云南省中考英語總復習 第三部分 重難題型突破 題型六 書面表達課件

第三部分 重難題型突破 題型六題型六 書面表達書面表達一、一篇優(yōu)秀作文必須要符合下列條件：一、一篇優(yōu)秀作文必須要符合下列條件：1. 包含所有要點；包含所有要點；2. 圍繞內(nèi)容適當發(fā)揮圍繞內(nèi)容適當發(fā)揮(有新意、亮點有新意、亮點)，內(nèi)容具體、豐富，內(nèi)容具體、豐富(不能限不能限于回答問題或逐句翻譯于回答問題或逐句翻譯)；3. 應(yīng)用豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;4. 用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚；用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚；5. 沒有語法錯誤。沒有語法錯誤。解題方法與技巧解題方法與技巧二、學生答題過程中常出現(xiàn)的疏漏：二、學生答題過程中常出現(xiàn)的疏漏：1.審題不清導致人稱審題不清導致人稱/時態(tài)使用錯誤；時態(tài)使用錯誤；2.要點不全，要點遺漏或沒有按照要求增加要點或細節(jié)；要點不全，要點遺漏或沒有按照要求增加要點或細節(jié)；3.不會分段和使用連詞，結(jié)構(gòu)混亂或語句不連貫；不會分段和使用連詞，結(jié)構(gòu)混亂或語句不連貫；4.受漢語習慣的影響，文章語句中式化，表達有誤；受漢語習慣的影響，文章語句中式化，表達有誤；5.書面不整潔，不打草稿。書面不整潔，不打草稿。 三、解題方法與技巧：三、解題方法與技巧：1. 學會審題。認真審題，明確題目要求后才能確定文章主題、學會審題。認真審題，明確題目要求后才能確定文章主題、體裁、人稱和時態(tài)等。然后仔細閱讀要點提示，構(gòu)思語境，拓體裁、人稱和時態(tài)等。然后仔細閱讀要點提示，構(gòu)思語境，拓展要點提示。展要點提示。2. 謀篇布局。在草稿紙上羅列要點及所拓展內(nèi)容并列出提綱，謀篇布局。在草稿紙上羅列要點及所拓展內(nèi)容并列出提綱，布置好文章結(jié)構(gòu)和段落。羅列過程中不僅要注意時態(tài)、人稱及布置好文章結(jié)構(gòu)和段落。羅列過程中不僅要注意時態(tài)、人稱及短語句型等的正確使用，更要注意拓展內(nèi)容的準確性。短語句型等的正確使用，更要注意拓展內(nèi)容的準確性。 3. 片段描寫。按照規(guī)劃好的文章結(jié)構(gòu)和羅列的要點組織語言，片段描寫。按照規(guī)劃好的文章結(jié)構(gòu)和羅列的要點組織語言，完成文章。寫作過程中要注意書寫工整，語言表達流暢連貫，完成文章。寫作過程中要注意書寫工整，語言表達流暢連貫，盡量用最熟悉的、最有把握的詞匯和基本句型，如果遇到不盡量用最熟悉的、最有把握的詞匯和基本句型，如果遇到不會的詞匯，可以找同類詞或短語替換。同時要符合地道的英會的詞匯，可以找同類詞或短語替換。同時要符合地道的英語表達習慣，避免漢式英語，并注意詞形和時態(tài)語態(tài)的變化。語表達習慣，避免漢式英語，并注意詞形和時態(tài)語態(tài)的變化。 4. 語句提升。巧用連詞，使文章行文更加流暢，邏輯更加清晰。語句提升。巧用連詞，使文章行文更加流暢，邏輯更加清晰。如表達轉(zhuǎn)折可用如表達轉(zhuǎn)折可用but, however, otherwise等；表達遞進可用等；表達遞進可用and, besides, whats more等；表達因果可用等；表達因果可用so, therefore, as a result等；表達對比可用等；表達對比可用at the same time, meanwhile， while等；表等；表達讓步可用達讓步可用though, although, even if等。等。5. 細心檢查。在寫好短文后，從題目要求上要對全文進行檢查細心檢查。在寫好短文后，從題目要求上要對全文進行檢查和修改。要注意字數(shù)是否符合要求；內(nèi)容要點是否全面；語言和修改。要注意字數(shù)是否符合要求；內(nèi)容要點是否全面；語言表達上是否有錯誤，大到主謂一致、時態(tài)呼應(yīng)、習慣用法，小表達上是否有錯誤，大到主謂一致、時態(tài)呼應(yīng)、習慣用法，小到單詞拼寫、大小寫及標點符號，都要細心檢查。到單詞拼寫、大小寫及標點符號，都要細心檢查。類別一類別一 寫人敘事寫人敘事（5年年4考）考） 寫人敘事是近寫人敘事是近5年云南中考書面表達的高頻命題點，共考查了年云南中考書面表達的高頻命題點，共考查了4次，考查角度包括：敘述自己特別的一天、初中的學習生活、與次，考查角度包括：敘述自己特別的一天、初中的學習生活、與某人一起成長、自己的談話交流、快樂時光等等。文章大多以一某人一起成長、自己的談話交流、快樂時光等等。文章大多以一般過去時和第一人稱為主。一般會給出一段中文背景提示和般過去時和第一人稱為主。一般會給出一段中文背景提示和2點寫點寫作要求。作要求。命題探究類別剖析【開頭句】【開頭句】1. At the age of six, he/she began to.2. I will never forget.3. I still remember the day.4. The most interesting thing is that.5. What I admire most about her is.6. My/His/Her name is.積累與應(yīng)用【中間句】【中間句】7. He/She is +基數(shù)詞基數(shù)詞+year (s) old. He/She was born in/on+時間時間/地地點點.8. He/She comes/is from+地點名詞地點名詞.9. He/She is 1.70 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos.10. He/She has long/black.(修飾詞修飾詞)+hair(外貌特征外貌特征).11. He/She is outgoing/friendly.