中考英語(yǔ)試題分項(xiàng)版解析匯編第01期專題13 書(shū)面表達(dá)含解析

專題13 書(shū)面表達(dá)1.【2018年江西中考】 假如國(guó)外中學(xué)生來(lái)你校進(jìn)行為期一周的交流學(xué)習(xí),期間計(jì)劃參加一項(xiàng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主題活動(dòng),為此向你們征求活動(dòng)方案(plan)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息提示,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,介紹你提供的活動(dòng)方案,內(nèi)容包括:茶或者民樂(lè)介紹,活動(dòng)安排以及與之相關(guān)的理由。要求:1.從表格中任選一個(gè)主題,合理安排活動(dòng);2.短文條理清楚,行文連貫,內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名;4.詞數(shù)不少于80,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Chinese CultureIntroductionScheduleReasonsTeaPast and presentTime:_Places: tea farm, tea houseActivities:1. tea processing2. a tea art performanceFolk MusicMusic piecesandtraditional instrumentsTime:_Places: music room, school hallActivities:1. take musical instrument classes2. attend a folk music concertHello, friends. Ive got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, Id like to introduce _Hope you will have a good time.【答案】Hello, friends. Ive got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, Id like to introduce tea. It has a long history. It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.On Saturday morning, you are going to visit a big farm where you can learn about tea processing. On Saturday afternoon, you are going to a tea house after dinner where you can watch a tea art performance.Why do we plan a visit to a tea house for you? Because you can lean a lot more about tea culture there. You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets, You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.Hope you will have a good time.點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2.【2018年內(nèi)蒙古包頭市中考】假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)給你們的美籍教師Bob寫(xiě)一封電子郵件,向他簡(jiǎn)要介紹你校即將舉辦的英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)( English Culture Festival),邀請(qǐng)他參加本次活動(dòng),并請(qǐng)他在節(jié)目最后做一個(gè)關(guān)于如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的講座。郵件還應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:1.活動(dòng)時(shí)間:本周五下午14:30-17:30;2.活動(dòng)地點(diǎn):報(bào)告廳( Lecture Hall);3活動(dòng)內(nèi)容:學(xué)生演唱英文歌曲注意:1.詞數(shù)90左右,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實(shí)人名、地名等內(nèi)容。Dear Bob,How is it going?_Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Bob,How is it going?An English Culture Festival will be held in our school. All of us students do hope that you could come and join us.The activity will begin in the Lecture Hall at 14: 30 this Friday ant last about 3 hours. Weve prepared many programs for it, for example, English songs. Whats more, some students will perform plays in English.As you know, many students in our school have difficulty in learning English well. So when the performance finishes, it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li hua點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。 3.【2018年山東德州市中考】樹(shù)立自我保護(hù)意識(shí)，健康快樂(lè)地成長(zhǎng)是每個(gè)青少年的必修課。下面是某地關(guān)心下一代工作委員會(huì)為青少年編寫(xiě)的青少年自我保護(hù)健康成長(zhǎng)所手冊(cè)的部分內(nèi)容。作為一名中學(xué)生，寫(xiě)一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：陳樹(shù)你是怎樣踐行手冊(cè)中提及的三條事項(xiàng)的；補(bǔ)充至少一條你認(rèn)為重要的其他事項(xiàng)。要求：1.語(yǔ)言通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.80100詞，文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.First, I always obey the traffic rules In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.【答案】Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I wont go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because its safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. Its important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other.Whats more, Id like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, its dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or river. So dont do that.In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：1. 本文書(shū)寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容完整、條理清楚。2. 在文中使用了First，Second，Third等詞匯，使文章層次分明。易于理解。3. 作者所加的一條很好，防溺水，是當(dāng)今安全隱患最大的。同時(shí)還運(yùn)用了句型Its dangerous for us to do sth. 使文章增色不少。因此本文為上等之作。4.【2018年山東濟(jì)寧地區(qū)中考】某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題為“ A time when I made someone happy”，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件，內(nèi)容需包括以下要點(diǎn):1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意：1詞數(shù)：100左右（題目不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)可能透考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息?！