（江蘇專用）2019高考英語二輪培優(yōu)復(fù)習(xí) 專題五 書面表達課件.ppt

江蘇高考書面表達近五年考情分布,從上表可以看出，近五年來，江蘇高考書面表達的題目設(shè)置場景越來越具有真實性，越來越與生活實際緊密聯(lián)系，內(nèi)容包括日常生活、學(xué)校生活、社會文化等方面。從2014年開始，江蘇高考書面表達采用了一種新題型“讀寫任務(wù)型作文”，題型有創(chuàng)新，但對寫作能力的要求和詞數(shù)的要求等沒有變化。材料既有讀寫式的文字介紹也有圖表，信息量大，這對考生的材料分析、概括提煉能力要求很高，同時，具有一定的開放性，便于考生寫出緊扣主題的個性化內(nèi)容，又能防止考生出現(xiàn)簡單翻譯寫作要求中的句子的做法。,請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。,【寫作內(nèi)容】,1.用約30個詞概括上述利用排名(ratings)進行消費的現(xiàn)象；2.談?wù)勀闳绾慰创M排名，然后用23個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。,【寫作要求】【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】,1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,【寫作思路】,本篇書面表達要求考生根據(jù)兩段文字材料寫一篇文章，針對“消費排名”現(xiàn)象論述自己的看法和觀點，并闡述理由。文章為任務(wù)型讀寫，屬于議論文，主要使用第一和第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時應(yīng)注意緊扣兩段材料表達的主題，不可偏題，還應(yīng)注意合理使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜句型。,考生首先應(yīng)當(dāng)仔細閱讀題干所提供的文字材料。通讀兩篇文字材料可知，第一段材料為一對母子看了網(wǎng)上的評論后買回旅行箱，結(jié)果買回來的旅行箱質(zhì)量很好；第二段材料為一家人看了網(wǎng)評后去餐館吃飯，結(jié)果飯菜很不好吃，從而凸顯出網(wǎng)評的不可靠性。明確以上事實后，再在此基礎(chǔ)上明確文章的主題和結(jié)構(gòu)，對“消費排名”現(xiàn)象作相關(guān)闡述。本文可分為三段進行寫作，第一段用30詞左右概述材料的主要內(nèi)容，提出文章主題；第二段論述對“消費排名”現(xiàn)象的觀點并說明理由；第三段總結(jié)全文，再次點明主題。在遣詞造句上，應(yīng)當(dāng)注意合理使用連接成分，以提高文章的邏輯性，如在說明看法時可以用tobeginwith，whatsmore，lastbutnotleast等；此外應(yīng)盡量使用較復(fù)雜句型，如在總結(jié)全文大意時可以用定語從句、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)；在其他地方可以用主語從句、倒裝語序等。,【參考范文1】,Asamajorchannelofconsumptioninformation,theratingisanefficientsourceofinformationforshoppinginourownconsumption.Interestingly,thesameratingmayhavedifferentinfluencesondifferentconsumers.ItendtoconsultconsumptionratingswhateverIpurchase.Firstly,thehigherratingmeansthehigherqualityoftheproduct,orbetterservice.Basedontheratings,Iboughtmybelovedbackpack,sawinterestingfilmsandtasteddeliciousfoods.Secondly,ratingscansavetimetomakedecisionsinshopping.Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebookswhichIamoftenconfusedtochoosefrom.Inthatcase,itisbothconvenientandeconomicaltobuybooksaccordingtotheratings.,Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependpletelyontheratingsinconsumption.Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofratingsareoftencloselyrelated.Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowardsratings.,【參考范文2】,Nowadays,mostmoditiesorservicesareratedthroughcertainchannels.Theseratings,easytoaccess,areplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleincustomerspurchasedecision.However,resultsaresometimesunsatisfactory.,Thereisnodenyingthatsuchratingsmightbringconveniencetoconsumers，buttheyareoftenmisleadingandunreliable.Asweallknow,mostoftheratingsarebasedonothersjudgmentontheproductorserviceconcerned.Everyjudgmentesfromaspecificneedorauniquepsychologicalstate.Apparently，blindlyfollowingothersadvicewillaffectourownjudgment.Anotherfactshouldnotbeneglectedthatsomeoftheratingsaretheouteofacarefulmanipulationofpaniesorsellers.Ithasbeeamonpracticeforsometopayforgoodratingsontheirproductsorservicessoastoincreasetheirsales.Therefore,weshouldgiveasecondthoughttotheseratingswheneverwegoshopping.,請認真閱讀下面有關(guān)我國電影票房收入(box-officeine)的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。,SaturdayAfternoon.InaShoppingCentre.LiJiang：Hi，SuHua.Whichmovieshallwesee?SuHua：Whatever.Wevegotsomanychoices，KungFuYoga，JourneytotheWest.Eachsoundsgreat!LiJiang：Yeah！Andsomemoviestarsarefantastic.SuHua：Andthehigh-tech！.LiJiang：Perfect！Letsgetsomefoodfirst.Weonlyhave20minutesleft.SuHua：Nohurry.Thecinemaisonthesamefloor.,OneDayin2016.AtHome.Son：Mum，shallwegoandseeafilmtonight?Mother：Whybother？Wecanstayathomeandwatchfilmsonline.Itsconvenientwithournewandfasternetwork.Son：Butitfeelsgoodinacinema.Mother：Andtheprice.Wehavetopay50yuanaticket.Son：Only10yuanmorethanlastyear.Mother：Butstillwecannotgetthemoneysworth.Somefilmsarejustboring.,【寫作內(nèi)容】【寫作要求】【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】,1.