(性格特征性格特征). 12. He/She likes/loves/prefers/is interested in/is good at playing basketball.(興趣愛好興趣愛好).【結(jié)尾句】【結(jié)尾句】13. You cant imagine how happy I am!14. I kept practicing and never gave up.15. What an unforgettable thing it is in my life!16. Thank you very much for everything youve done for me.17. I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you. 18. I think we should do our best to help people who need help.My English Teacher提示：親愛的同學們，三年的初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，你們即將提示：親愛的同學們，三年的初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，你們即將離開三年來朝夕相處并給予你無盡關(guān)愛的老師們。請以離開三年來朝夕相處并給予你無盡關(guān)愛的老師們。請以“My English Teacher”為題寫一篇文章。為題寫一篇文章。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。典例剖析【審題指導】【審題指導】1. 文體：本文要求介紹自己的英語老師，文體為說明文；文體：本文要求介紹自己的英語老師，文體為說明文；2. 時態(tài)：回憶過去的某件事情用一般過去時態(tài)，介紹日常的生活時態(tài)：回憶過去的某件事情用一般過去時態(tài)，介紹日常的生活及工作用一般現(xiàn)在時；及工作用一般現(xiàn)在時；3. 人稱：介紹老師應(yīng)用第三人稱；人稱：介紹老師應(yīng)用第三人稱；4. 寫作要點：開門見山：點出我的英語老師是誰；介紹具體寫作要點：開門見山：點出我的英語老師是誰；介紹具體情況：年齡、外貌、愛好、工作狀態(tài)等；對老師的評價。情況：年齡、外貌、愛好、工作狀態(tài)等；對老師的評價。【寫作導圖寫作導圖】【高分范文】【高分范文】My English TeacherI have met many excellent teachers in my junior school. One of them is my English teacher.Her name is Li Mei. She is thirtyfive years old. She is with two big eyes and long curly hair. She has many hobbies, such as reading, singing, dancing, playing sports and so on. Shesfriendly and warm-hearted. She often shows us how to learn English well. She asks us to listen, read, speak and write. She even lends English books to us. If we have difficulty in understanding, we can go and ask her. All in all, she is always happy to help us. She is not only a good teacher, but also a friend and a mother. 第第1篇篇(2017重慶重慶A卷改編卷改編)The Story Behind My Photos提示：在過去的日子里，我們曾經(jīng)歡笑，也曾經(jīng)哭泣，照片或?qū)⑻崾荆涸谶^去的日子里，我們曾經(jīng)歡笑，也曾經(jīng)哭泣，照片或?qū)⑦@些精彩定格，或勾起你對往事的回憶。請以這些精彩定格，或勾起你對往事的回憶。請以“The Story Behind My Photos”為題，為題， 寫一篇關(guān)于照片背后故事的文寫一篇關(guān)于照片背后故事的文章章。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。寫作練兵【高分范文】【高分范文】The Story Behind My PhotosThis is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 years old. Look, we were playing ping-pong happily.I used to be a ping-pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a days work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you！”Now, I spend less time playing ping-pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!第第2篇篇(2017葫蘆島改編葫蘆島改編)A Happy Thing提示：快樂無處不在，在緊張的學習生活中，一定會有許多讓你快提示：快樂無處不在，在緊張的學習生活中，一定會有許多讓你快樂的事情。請以樂的事情。請以“A Happy Thing”為題寫一篇英語短文，講為題寫一篇英語短文，講述一件讓你快樂的事。述一件讓你快樂的事。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計?！