敬鸢浮縇ast summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldnt adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：這是一篇給定標(biāo)題的材料作文，需要逐條完成要點(diǎn)問(wèn)題的回答，描述一次自己讓別人開(kāi)心快樂(lè)的經(jīng)歷，是一篇記敘文，首先要讀懂5個(gè)問(wèn)題，其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言和銜接手段把這五個(gè)問(wèn)題的回答聯(lián)系在一起，變成一篇短文，同時(shí)也要注意在描述過(guò)去的故事的時(shí)候要正確運(yùn)用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。5.【2018年山東聊城地區(qū)中考】假如你要競(jìng)選你班的體育委員，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行競(jìng)選演講。演講的主要內(nèi)容包括：1自己喜歡體育，身體健康；2擅長(zhǎng)球類運(yùn)動(dòng)，尤其是足球和籃球；3可以傳授運(yùn)動(dòng)技藝，助大家比賽取得最佳成績(jī)。注意：1詞數(shù)：80左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3演講內(nèi)容中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校和個(gè)人名字；4演講的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。I want to be the PE monitor. _【答案】I want to be the PE monitor. I enjoy sport, and I can run very fast. Im really fit and healthy. Just watch me in the playground between lessons! I play most ball games well. But Im really good at football, and I play basketball in the school team. Because I have a lot of good playing skills. I usually get the best score in every match. I can teach you some if you like. Choose me for the PE monitor and you can get the best score too!6.【2018年山東省青島】現(xiàn)在，中學(xué)生在校內(nèi)能保證一定時(shí)間的運(yùn)動(dòng)量，但在校外普遍缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)甚至不運(yùn)動(dòng)。請(qǐng)就 此現(xiàn)象寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?nèi)容包括：1. 缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)甚至不運(yùn)動(dòng)的原因；2. 缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)甚至不運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)學(xué)生的影響；3. 針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象提出合理的改善建議。要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80100（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。 參考詞匯：be short of 缺少M(fèi)any students are short of exercise in their spare time now 【答案】Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now.They think doing exercise can affect their studies.Therefore they have less time to study.Doing sports is good for their health. A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit. In the school, students are forced to take exercise in the PE class, they need to join certain activities.In this way, students live in a healthy lifestyle, they wont get sick easily.But after they leaving school, no one forces them to do so, so they are lazy to take exercise so that their bodies get weaker.I think students should take exercise every day outside the school.In a word, exercise is helpful, important and absolutely necessary.7.【2018年山東省威海市】 “照鏡子”是生活中的平常事，以生活為鏡，可以照出現(xiàn)實(shí)中真實(shí)的自己。請(qǐng)以“Me in the mirror”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞以上的英語(yǔ)短文。圍繞自己最突出的一至兩個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，重點(diǎn)談?wù)勗谖磥?lái)的生活和學(xué)習(xí)中如何揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短、完善自我，成長(zhǎng)為更好的自己。要求：1.題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.觀點(diǎn)正確、條理清晰、表達(dá)流暢；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱?！敬鸢浮縈e in the mirrorLooking at myself in the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and Im always ready to help them. So Im very popular in my school. But I have a big problem, Im less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class. In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don t get good grades which make my parents disappointed.When I go to senior high school I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends. I hope we can help each other and learn from each other. I will make a good study resolution and try my best to go for it. I decide to have a healthier lifestyle. Ill spend more time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. Whats more, I will read more books and master good leaning methods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me.【高分句型一】Im less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class. 我對(duì)功課不太感興趣，上課也不能集中精力。be interested in短語(yǔ)的使用，使文章增色不少?！靖叻志湫投縄n my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don t get good grades which make my parents disappointed. 業(yè)余時(shí)間，我花太多的時(shí)間在電腦游戲上，所以我沒(méi)有取得好成績(jī)，這使我的父母很失望。which make my parents disappointed. 是由which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句?！靖叻志湫腿縄 will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. 我將集中精力在課堂上，認(rèn)真完成我的學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)。說(shuō)明作者在后來(lái)認(rèn)識(shí)到了錯(cuò)誤，而努力學(xué)習(xí)。8.【2018年陜西省中考】假如你是李華,上周日你獨(dú)自在家照看你五歲的妹妹Nana,請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)一篇短文?；顒?dòng)上午講故事，唱歌，中午煮面（cook noodles），休息（have a rest），下午玩游戲，看動(dòng)畫(huà)片（watch cartoons）感受要求:1.