is a,computer,in my room. The computer is new. There is,a
14、 big closet,in my room. There,are some flowers,in my room.,This is my room,.,介紹熟悉地點用,there be,句型。描述顏色，大小，新舊。,介紹教室：,desk, fan, window, blackboard, air-conditioner.,介紹學校：,play ground, building, classroom, music room,computer room, art room, some trees,flowers, a big gate.,名詞類別，出現(xiàn)總稱可以逐個描述。,從顏色，大小，形狀，味道
15、，用途，歸誰所有等各方面描述。有生命的參照人物動物一欄。,Gift,（可以和,pet,整合）,I have a beautiful gift,. It is from my sister Ann. It is big and tall. It is brown. It has two eyes and a mouth. It has four long legs. It is a teddy bear.,I like it very much.,1.,角色,構想演講中有（些）什么？,人物，動物，,食物，生活用品，家具，,這些事物的特征？,數(shù)量，顏色，服飾，,形狀，位置，,2.,角色行為,這些人
16、或物在做什么？,發(fā)揮自己的想象力,行為的結果和影響怎樣,好不好（不）可愛，,（不）快樂，（不）累,3.,場景,在什么地方？,海灘，公園，房間內，操場，,教室，醫(yī)院，商場,.,場景中所呈現(xiàn)的天氣，時間怎樣？,晴，陰，,雨，雪，冷，熱，早晨，中午，下午，晚上,.,學會整合零散信息：,夢想,自己有一只,小寵物，,是一只,綠色,的,熊貓,。,我的,媽媽,是一個,老師,，我的爸爸是一名,警察,。,周末,，我和,好友,一起去,公園,玩,圣誕節(jié),，我收到了一份,禮物,，那是一只,小寵物,，這就是我,開心的一件事,。（教師節(jié)，我送給老師一個小禮物，母,親節(jié),),我最喜歡的食物是,西紅柿,，因為多吃青菜有助于,
17、身體健康,。,My favorite vegetable is,tomato, because it is,healthy food.,我,假期,里和媽媽一起去,動物園,，去,電影院看電影,，我最喜歡看,功夫熊貓,熊貓是我最,喜歡的動物,。,On my holiday, I go to the zoo with my mom. I see many animals. We go to the cinema to watch film. I like watching,Kung Fu Panda,. I like pandas.,整合信息結果：,時間,：,morning, Monday, wee
18、kend,June, summer, last year,Holiday, 8:00,角色：,family,myself,teacher, nurse, doctor, worker,neighbor,classmate, friend, pet,（,fish, bird, dog, panda, monkey,）,地點：,my,home, school,classroom,on the street,bookstore, library, museum, police station, cinema, supermarket, hospital,，,park/zoo.,學會整合,事情,：,h
19、obbies, dream, exam, love, pollution, money.,形容詞：,happy, sad, tired, bored, excited, warm, cool,hot, cold, sunny, rainy, snowy, windy,colors,healthy,clever/smart,big/short/lazy/clean,beautiful,名詞,：,party, city, clothes,sun/moon,stationary,/tableware,color,food/fruit/vegetable,photo/picture,plants/an
20、imals,學會整合,動詞：,teach/study (learn,), play,smile/cry,help,rain/snow,touch,sing/dance,學會整合,開頭,：,Hello, everyone, I am glad to be here, today, I will give you a speech about,結尾：,Thats all. Thank you very much!,學會整合,Happy,Home,Policeman,Bookstore,Bus,Snowman,Dream,School,Family,Weekend,morning,zoo,Food,
21、Water,Myself,Smile,Sunday,Gift,Love,exam,作文話題,小升初作文題一覽,小考,：中秋節(jié)是我國的一個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。每到中秋，人們就會團聚在一起，做月餅，吃月餅，賞月，講有關月亮和嫦娥的故事。,請你根據(jù)以上內容，用英語寫一篇與中秋節(jié)有關的短文。,提示詞：,Mid-Autumn Festival, get together, make/eat mooncakes, eat a big dinner, see the moon, tell stories, happy,要求：,1.,條理清楚，語句通順連貫，單詞標點正確，書寫規(guī)范干凈。,2.,字數(shù)在,50,字左右。,L
22、ucy是我最要好的朋友，我現(xiàn)在根據(jù)表格，用英語把她介紹給你們，請你們看看，我寫得好不好呀？,Name,Lucy,Age,12,Class,Class 1,Grade 6,School,Hongan Primary School,Favourite Subject,English,Hobbies,singing,dancing,read books,Favourite Colour,pink,我是一個快樂的小學生。上個周末我的活動可豐富啦！我把我上周末做的事用英語記了一些。你想看看嗎？,人物描寫,Character description,Looking,外貌,性格和外貌,Hobby,Job,職
23、業(yè),Age,年齡,Idea,理想,注意：,人物描寫一般用第三人稱單、復數(shù)，注意用一般現(xiàn)在時。,人物描寫,My Family,I have a ( ) family.,warm,可以描寫的方面：,時態(tài)：,一般現(xiàn)在時 （單三形式和第一人稱并用）,外貌、性格、愛好、職業(yè)、周末活動、比較等等,My Family,人物介紹興趣愛好范文,There are six,people in my family,grandpa, grandma, father,mother, sister and I.,Do you know them, now let me ( ) them to you ( ).,intro