靖叻址段摹俊靖叻址段摹緼 Happy ThingI like traveling very much. Traveling can make me happy.Last summer vacation, my father took me to Hangzhou on vacation. We enjoyed the beautiful scenery every day.When we walked along the West Lake, I felt very relaxed. My father encouraged me to talk with foreigners in English. I told something about China to foreigners. I felt the life was very beautiful.After traveling, I am more and more interested in English. Traveling not only helps me improve my English but also brings me happiness.第第3篇篇Growing up with Difficulties提示：在初中的學習和生活中，每個人都會遇到困難。請回顧這提示：在初中的學習和生活中，每個人都會遇到困難。請回顧這3年的初中生活，以年的初中生活，以“Growing up with Difficulties”為題寫一為題寫一篇文章，談?wù)勀阍趯W習、交友或與家長溝通過程中所遇到篇文章，談?wù)勀阍趯W習、交友或與家長溝通過程中所遇到過的困難以及解決方法，并談?wù)勀憬鉀Q困難之后的感受。過的困難以及解決方法，并談?wù)勀憬鉀Q困難之后的感受。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計?！靖叻址段摹俊靖叻址段摹縂rowing up with Difficulties Its natural for all of us to meet different kinds of difficulties and problems when we grow up. In school, I have to take a lot of lessons. Some are interesting while some are boring. During my growing time, a lot of trouble worried me. Thats awful and makes me blue. Although I met with a lot of failure, I still have a lot of gains. I can make friends, learn a number of useful thingsto be kind, friendly. Difficulties play an important role in my life and make my life colorful. Its common for us to hold a positive attitude to such difficulties.第第4篇篇My Tour Study to _提示：近年以來，許多學校開展了研學旅行，它拓展了我們的視野提示：近年以來，許多學校開展了研學旅行，它拓展了我們的視野并并豐富了我們的知識，使我們進一步了解社會、親近自然，豐富了我們的知識，使我們進一步了解社會、親近自然，從而獲得不同于學校課堂的生活體驗。請以從而獲得不同于學校課堂的生活體驗。請以“My Tour Study to _”為題，敘述你們班級或?qū)W校研學旅行的一次為題，敘述你們班級或?qū)W校研學旅行的一次經(jīng)歷。經(jīng)歷。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計?！靖叻址段摹俊靖叻址段摹縈y Tour Study to the City Science Museum In March, my classmates and I had a tour study to the City Science Museum. It was sunny, so we rode our bikes to get there. In the museum, we saw many kinds of inventions such as robots, 3D printers and some ancient things. We also experienced VR technology and space life. We took lots of photos with some dinosaurs and robots. The tour study was very exciting for me. I think I have learned a lot of knowledge on science and technology outside the classroom. If I have a chance, I will go there again.類別二做法建議類別二做法建議 近近5年云南中考未直接考查做法建議類書面表達，但其作為全年云南中考未直接考查做法建議類書面表達，但其作為全國書面表達的?？冀嵌戎?，考生仍有必要掌握。國書面表達的?？冀嵌戎?，考生仍有必要掌握?！鹃_頭句】【開頭句】1. There are some suggestions that.2. If you follow these ways, I believe you can.3. There is some useful advice about.命題探究積累與應(yīng)用【中間句】【中間句】4. In my opinion, we should.5. Youd better.6. You arent supposed to. 7. Lets do.8. I suggest that you have a rest.9. I totally agree with you.10. Im afraid you cant give it up.