參考表格內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫,書(shū)寫(xiě)工整;3.文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4.詞數(shù):不少于70詞。(開(kāi)頭已給出但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home._【答案】Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：善于分段，可以用首段進(jìn)行概括性描述，闡明背景（my parents were not at home）。第二段可以進(jìn)一步開(kāi)始細(xì)節(jié)描述。涉及到的短語(yǔ)有told her many funny stories，sang and danced happily，taught her to speak a few simple English words，cooked noodles，had a rest等等，使用短語(yǔ)的時(shí)候也有亮點(diǎn)，能夠通過(guò)副詞happily或者介詞短語(yǔ)with tomatoes and eggs讓動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)的含義更加豐富。文章最后收尾簡(jiǎn)潔，用一句話點(diǎn)出了自己的感受，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 9.【2018年四川成都市】 假如你是圖中女孩，你與家人于4月29日共度周日。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖中所示寫(xiě)一篇英文日記，講述你當(dāng)天所見(jiàn)和所做之事。注意：1.日記應(yīng)包含圖中所有信息2.日記中須寫(xiě)出當(dāng)天的一些感受3.日記應(yīng)格式正確,語(yǔ)句通順,句式多樣4詞數(shù):100左右。參考詞匯:城堡 castle螃蟹crab【答案】Sunny Sunday,April 29(th)Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. a boat sailed itself in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.10.【2018年四川廣安市中考】假設(shè)下周你所在的班將開(kāi)展為期一周的研學(xué)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則通知告知全班同學(xué)。陽(yáng)光農(nóng)場(chǎng)之旅活動(dòng)時(shí)間一周活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)陽(yáng)光農(nóng)場(chǎng)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.幫助清理農(nóng)場(chǎng)垃圾,搞好農(nóng)場(chǎng)衛(wèi)生;2.學(xué)習(xí)種菜、植樹(shù);3.野餐,采摘水果(蘋(píng)果,梨)安全 tips不要到河里游泳,不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)。要求:1.字跡工整,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范,包含全部要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校、班級(jí)名稱;3.80詞左右,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4.請(qǐng)將書(shū)面表達(dá)內(nèi)容寫(xiě)在答題卡上相應(yīng)的位置。參考詞匯: rubbish(垃圾) clear away(清理) Sunshine Farm(陽(yáng)光農(nóng)場(chǎng))Hello, everyone,May I have your attention, please?_Thats all Thank you!【答案】Hello, everyone,May I have your attention, please?Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm. The journey will last for one week. On the farm were going to do some cleaning and help clear away rubbish at first. Then, well learn how to plant trees and grow vegetables. During the week, we will have a picnic and help the farmers pick fruits such as apples and pears. For our safety, we mustnt go swimming in the river and we should keep together. Nobody is allowed to leave the class group and go alone.Wish you a happy journey!Thats all. Thank you!寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：首先要點(diǎn)明主題“下周要去做什么”，用到了“have a journey to”（去旅行）這個(gè)短語(yǔ)。其次就針對(duì)這次旅行做出較為細(xì)致的描述，描述時(shí)間，描述即將進(jìn)行的事件，提到了“do some cleaning”（幫助清掃），“help clear away rubbish”（幫助清除垃圾），plant trees（種樹(shù)）、“grow vegetables”（種植蔬菜），“have a picnic”（去野餐），“help the farmers pick fruits”（幫助農(nóng)民采摘水果），“be allowed to do”（被允許去做），其中情態(tài)動(dòng)詞must的用法準(zhǔn)確，we mustnt go swimming in the river 意為“我們禁止去河里游泳”，mustnt表示“禁止”。結(jié)尾處有祝福語(yǔ)“Wish you a happy journey!”，總體來(lái)說(shuō)短語(yǔ)使用準(zhǔn)確，時(shí)態(tài)正確，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，有相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)的補(bǔ)充，行文連貫，完成了既定的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。11.【2018年四川省樂(lè)山市】現(xiàn)在，戴眼鏡的學(xué)生越來(lái)越多；為此，國(guó)家把每年 6 月 6 日定為愛(ài)眼日。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的體會(huì)，就如何愛(ài)護(hù)眼睛，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)欄目寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1. 吃有益于眼睛的食物，如：胡蘿卜、雞蛋等；2. 多做眼保健操，長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用眼后可看看遠(yuǎn)方；3. 養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習(xí)慣，如：不躺著玩手機(jī)或看書(shū)等。注意：1.詞數(shù) 80 詞左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. _【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, its helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good eye habit. Dont read books or use a cell phone in bed.In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。12.【2018年天津市】請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“The Story of Li Hua”為題，為學(xué)校廣播站英語(yǔ)專欄寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹發(fā)生在你班同學(xué)李華身上的一件事。（1）上周五放學(xué)后李華乘公交車回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在車上。（2）李華把橘皮撿起，放進(jìn)垃圾桶。（3）乘客用手機(jī)拍了照片，發(fā)布到網(wǎng)上。（4）老師知道后表?yè)P(yáng)了李華，李華說(shuō)這是他應(yīng)該做的。