高考英語writing how to write a letter課件.ppt

AuldLangSyneShouldauldacquaintancebeforgot.Andneverbroughttomind?ShouldauldacquaintancebeforgotAnddaysolangsyne?*Forauldlangsyne,myfriends,Forauldlangsyne,WelltakacupokindnessyetForauldlangsyne.Repeat(重復(fù)),WuYanfromSanyaShiyanMiddleSchool,HowtowriteanEnglishletter?,Speaking&Writing,Thinking?,Doyoulikemakingfriends?Ifyes,whatwillyoudowhenyoumeetsomeoneforthefirsttime?Whatwillyousaythefirsttimeyoumeetnewfriends?,Task1:Useoneortwowordstodescribeyourself:,Iam_and_.,confident,good-looking,energetic,humorous,creative,reliable,tallwithglasses,patient,honest,easygoing,handsome,Task1:Useoneortwosentencestodescribeyourself:,Howtodescribeyourself?Iama/an_boy/girl.Iamfondof_.Ihaveagiftfor_.Iamableto_.,18-year-old,English,music,speakfluentEnglish,1.Inwhatsituation(情境)willyouintroduceyourself?,Task2:Speaking&discussion,高考真題,假如你是李華，在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上看到美國中學(xué)生Tony希望結(jié)識(shí)一位中國朋友的信息，請(qǐng)你用英文給他發(fā)一份電子郵件，希望和他做網(wǎng)友，并盼望能盡快收到他的回信。內(nèi)容包括：表示愿意和對(duì)方交朋友；簡單介紹自己，如性格特征、愛好特長等；希望多了解美國文化。,1.Inwhatsituation(情境)willyouintroduceyourself?2.InanEnglishletter,howtointroduceyourself?,Task2:Speaking&discussion,Task3:Reading&discussion,Pleaseanswerthefollowingquestions.WhomdoesLiHuawriteto?Whydoeshewritethisletter?Whatisthemainideaofeachparagraph?,DearTony,IamLiHua,aboyof16fromChina.IamgladtoreadyourinformationontheInternetandIknowyouwanttomakeane-palwithaChinese.IwanttobeyourfriendandwishtoknowmoreaboutthecultureoftheUSA.Iamasociableandsupportivepersonwholikestalkingwithpeopleandhelpingwiththeirproblems.ImgoodatEnglishandIthinkwecancommunicatewitheachotherbysendinge-mailsorchattingontheInternet.Iliketabletennis,enjoysingingandIamcrazyaboutpopularmusic.Atthesametime,Iliketravelingaroundinmysparetime.IhopeyoucancometovisitChina,andIllshowyouaroundmanyplacesofinterest.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua,-對(duì)象,署名-,Questions:WhomdoesLiHuawriteto?Whydoeshewritethisletter?Whatisthemainideaofeachparagraph?,DearTony,IamLiHua,aboyof16fromChina.IamgladtoreadyourinformationontheInternetandIknowyouwanttomakeane-palwithaChinese.IwanttobeyourfriendandwishtoknowmoreaboutthecultureoftheUSA.Iamasociableandsupportivepersonwholikestalkingwithpeopleandhelpingwiththeirproblems.ImgoodatEnglishandIthinkwecancommunicatewitheachotherbysendinge-mailsorchattingontheInternet.Iliketabletennis,enjoysingingandIamcrazyaboutpopularmusic.Atthesametime,Iliketravelingaroundinmysparetime.IhopeyoucancometovisitChina,andIllshowyouaroundmanyplacesofinterest.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua,Para2:Myhobbies&abilities,Para3:Mywish,Para1:Self-introduction&Mypurpose,-對(duì)象,署名-,影響高考英語書面表達(dá)得分的幾個(gè)因素1.語篇信息是否完整2.行文是否連貫流暢，語言是否得體。3.是否使用高級(jí)詞匯4.是否使用復(fù)雜句5.卷面整潔,書寫工整,Task4:DiscusshowtowriteanEnglishletterwell.,TheWritingSteps:(審題的步驟),文體typeofwriting,主體時(shí)態(tài)tense,人稱person,信息點(diǎn)整合keypoints,不一定要打草稿，但至少應(yīng)有提綱Donthavetomakeadraft,butatleasthaveanoutline.,Task4:DiscusshowtowriteanEnglishletterwell.,Task4:DiscusshowtowriteanEnglishletterwell.,Dear_(對(duì)象),Para1:Beginning：-Thepurposeofwritingtheletter-點(diǎn)題,一兩個(gè)句子,概括性；Para2:Body-中心記述部分；主次分明-self-introduction-otherkeypointsPara3:Ending:Yourthanksandyourwish小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題Yours（署名）,黃金模板,Task4:DiscusshowtowriteanEnglishletterwell.,Dear_(對(duì)象),Para1:Beginning:-Thepurposeofwritingtheletter-點(diǎn)題,一兩個(gè)句子,概括性；Para2:Body:-中心記述部分；主次分明-self-introduction(personality&hobbies)-otherkeypointsPara3:Ending:Yourthanksandyourwish小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題Yours（署名）,IhopethatyoucanIwouldappreciateitifyoucouldLookingforwardtoyourreply.,I,LiHua,amamiddleschoolstudentfromChina.Imwritingto,黃金模板,Iameasytogetalongwithandliketomakefriends.IcanspeakfluentEnglish.Iwantto/Pleaseletmeknow,Finishthecompositionwiththehelpofthewritingadviceabove.,Yourturn!,Task5:Writealetter(Aletterofapplication),小試牛刀：(高考真題鏈接)(2012課標(biāo)全國卷)假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個(gè)國際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。內(nèi)容主要包括：1自我介紹(包括英語能力)；2參加意圖(介紹中國、了解其他國家)；3希望獲準(zhǔn)。,Youhave13minutestowrite.,Writingtime,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,Minutes,Seconds,Youhave,DearSirorMadam，ImLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IreadtheannouncementofthesummercampthatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromdifferentcountriesandIdliketotakepartinit.IvebeenlearningEnglishfor10years,andIspeakfluentEnglish.Whatsmore,IllbeabletotellstudentsfromothercountriesaboutChinaandlearnabouttheircountriesaswell.Besides,ImeasytogetalongwithandIliketomakefriends.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyoursummercamp.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!YoursLiHua,Post-writing：,【自評(píng)】：1.要點(diǎn)是否齊全；2.時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確；3.主謂是否一致（尤其是第三人稱單數(shù)的動(dòng)詞形式)；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)及大小寫是否正確。,【互評(píng)】：1結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理？要點(diǎn)是否齊全？2是否有精彩詞句?(如有,請(qǐng)用波浪線劃出）3是否有中式英文？是否有可改善的字、詞、句?(如有，如時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、行文邏輯、詞性等，請(qǐng)用直線劃出.）4卷面是否整潔？字跡是否工整？,PayattentiontothestructureanddetailswhenwritinganEnglishletter.,Summary,IhopethatyoucanIwouldappreciateitifyoucouldLookingforwardtoyourreply.,I,LiHua,amamiddleschoolstudentfromChina.Imwritingto,黃金模板,Iameasytogetalongwithandliketomakefriends.IcanspeakfluentEnglish.Iwantto/Pleaseletmeknow,Homework,1.整理完善學(xué)案，反思本節(jié)課的收獲與不足；2.潤色自己的作文，總結(jié)和掌握英文書信的寫作步驟和技巧。,