【結(jié)尾句】【結(jié)尾句】11. I believe we can .12. I wish you can obey the traffic rules.13. Please take action!How to Behave Well提示：中國是一個禮儀之邦，作為青少年，我們更應(yīng)該在平常的生提示：中國是一個禮儀之邦，作為青少年，我們更應(yīng)該在平常的生活中注意自己的行為舉止。假設(shè)你們學校正在舉辦以活中注意自己的行為舉止。假設(shè)你們學校正在舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽。請你根據(jù)所給提示為主題的英語征文比賽。請你根據(jù)所給提示，用英語用英語寫一篇參賽短文。寫一篇參賽短文。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。典例剖析(2017甘南州改編甘南州改編)【審題指導】【審題指導】1. 文體：寫一篇關(guān)于如何舉止文明的參賽短文，屬于說明文；文體：寫一篇關(guān)于如何舉止文明的參賽短文，屬于說明文；2. 時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；3. 人稱：寫作時主要使用第一人稱；人稱：寫作時主要使用第一人稱；4. 寫作要點：寫作要點： 說明原因；說明原因；我們應(yīng)該怎么做，包括三點；我們應(yīng)該怎么做，包括三點； 舉止文明的影響。舉止文明的影響?！緦懽鲗D寫作導圖】【高分范文】【高分范文】How to Behave WellIn order to be civilized students, its very necessary that we should behave well at school.First of all, we are supposed to keep the school environment clean and do not throw the rubbish everywhere. Secondly, we should develop good habits, such as washing ourhands and clothes frequently. Besides, we should make friends with other students, and we should be polite and become helpful to other students. Last but not the least, school is our second home, so it is our duty to keep it clean and beautiful.So, lets behave well and be civilized students from now on, then our school will be a better place.第第5篇篇How to Be a Good Student?提示：某班英語課上，就提示：某班英語課上，就“爭當中華好少年爭當中華好少年”進行小組交流活動，請進行小組交流活動，請你結(jié)合自身情況，以你結(jié)合自身情況，以“How to Be a Good Student？”為題，為題，寫一篇英語短文。寫一篇英語短文。要求：要求：1. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2. 文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。寫作練兵【高分范文】【高分范文】How to Be a Good Student?In my opinion，there are lots of things we should do to become a good student. Firstly, live a healthy life. We should have a balanced diet and do more exercise. Secondly, form a good study habit. We should listen to the teacher carefully, finish homework on time, and never cheat in tests. Thirdly, be a good person in public. Dont go swimming alone without permission. Taking the mobile phone to school is also forbidden. Dont fight with others. Last but not least, we should be polite to the teachers and get on well with our classmates. 第第6篇篇Lets Build a Green City Together提示：提示：“美麗云南是我家，人人都要愛護她。美麗云南是我家，人人都要愛護她?！薄皠?chuàng)衛(wèi)活動創(chuàng)衛(wèi)活動”使得我們使得我們的街道更干凈，河水更清澈的街道更干凈，河水更清澈作為昆明的一份子，我們需作為昆明的一份子，我們需要身體力行，請以要身體力行，請以“Lets Build a Green City Together”為題為題，寫一篇英語短文。，寫一篇英語短文。要求：要求：1. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2. 文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。