（5）你覺(jué)得參考詞匯：果皮peel 垃圾桶dustbin 發(fā)布post 表?yè)P(yáng)praise要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80-100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. _【答案】The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. After school last Friday, Li Hua took a bus home and saw someone eating oranges and throwing orange peel on the bus.So he picked it up and put it into the dustbin. The passenger on the bus took photos of Li Hua with their mobile phones and and posted them online. After knowing it, the teacher praised Li Hua and encouraged others to learn from him.I think Li Hua did a good deed. It is impolite to throw litter in public places.點(diǎn)睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如take a bus；put into ；take photos of； encourage to do sth;；learn from等； and ;so 和固定句型It is +形容詞+to do sth等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。13.【2018年江蘇省徐州市】你校英文報(bào)組織了題為“我喜歡的英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)，征文活動(dòng)，你有意參加。請(qǐng)從下面兩句英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)中任選一句，寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的短文，參加征文活動(dòng)。 Many hands make light work. Meaning: If lots of people share the work, it will make a job easier to complete.Practice makes perfect. Meaning: If you keep practising，you will be better at it. 短文內(nèi)容須包括： (1）你喜歡的諺語(yǔ)及其含義 (2）體現(xiàn)該諺語(yǔ)含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷 注意：1短文中已給出的部分（見(jiàn)答題卡）不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 2短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名?！敬鸢浮縈y favourtite English sayingMy English saying is many hands make light work. It means if lots of people share the work, It will make a job easier to complete.Last term, our class decided to give a charity show to help children in poor areas. It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music. Im good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.The charity show turned out to be a great success. We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us. Teamwork really works!點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分為兩段，第一段作者用了兩句話，介紹了自己喜歡的諺語(yǔ)以及這個(gè)諺語(yǔ)的含義；第二段作者講述了自己的一個(gè)經(jīng)歷，這個(gè)經(jīng)歷與自己喜歡的諺語(yǔ)是有關(guān)的，能較好的體現(xiàn)該諺語(yǔ)的含義。兩段的格式使短文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，敘述有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，文章以第一人稱為主，第一段使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)；第二段使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式。第三，短文句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、地道。句子以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也用到了很多的復(fù)合句，如并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句等，語(yǔ)句之間也用到了一些連接成分。較好的短語(yǔ)和句式有： It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. 、Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. 、Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music.、 Im good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.、The charity show turned out to be a great success.、 We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us.等。14.【2018年云南省】提示:每個(gè)人都向往美好的生活,美好的生活需要我們真誠(chéng)的付出和給予。請(qǐng)以“Doing Something Nice to.”為題,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,談?wù)勀阍?jīng)或?qū)⒁獮樗?、社?huì)等做的一件美好的事情。要求：1.請(qǐng)先將題目補(bǔ)全后再做答；2.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔,詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；3.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名,否則以零分計(jì)；4.請(qǐng)將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡上,寫(xiě)在本試題卷上無(wú)效?！敬鸢浮緿oing something nice to my friendA true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart!Jerry is my good friend. Hes very thin. Last winter, he got ill. He had to go to hospital once a week. He took lots of medicine. I hoped he would be as strong as me. So every weekend, I asked him to practice playing basketball with me. I taught him how to play it. Now he is much stronger and healthier.I feel very happy to have done something nice to my friend.點(diǎn)睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如go to hospital； once a week ；lots of； as as 等；So ；Now ；I feel very happy to 等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。15.【2018年浙江寧波市中考】今年5月11日，你校組織了一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，部分學(xué)生選擇去了紅星農(nóng)場(chǎng)（見(jiàn)導(dǎo)圖一），其余學(xué)生選擇去了科技博物館（見(jiàn)導(dǎo)圖二）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你所選擇的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)日記，記錄當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷和感受。注意：(1)日記必須包括你所選擇導(dǎo)圖的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；(3)詞數(shù)：80 -100。日記格式及首句己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Friday, May 11thToday I had a school trip. 【答案】Possible version 1:Friday. May 11thToday I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!(98 words)Possible version 2: