立竿見(jiàn)影的提分句式.ppt

,立竿見(jiàn)影的提分句式,1.非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu) 島名： 釣魚島 地理位置： 中國(guó)東海 歸屬為中國(guó)固有領(lǐng)土 信息量不足的表達(dá)方式： (1)Diaoyu island is located in the East China Sea. (2)Diaoyu island has always been the inherent territory of China. 優(yōu)化：Diaoyu island, located in the East China Sea, has always been the inherent territory of China.,2.“with”結(jié)構(gòu) 語(yǔ)種： 漢語(yǔ) 歷史： 超過(guò)三千年現(xiàn)狀： 約1/5 世界人口在使用 信息量不足的表達(dá)方式： (1)Chinese has a history of more than three thousands years.(2)Chinese is used by approximately one fifth of the world population. 優(yōu)化： With a history of more than three thousands years, Chinese is used by approximately one fifth of the world population.,3.同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu) 人物：杜老師 職業(yè)： 英語(yǔ)老師 描述：可愛(ài)，經(jīng)常用甜美的聲音和我們說(shuō)話 信息量不足的表達(dá)方式： (1)Mrs. Du is a very lovely English teacher.(2)Mrs. Du always talks to us in her sweet voice. 優(yōu)化：Mrs. Du, a very lovely English teacher, always talks to us in her sweet voice.,4. 倒裝結(jié)構(gòu) 1:否定前置+部分倒裝 權(quán)利：免費(fèi)參加外籍教師的周末英語(yǔ)講座；暑假參加學(xué)校組織的學(xué)生赴英訪問(wèn)團(tuán)。 Reporters can attend the weekend English lecture given by the foreign teachers, and visit England with the students visiting team during summer vacation. not only.but also,Not only can reporters attend the weekend English lecture given by the foreign teachers, but also visit England with the students visiting team during summer vacation. Faced with difficulties, never do they give up but try their best to overcome them.,4. 倒裝結(jié)構(gòu) 2: only + 狀語(yǔ)， 部分倒裝 Only when you lost it , could you realize how precious it is. Only by studying well, can you realize your dream. 4. 倒裝結(jié)構(gòu) 3: adj+as/though sb is, 他雖然很累，依然幫助了我 Tired as he was, he still helped me.,5.定語(yǔ)從句 中國(guó)吸煙人數(shù)： 約3.5億分布：男性占3/4 (1)There are approximately 350 million smokers in China (2)Three fourths of them are males. 優(yōu)化：There are approximately 350 million smokers in China, three fourths of whom are males.,第一個(gè)學(xué)位：1936年獲得 第二個(gè)學(xué)位：醫(yī)學(xué)博士 He gained his first degree in 1936 and years later, he received another degree as a medical doctor 優(yōu)化：He gained his first degree in 1936, after which, he received another degree as a medical doctor,6. 被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài) be done 我們應(yīng)該立刻想辦法解決水資源短缺問(wèn)題 We should immediately take some measures to solve the problem of water-shortage. 優(yōu)化：It is high time that some immediate measures should be taken to tackle this problem.,