【高分范文】【高分范文】Lets Build a Green City Together As a middle school student of Kunming, its our duty to help build a green city. First of all, wherever we go, we should throw rubbish into dustbins to keep our city clean and tidy, and we shouldnt spit everywhere. Last but not least, we should plant as many trees as possible to protect our citys natural environment and make our city more beautiful. In my opinion, a green city is the key to a healthy life. If everyone makes a contribution to build a green city, Kunming will become a better place to live in. Lets take action now!第第7篇篇Lets Go Green提示：假設(shè)你校英語俱樂部和環(huán)保俱樂部正聯(lián)合舉辦一場征文活動提示：假設(shè)你校英語俱樂部和環(huán)保俱樂部正聯(lián)合舉辦一場征文活動，內(nèi)容包括我們在生活中該做的和不該做的，比如節(jié)約水電，內(nèi)容包括我們在生活中該做的和不該做的，比如節(jié)約水電，不亂扔垃圾，不使用塑料袋等，請以，不亂扔垃圾，不使用塑料袋等，請以“Lets Go Green”為為題寫一篇英語短文。題寫一篇英語短文。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。【高分范文高分范文】Lets Go Green Its everyones duty to protect the environment. We can do something to make our earth more beautiful. Firstly，make sure that lights are turned off when they are not used. It can help us save electricity. Secondly, it is also important to save water. We should form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used. Whats more, we should save paper by using both sides of it. Remember not to litter. And try to stop using plastic bags which are harmful to the environment.Going green is very important. Lets work together to create a greener world from now on.類別三夢想計劃類別三夢想計劃(5年年1考考) 近近5年云南中考針對夢想計劃類作文共考查年云南中考針對夢想計劃類作文共考查1次，為：次，為：2014省卷省卷 “My Plan for the Coming School Year”。介紹對未來的暢想，要求。介紹對未來的暢想，要求學生根據(jù)自己的想法寫一篇計劃類的作文。學生根據(jù)自己的想法寫一篇計劃類的作文。積累與運用積累與運用)【開頭句】【開頭句】1I believe my life in future will be.2He/She wants to be .when he/she grows up.3If you want to make your dream come true，you should.命題探究【中間句】【中間句】4. First, .second, .finally, .5. We should/are supposed to.6. Everyone can .7. intend/plan to do8. be going to do9. decide to do10. determine to do11. make up ones mind to do12. How time flies!13. If we can do it as the rules, our dream will come true sooner or later.【結(jié)尾句】【結(jié)尾句】14. When I grow up, I want to .15. Im looking forward to .16. I hope we can .17. Where theres a will, theres a way.Our Dreams提示：上周五，你們班舉行了我們的夢想的主題班會，在班會提示：上周五，你們班舉行了我們的夢想的主題班會，在班會上，同學們踴躍發(fā)言，有的想成為一名警察，有的想當醫(yī)生上，同學們踴躍發(fā)言，有的想成為一名警察，有的想當醫(yī)生。請以。請以“Our Dreams”為題，寫一篇英語短文。為題，寫一篇英語短文。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。典例剖析【審題指導】【審題指導】1. 文體：本文為介紹班里同學的夢想，屬于說明文；文體：本文為介紹班里同學的夢想，屬于說明文；2. 時態(tài)：文章主體部分為未來的事情，用一般將來時態(tài)；時態(tài)：文章主體部分為未來的事情，用一般將來時態(tài)；3. 人稱：介紹班里不同人的夢想，用第三人稱，介紹自己的夢想用人稱：介紹班里不同人的夢想，用第三人稱，介紹自己的夢想用第一人稱；第一人稱；4. 寫作要點：寫作要點： 介紹召開了班會；介紹召開了班會； 分別介紹了分別介紹了3位同學及自己的夢想；位同學及自己的夢想；總結(jié)：為了夢想努力學習?？偨Y(jié)：為了夢想努力學習?！