用約30個單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；2.我國電影票房收入變化的原因有哪些，簡要談?wù)勀愕目捶?上述對話僅供參考，原因不少于兩點)；3.談?wù)勀銓ξ覈娪捌狈渴杖胱呦虻目捶?，并簡要說明理由。1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,【參考范文】,Thebox-officeineofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However，thatincreasesloweddownin2016.Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeine.Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.However，Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.Andtheinternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.Consequently，someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas，leadingtoaslowergrowth.,Chinaseconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedintheingyears，soanincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.Therefore，itsbox-officeinewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.,請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。Inrecentyears，InternetvotinghasbeeincreasinglypopularinChina.Peoplenotonlycaston-linevotesthemselves，butalsourgeotherstovoteforpetitionslikethe“MostBeautifulTeacher”andthe“CutestBaby”.LiJiang，ahighschoolstudent，isinvitedtovoteinthe“BestPoliceOfficer”petition，organizedbythelocalgovernmenttoletthepublichaveabetterunderstandingofpoliceofficersdailywork.LiJiangvisitsthewebsiteandreadsallthestories.Heisdeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds.Heisalreadythinkingofbeingapolicemanhimselfinthefuture.,SuHuaisinvitedbyhisuncletovoteforhiscousininthe“FutureSinger”petition.Hehasalreadyreceivedthreesimilarinvitationsthisweek.Hisuncletellshimthatifhiscousinwinsthepetition，thefamilywillwinanoverseastourforfree.SuHualikeshiscousinverymuch，buthefindsothersingersperformevenbetter.Tovote，ornottovote?Thisisaquestionthattroubleshimverymuch.,【寫作內(nèi)容】,1.用約30個單詞寫出上文概要；2.用約120個單詞闡述你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用23個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。,【寫作要求】,1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。,【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】,內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,【參考范文1】,On-linevotingbeesincreasinglypopular，andmanypetitionsgetpeopleinvolvedinit.Itisbeneficialtosomepeople，whileitputsothersintoadilemmaoverwhethertovoteornot.Inmyopinion，on-linevotingisaninseparablepartofmodernlifeandshouldbeweled，sinceitisnomorethanawaytoparticipateinpubliclife.Itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents，inwhichcandidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports.Inaddition，theInternetmakessurveyingandvotingeasyandconvenient，regardlessoftimeandspace.Furthermore，votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.,Tobehonest，voterssometimesfeelannoyed，notbecausetheyhatevoting，butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.Thingswillturnforthebetterifwecanworkoutsomeparticipationrulesforpeopletoobey.Therefore，Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson-linevoting.,【參考范文2】,Internetvotingisquitepopularnowadays.Manypeoplearesomewhatpuzzledatthenegativesideofthevoting，althoughsomearequitehappywithit，andactiveindoingit.Inmyopinion，Internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety.Firstly，peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydontwantto.Secondly，votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestrongpointsofthepetitors，butratheronhowmanysocial-networkingresourcestheyhave.Thirdly，thevotersoreventhepetitorsinmanycasesarepossiblytakenadvantageofbytheorganizersformercialpurposes.,Inshort，Internetvoting，tosomeextent，isunfair，ifnotimmoral，andcannotbetrusted.Therefore，rulesshouldbeworkedoutandstrictlyobserved.Everyoneinoursocietyshouldhelpthoseinneed，butitismoreimportanttobesincereandearnest.,