24、duce,one by one,My dad is tall and cool. he,has,two small eyes.,He is _strict but sometimes_.,He is a doctor. he go,es,to work by car.,very,funny,He like,s,swim,ming,.,My mother,has,short hair.,She,s very,kind,.,She is a,n,_ teacher.,English,She like,s,listen,ing,to music and watch,ing,TV.,My sister
25、 is 8 years old.,S,he has big eyes,.,She is very,lovely,and,clever,.,She like,s,danc,ing,and sing,ing,she,want to be,a dancer.,My grandma is very kind to us.,Her _,_,_ are watch,ing,TV and cook,ing,. We like to eat her food, because,_.,hobbies,It,s delicious,I like play,ing,football and listen,ing,t
26、o music. I go to school by school bus every week. I,have to,study hard at school every day. because I am in Grade Five now. I hope I can,enter,Chang Jun Middle School,the year after next.,My Family,I have a happy family: my father, my mother and me. My father is a doctor. He is tall and strong. He i
27、s very active. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She is kind. She likes reading magazine after dinner. I,m a student. I,m very active. I like riding a bike on the weekend. I love my family!,My Family,There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is
28、 a doctor. He is tall and strong. He is very active. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She is kind. She likes reading magazines after dinner. I,m a student. I,m very active. I like riding a bike on the weekend. I have a happy family!,My Family,I have a warm family. There are Six people
29、in my family, grandpa, grandma, father,mother,sister,and I. Do you know them, now let me (,introduce,) them to you (,one by one,).,My dad is tall and cool. He,has,two small eyes. he is very strict but sometimes,funny,. He is a doctor. He go,es,to work by car. He like,s,swim,ming,.,My mother,has,shor
30、t hair.,She,s very,kind,. She is a beautiful English teacher. She like,s,listen,ing,to music and watch,ing,TV. My sister is 8 years old. She has big eyes. She is very,lovely,and,clever,. She like,s,danc,ing,and sing,ing.,She,want to be,a dancer. My grandpa is very old, but he is still,strong,.,He li
31、ke,s,go fishing,very much. He often go,es,to go fish,ing,with me on the weekend. My grandma is short. She is very kind to us. Her,hobbies,are watch,ing,TV and cook,ing,. We like to eat her food,because,It,s delicious.,自我介紹范文及練習,I like play,ing,football and listen,ing,to music. I go to school by scho
32、ol bus every week. I,have to,study hard at school every day,because,I am in Grade Five now. I hope I can,enter,Chang Jun Middle School the year after next,.,So these are,all,about my family. I love my family and they love me, too.,What about you?,My names,_,_.,Im,_,years old.,Im _,tall.,Im _ kg.,Im,
33、very _.,I,ha,ve,_,_,_,_,_ hair and a _ face.,I have,_,_,_,eyes and a _ mouth.,I,like,_,_,_,_,_,and _ _ _.,I,can _ and _,_,_.,Usually I go to school,_ _, but,_,_,_,_,I go by car.,I have,many,friend,s,.,I,like,them,very much. This is,me,.,John,by bike,sing,dance,play,ing,computer,football,big,small,ro
34、und,short,black,thin,175,cm,28,60,sometimes,play,ing,games,My names,_.,Im,_,years old. Im _,tall.,Im _ kg.,I,like _ _ and _ _ _.,I,can,_ and _.,I usually go to school,_,_,_ _,(sometimes I ),This is Me,I,m twelve years old. I am a student of Class 1,Grade 7. I like playing basketball and reading. My
