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日?；顒尤粘Ｉ钪笇W(xué)生在校內(nèi)外發(fā)生的事情，和我們?nèi)粘Ｉ蠲芮邢嚓P(guān)，范圍廣泛。保護學(xué)習(xí)的課程，課外活動，也包括體育運動和社交活動；還包括和家人朋友的聯(lián)系。內(nèi)容有寫人的；有寫物的；有寫學(xué)校生活的；還有寫學(xué)習(xí)情況的。所選題材均貼近學(xué)生的日常生活，寫的基本都是學(xué)生熟悉的事，學(xué)生身邊的事。由此可見，和學(xué)生日常生活相關(guān)的內(nèi)容仍將作為高考寫作考查的主要題材。命題者可能會要求考生描述自己日常生活的事件。命題方向大致可以分為兩類，一是要求考生從描寫生活中的一件事情入手的文章，另外一類則是模擬一個生活中的情景，以此展開描述和分析。這兩類題目的共同特點是文章的主題均與生活有著十分緊密的關(guān)系，即使是后面一類，題目中模擬的場景都是與考生的日常生活有密切關(guān)系的內(nèi)容。 一.話題常用單詞1. campus 校園 2. canteen 餐廳 3. laboratory/lab 實驗室 4. dining hall 食堂 5. dormitory 宿舍 6. club 俱樂部 7. competition 競賽 8. rewards 獎勵 9. achievement/result 成績 10. marks/grades/scores 分數(shù) 11. with the help of sb. 在的幫助下12. hopeful/ hopeless充滿希望/ 無望 13. absolutely絕對14. depressed失望15. bad-tempered壞脾氣16. kind-hearted好心17. (im)patient （沒）有耐性18. encouraged受鼓舞的19 disappointed失望20. easy-going易相處21. optimistic/ passive樂觀/ 消極二.話題常用短語1. school dining hall 學(xué)生食堂 2. teaching building 教學(xué)樓 3. lecture theatre 階梯教室 4. the Students Union 學(xué)生會 5. social practice 社會實踐 6. part-time jobs 業(yè)余工作 7. vacation jobs 假期工作 8. prepare lessons 備課 9. have lessons 上課 10. miss a lesson 誤一節(jié)課 11. prepare for lessons 預(yù)習(xí)功課 12. stay away from school 曠課 13. work out 計算出 14. put ones heart into 專心于 concentrate on 全神貫注；專心于 15. have a good command of 精通于 16. graduation ceremony 畢業(yè)典禮 17. English evening 英語晚會 18. after-school/extracurricular activities 課外活動 19. social investigation 社會調(diào)查 20. voluntary labor 義務(wù)勞動 21. physical activities 體育活動 22. have an outing at the seashore 在海邊郊游 23. have a picnic/barbecue 去野餐/燒烤 24. have a party 舉行晚會 25. hold a sports meeting 舉行運動會 26. make progress in . 在方面取得進步 27. get full mark for 得滿分 28. pass the examination 通過考試 29. cheat in the exam 考試作弊 30. learn. by heart 記住 keep. in mind 記住 31. fail (in). the math test 數(shù)學(xué)測驗不及格 32. win the first ( prize). in maths competition 數(shù)學(xué)競賽第一名 33. get /take the first place in the English speech contest 英語口語競賽第一名 34. lay a good foundation in 在方面打下良好的基礎(chǔ) 35. the beloved所愛的人36. peer pressure同輩之間的壓力37. parents pressure父母的壓力38. hidden ability/ potential潛力39. complex personal desires復(fù)雜的個人欲望40. countless difficulties無盡的困難41. positive/ negative reflection積 極 / 消 極 的 反 思42. It give me the opportunity to do sth這讓我有機會做某事43. have (no) respect for strangers/ their family對陌生人 / 家人（不）尊重44. feel cheerful at work工作上感到快樂45. strengthen your own feelings加強你自己的感受46. get a good understanding of sth. 更理解某事物47. take responsibility for your actions對你的行為負責(zé)48. open oneself up to sb. 對某人敞開心扉49. become more confident變得更自信50. achieve ones goal達到目標51. be aware of意識到52. raise the awareness of 提高的意識53. get along well with sb. 與某人相處融洽54. be beneficial to對有益三、參考語句 話題常用句型1. For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons：.我同意后者，有如下理由：2. Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.在給出我的觀點之前，我想看看雙方的觀點是很重要的。3. Last Sunday, our class organized an activity - going climbing for our spring outing. 我們班上周六組織了春游 -去爬山。4. Last weekend, I paid a visit to the Great Wall with my foreign teacher Mr. Brown .上周末你陪你校的外籍教師Mr. Brown游覽了長城。5. We will present them with flowers and selfmade cards to show our respect.我們將送給他們花和自制卡片以表達我們的尊重。6. On arriving there, we began working. Some were digging, some were planting and others were watering. All of us were going all out to do it.一到達那里，我們就開始勞動。一些人挖坑，一些人植樹，另一些人澆水。我們都干得很起勁?！镜淅?1】生活中,你自己或他人曾有過物品不慎丟失而又找回的經(jīng)歷,其間有煩惱、有驚喜、有感慨請就此寫一篇英語短文。主要內(nèi)容包括：1. 丟失的物品;2. 物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)過;3. 你的感想。_ _ 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達屬于提綱類短文，要求寫一個失去東西又復(fù)得的經(jīng)歷。寫作時要仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個要點：1.丟失的物品；2. 物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)過；3.你的感想。另外提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)?。根?jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般過去時態(tài)。注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。someone. It was a girl with a pen in her hand. I felt excited to see my precious pen back. I thanked this kind girl again and again, who didnt accept the money I gave her as a reward.From the unusual experience of my precious pen, I learn that we should be thankful to those who always do good deeds and also be ready to do what we can to help others.【典例02】（2015年北京卷）假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請給你的美國朋友Jim寫一封郵件，告訴他你打算參加龍舟訓(xùn)練營，希望他一起參加，郵件的內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹訓(xùn)練營的相關(guān)內(nèi)容（例如；時間、地點、參加者等）；2.說明你打算參加的原因；3.詢問對方的意向。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞：龍舟訓(xùn)練營Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,_ Yours，Li Hua【范文賞析】Dear Jim，I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holidayI intend to join a Dragon Boat Training CampI wonder if you'd like to go with meThis camp will open on July 20thIt offers teenagers，1ike you and me，a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese cultureIf you are interested in it，1et me know and Ill send you more informationHope to meet you at the training camp this summerYours，Li Hua【典例03】假設(shè)你是一名高中生，名叫李華。