高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 核心考點(diǎn)總動員 專題50 提綱類書面表達(dá)（一）（含解析）

專題 50 提綱類書面表達(dá)（一）關(guān)鍵詞：提綱類,漢語提示,書面表達(dá)難度系數(shù)：推薦指數(shù)：【基礎(chǔ)回顧】考點(diǎn)歸納： 提綱作文是高考英語書面表達(dá)的熱點(diǎn)題型。命題者通常把提綱作文與其他常用文體形式(如書信、報(bào)道、通知、日記等)有機(jī)結(jié)合在一起進(jìn)行考查，使該類書面表達(dá)試題綜合性越來越強(qiáng)?；A(chǔ)必讀： 1提綱作文的特點(diǎn) 提綱作文就是把文章的情景和內(nèi)容要求分成塊，以條目的形式列出，請考生據(jù)此進(jìn)行寫作。這實(shí)際上是對考生思路和文章寫作范圍所作的明確限定。因此，提綱中所列舉的要點(diǎn)要全部涉及到，一個(gè)也不能遺漏。 2思維空間靈活、開放 為了提高文章檔次，考生應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全的同時(shí)進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮。因此，該類型的書面表達(dá)具有一定的靈活性，能較好地體現(xiàn)考生的英語思維能力。最近幾年高考提綱書面表達(dá)，給出的漢語提示越來越少，這樣給考生留出的自由發(fā)揮的空間就更大了?！炯寄芊椒ā炕窘忸}步驟：審題：觀察判斷要寫文章的類型和特點(diǎn)；抓點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)就是高考評分的給分點(diǎn)或者扣分點(diǎn)。要求能在提綱的提示下用簡單詞語寫出所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。這樣做可以防止要點(diǎn)遺漏或者過分發(fā)揮；定調(diào)：即確定體裁與題材，確定格式、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)、人稱口吻、順序段落、開頭和結(jié)尾。然后將要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句；成文：連句成文。正確使用過渡詞，使行文流暢。并注意段與段的銜接；修改：看看是否有要點(diǎn)遺漏，字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等方面的錯(cuò)誤，以便及時(shí)修改；謄寫：修改無誤后，認(rèn)真規(guī)范地謄寫在規(guī)定的地方。【基礎(chǔ)達(dá)標(biāo)】 【四川省成都市2017屆高三第一次診】假設(shè)你是學(xué)生李華，得知好朋友William在學(xué)習(xí)中感到壓力很大，學(xué)習(xí)效果甚微，請你按照以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封電子郵件，幫助他放松身心，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。1. 快樂學(xué)習(xí)，保持愉快的心情；2. 積極參加體育活動，聽聽歌曲音樂；3.多與同學(xué)交流，互相鼓勵(lì)。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好(不記入總詞數(shù))，但不得抄入答題卡內(nèi) 。2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear William，Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively._ Yours, Li Hua【答案】 Dear William，Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good kind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. One way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind. In this way we can memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study. Keep trying, and we will make it.I hope all these can benefit you. Yours, Li Hua【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時(shí)運(yùn)用高級句子。現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語：This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job；倒裝句的使用：Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind.非限制性定語從句的使用：Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.固定句型的使用：Keep trying, and we will make it.連接詞的使用使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)層次清楚明了：First of all, Last but not least?！灸芰μ嵘考俣闶抢钊A，是學(xué)校的學(xué)生會主席，正在準(zhǔn)備排練英語節(jié)目參加于 2017 年 1 月 10 日舉行的株洲市“十分好英語”(Ten-minute Brilliant English)競賽(參賽者表演英語節(jié)目，時(shí)間十分鐘）。你給你校外籍教師 Sophie 寫一封電子郵件，向她說明競賽的基本情況、你對節(jié)目的設(shè)想和排練的時(shí)間；請她擔(dān)任一個(gè)角色和對腳本（script）進(jìn)行修改。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100 左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿ear Sophie，The Ten-minute Brilliant English Competition will be held on January 10, 2017. The participants are required to perform English programmes in ten minutes.As for our school, we will put on Romeo and Juliet on the stage. Im hereby so privileged to invite you to act one of the roles, and I sincerely believe that your attendance will b e a great encouragement to all of us. So if it is convenient to you, please come to the dancing hall of the school at 5 pm every day of this week.In addition, Ive attached the script of our programme to this e-mail and we will appreciate it greatly if you can polish it for us. Many thanks!Yours,Li Hua 【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時(shí)運(yùn)用高級句子。賓語從句的使用：I sincerely believe that your attendance will b e a great encouragement to all of us.條件狀語從句的使用：So if it is convenient to you, please come to the dancing hall of the school at 5 pm every day of this week.固定句型的使用we will appreciate it greatly if you can polish it for us.【終極闖關(guān)】 假如你是學(xué)生會主席李華，為了讓外國人了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化，學(xué)生會將進(jìn)行“唐詩吟誦大賽”(Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀請學(xué)校國際部學(xué)生參加，請你根據(jù)提示寫一則通知。主要內(nèi)容包括： 1大賽目的和意義； 2主辦方：校學(xué)生會。時(shí)間：201 6年12月30日。地點(diǎn)：校報(bào)告廳(assembly hall)； 3范圍：唐詩三百首(Three Hundred Tang Poems)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢。 Notice Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? 【答案】Notice Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? Here comes your opportunity: the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest. Id like to share with you some details. As scheduled, the contest is to be held on Dec 30th ,2016. You are supposed to get prepared before the contest. Above all, its recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems , and learn to appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese culture. Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible. If you want to attend, please come to the school assembly hall. Dont miss the chance of being a winner, and some appealing prize is eagerly waiting for you. Dont hesitate to take part ! Im sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much progress.【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時(shí)運(yùn)用高級句子。倒裝句的使用：Here comes your opportunity；主語從句的使用：its recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems；讓步狀語從句的使用： Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible.祈使句的使用：Dont hesitate to take part !