35、favourite fruit are banan,a,s and apples. Also, I like eating hamburgers. I am a good student in my class. I like English and math because they are interesting. Im friendly. I like sports. Do you want me to be your friend?,This is me,This is Me,Dear,John,My names,_.,Im,_,years old. Im _,tall.,Im _ k
36、g.,Im,very _.,I,ha,ve,_ _ hair and a _face.,I have,_eyes and,a,mouth.,I,like _ _ and _ _ _.,I,can _ and _.,Usually I go to school,_ _, but,_,I go by car.,I have,many,friend,s,.,I,like,them,very much. This is,me,.,圖片描述,場景表達,話題表達,Key information :,Family,1. Whats in the picture?,There is a man, a girl
37、, a grandma, a grandpa and a,woman.,2. Who are they?,They are father, mother, grandma, grandpa and,me(name).,3. What is _ like? He is _, he has _.,4. What does _ do? He is a _.,5. Do you like this family?,Yes, I do. I like it very much.,family members tall, thin, short,age job hobby,Seasons,How many
38、 seasons are there in a year? There are four seasons.,What are they? They are _.,Whats the weather like in _? Its _.,Whats your favourite season? My favourite season is _.,Why do you like _? Because I can _.,Seasons weather favourite why,場景表達,My school,1.How is your school?,My school is very beautif
39、ul/ big.,2. Whats in your school?,There is a _ in my school.,3. Where is the _?,Its ( on, behind, next to ) _.,4. What can you do in the _?,I can _.,5. Do you like your school?,Yes, I do.,I like my school very much.,school beautiful/ big places,on behind next to do like,My home,How many rooms are th
40、ere in your home? There are _.,What are they? They are _.,Where is the _? Its on the _ floor.,Whats in your _? There is a _.,What can you do in the _? I can _.,Do you like your home? Yes, I do. I like my home very much .,主題表達,人物,My family My friend,My teacher My pen pal,2.,動物,My dog My cat,3.,活動,A f
41、ootball game My holiday,My weekend,明確主題：,I have a _.,介紹名字或性別：,He/ She is a _. His/ Her name is _.,描述職業(yè)，年齡，外貌特征及喜好：,He/ She is a/ an _.,He/ She is _ years old.,He/ She is tall/ short/ big/ thin/ pretty.,He/ She has _.,He/ She likes _.,4.,結束語：,This is my _. I like it/ him/ her very much.,My friend,I h
42、ave a good friend. She is a girl. Her name is Liu Li. She is fourteen years old. She is tall and pretty. She is a student in No. 2 Primary School. Her favourite colour is red and her favourite food is fish. She likes singing. We often sing songs together.,This is my friend. I like her very much.,2.,
43、動物,My dog My cat,1.,明確主題：,I have a _.,2.,介紹小動物的特點：,Its very cute/ smart/ lovely.,3.,描述顏色，外貌特征及喜好：,Its _. It has _.,It likes eating _ and _.,4.,結束語：,This is my _. I like it very much.,My cat,I have a cat. Its very cute. Its black and white. It has two big brown eyes, a small nose and four strong legs
44、. It likes eating fish and sleeping in the day. But at night, its very smart, he likes catching mouse. It can make me feel happy.,This is my cat. I like it very much.,3.,活動,A football game My holiday,My weekend,1.,注意時間和時態(tài),.,2.,活動中發(fā)生的事情以及心情,.,3.,對活動的感受,.,寫作訓練,練一練,生活中有你最喜歡的人、事、物等，請你以“,My favourite _,”為題，寫一篇作文，,60,字左右。,更多精彩內容，敬請關注,3334326094,qq,.com,youyicongshu100,優(yōu)翼叢書 舒心教輔,聲 明,本文件著作權為創(chuàng)作公司所有，僅限于教師教學及其他非商業(yè)性和非盈利性用途。如發(fā)現(xiàn)盜用、轉賣、網(wǎng)絡傳播等侵權行為，本公司將依法追究其相應法律責任。,部分素材選自網(wǎng)絡，如有爭議，請聯(lián)系刪改。,湖北觀筑律師事務所,
小學英語小升初總復習專題《寫作1》訓練與復習