因為老師擔(dān)心同站，學(xué)校關(guān)閉了電腦教室的上網(wǎng)功能，同學(xué)們感到很郁悶。請你給校長寫一封建議信。內(nèi)容包括：1. 無法上網(wǎng)給學(xué)生帶來的不便；2. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)的必要性（幫助解決學(xué)習(xí)難題、獲取最新信息）； 3. 就老師的擔(dān)心發(fā)表你的看法。注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾部分已經(jīng)給出， 不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear headmaster, Im writing to request you to allow us to surf the Internet in the computer classroom. _ Yours, Li Hua【寫作指導(dǎo)】詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。【范文賞析】Dear headmaster, Im writing to request you to allow us to surf the Internet in the computer classroom. Right now, we cannot use the computer in the computer classroom to get on line, which makes us very upset because we cant search for the information we need or read news.As far as I am concerned, surfing the Internet can benefit us in many ways. First of all, we can search for answers to some problems that we come across in our studies. Second, it is necessary for us to learn about the latest news. More importantly, we are no longer children now, so we are able to control our behavior. I promise we wont visit unhealthy websites.I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision. Yours, Li Hua【典例04】（2015年天津卷）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李津，你校擬向美國友好交流學(xué)校的中文班捐贈一批圖書。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一封郵件與中文班班長Chris聯(lián)系，并告知將于今年七月赴對方學(xué)校參加夏令營時帶去贈書。（1）自我介紹；（2）擬捐贈圖書的類型、冊數(shù)、用途等；（3）詢問對方的其他需求。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）請適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫。參考詞匯： 學(xué)生會the Student Union_ 意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！痉段馁p析】Dear Chris，I'm Li Jin，chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang High Schoo1Im writing to tell you something about donating books to your classTo enhance communication with your school，we prepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literatureWith them，you may have a better understanding of China and its cultureWe'll take the books when participating in the summer camp this July to your schoo1Would you please tell me something about your other requirements? We will spare no effort to meet your needsI sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and develop our friendshipBest wishes!Yours，Li Jin（1）某校英文報開辟了一個專欄：Experience。本期話題是如何解決學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的困難。請你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”為題，用英語寫一篇短文, 談?wù)勛约旱囊恍┳龇?。要求?. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)本人的相關(guān)信息。_ 【范文】My Approach to Difficulties in LearningAs high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning. Everyone has their own way to deal with them. Here I would like to share mine.When I am faced with a difficulty, I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages. In this way, I can not only it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.However, when it is something beyond my competence, I turn to classmates or teachers for help. Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice. As a result, I have made steady progress in my studies.【亮點說明】范文中有一些常用的詞組： run into遇上， in the process of在過程中， deal with them處理，be faced with面對，refer to參考，查閱， In this way, 以這種方式， As a result,因此，make steady progress 取得穩(wěn)定的進步，亮點句子有：I can not only it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.這句話用了not onlybut also結(jié)構(gòu)， However, when it is something beyond my competence, I turn to classmates or teachers for help.這句話用了時間狀語從句。(2)假設(shè)你叫李華，你的朋友Jenny向你詢問有關(guān)如何保持健康的問題。請你給她發(fā)一個電子郵件，提一些建議。內(nèi)容要點如下：1、 注意合理飲食，要多吃魚、肉、豆類等，特別是新鮮蔬菜和水果，不要吃太多甜食。2、注意鍛煉身體，勞逸結(jié)合，多參加體育鍛煉。3、保證充足的睡眠，不要熬夜，每天至少睡8個小時。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右。2、注意行文連貫。3、開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好。Dear Jenny, How nice it is to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. Here is my advice._ Yours,Li Huaoften as possible and you will find youre much healthier. My last suggestion is that you should make sure that you sleep for at least eight hours a day. Remember not to stay up too late. Yours, Li Hua 【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是提綱式作文，關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。有文章使用了First of all, Secondly這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。(3)假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Helen正在寫一篇關(guān)于各國中學(xué)生課外閱讀情況的調(diào)查報告。她給你發(fā)了一封郵件，想了解相關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給她回一封電子郵件：1. 你校學(xué)生課外閱讀的現(xiàn)狀；2. 原因分析；3. 你的看法。注意：1. 根據(jù)所給提示，適當發(fā)揮，要求內(nèi)容充實，語意連貫；2. 詞數(shù)120左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 郵件中不得提及考生所在的學(xué)校和本人姓名。參考詞匯：課外閱讀extra-curricular readingDear HelenThank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something _Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua【范文】Dear Helen,Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. Im sorry to say that most of the students in our school havent realized the importance of reading, especially extracurricular reading, as a result, the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited. Besides, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.I think the reasons behind that are various. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others havent formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful. So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. Best wishes!YoursLi Hua力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性?！玖咙c說明】所給范文語言簡潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子： as a result因此, prefer to do rather than do寧愿做而不愿，be burdened with負擔(dān)， form a habit of 形成，the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited.這句話用了定語從句， So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. 這句話用了it做形式主語和so that句型。還有范文使用了Besides, First of all, However,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。(4)近來很多高中畢業(yè)生利用暑假期間學(xué)習(xí)開車，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇有關(guān)學(xué)開車的利與弊的文章。利：1一種非常有積極意義的經(jīng)歷；2為你提供方便；3給你獨立的感覺。弊：1市內(nèi)停車不便；2費用較高；3安全隱患。注意：1. 文章開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 短文須包括所有要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢。3. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右。These days many high school graduates are learning driving during their summer vacation. In my opinion , learning to drive a car is a very positive experience for an individual._【范文】These days many high school graduates are learning driving during their summer vacation. In my opinion , learning to drive a car is a very positive experience for an individual. Knowing that you are able to drive makes you confident. Also, the ability to drive gives you a feeling of independence, which means you can go wherever and whenever you want. It is much more convenient and quicker to get around in a car than to wait for a bus.On the other hand, it is sometimes difficult to find a parking place in the city with the number of cars increasing so fast. Besides, it can be expensive- not just to buy a car, but also to pay for petrol and all the repairs your car will need. Apart from that, lack of experience may get you into a car accident. If so, it will be wiser to take a bus.不要太少。【亮點說明】這篇范文最大的特點是句式多變，語法涉及的全面，例如：learning to drive a car is a very positive experience for an individual.這句話使用動名詞做主語， Knowing that you are able to drive makes you confident. 這句話使用賓語從句，Also, the ability to drive gives you a feeling of independence, which means you can go wherever and whenever you want. 這句話使用了非限制性定語從句和讓步狀語從句，It is much more convenient and quicker to get around in a car than to wait for a bus.這句話使用了it做形式主語， it is sometimes difficult to find a parking place in the city with the number of cars increasing so fast.這句話使用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)， it can be expensive- not just to buy a car, but also to pay for petrol and all the repairs your car will need. 這句話使用了not justbut also的結(jié)構(gòu)，還有省略關(guān)系代詞的定語從句， If so, it will be wiser to take a bus.這句話使用了省略句。還有文章使用了In my opinion，On the other hand, Besides, Apart from that這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。(5)如今微信（WeChat）走進了人們的生活，為大家?guī)砹酥T多便利，但有些人也隨之成了“微信控”(WeChataholic)，請你就此事寫一篇文章。你的文章必須包括：此現(xiàn)象的描述和你對微信的看法注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；2. 文中需要包含提示內(nèi)容,可適當增加細節(jié),使行文連貫。_【范文】However, problems exist meanwhile. Firstly, our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat. As a result, we can be in trouble. Moreover, it may make communicating with others face to face less. To make the matter worse, relationship could break down .Last but not the least, our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study. Thats all. There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by. 【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇半開放性作文寫作,話題是關(guān)于微信控，內(nèi)容要考生圍繞此現(xiàn)象的描述和你對微信的看法來展開，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成此類作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性?！玖咙c說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：To begin with 首先，to the taste of符合某人的品味， the majority of people大多數(shù)人， accounts for 是的原因，be in trouble有困難，To make the matter worse使情況更糟糕的是, break down崩潰。Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call.這句話使用了非限制性定語從句， There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by. 這句話使用了同位語從句。還有范文還使用了Next, Furthermore, Firstly, Moreover, Last but not the least, 這些關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。15
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