緦懽鲗D寫作導圖】【高分范文】【高分范文】Our Dreams Last Friday, our class held a class meeting about our dreams. Here is my report. Liu Wei wants to be a teacher when he grows up. He is going to study education. Li Mings dream is to be a policeman. He does sports every day. Su Juan wants to be a movie star. She is going to take acting lessons. And I want to be a doctor who can save many lives. Im sure our dreams will come true one day. So we must study hard for our dreams. 第第8篇篇(2017株洲改編株洲改編)My Plan for the Belt and Road提示：假定你是李華，暑假來自提示：假定你是李華，暑假來自“一帶一路一帶一路”國家的中學生將參加國家的中學生將參加夏令營，你想為夏令營工作，從清潔工、廚師、英語翻譯和夏令營，你想為夏令營工作，從清潔工、廚師、英語翻譯和對外漢語老師這四個職位中，你選擇哪一個？請以對外漢語老師這四個職位中，你選擇哪一個？請以“My Plan for the Belt and Road”為題，寫一篇英語短文。為題，寫一篇英語短文。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。寫作練兵【高分范文】【高分范文】My Plan for the Belt and Road Id like to join the Belt and Road and I want to work for the summer camp. I want to be a cook，because I want to cook delicious food for them and make them know more about our food culture. I believe I can make many kinds of food，such as dumplings，noodles and so on. If I become a member of the summer camp, I will prepare delicious food carefully and keep the food clean and safe every day. I will try my best to let them learn more about Chinese food culture. I hope I can succeed in becoming a member in summer camp.第第9篇篇My Dream Job提示：有一份理想的職業(yè)是每個人夢寐以求的，比如教師、醫(yī)生、提示：有一份理想的職業(yè)是每個人夢寐以求的，比如教師、醫(yī)生、售票員等等，請以售票員等等，請以“My Dream Job”為題，談?wù)勀銈兊睦硐霝轭}，談?wù)勀銈兊睦硐肼殬I(yè)。職業(yè)。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計?！靖叻址段摹俊靖叻址段摹縈y Dream Job Everyone has his dream. My dream is to become a doctor.My friends asked me why Id like to be a doctor. When I was a small boy I had a high fever once. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. Then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. So they took me there in no time. Luckily, I was saved in the end. From then on, I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor. But Ill try my best to study. I am sure my dream will come true.類別四說明介紹類別四說明介紹 近近5年云南中考針對說明介紹類作文未直接設(shè)題，但其為全國年云南中考針對說明介紹類作文未直接設(shè)題，但其為全國中考書面表達的?？冀嵌龋忌孕枵莆?。中考書面表達的?？冀嵌?，考生仍需掌握?！鹃_頭句】【開頭句】1. As far as I know, it .2. Studies show that.3. I used to .4. Nowadays, more and more people pay more attention to.5. Id like to tell you something about.6. Everything has two sides.It has both advantages and disadvantages.命題探究【中間句】【中間句】7. Nowadays, it is generally/commonly believed that., but I wonder that.8. My favorite season is.9. Let me introduce. 10. One of the most important things is.11. Man is now facing a big problem. which is becoming more and more serious.【結(jié)尾句】【結(jié)尾句】12. People used to.however, things are quite different today.13. In short, we must work hard to make the world a better place.My Favorite T-shirt提示：每一個人都有自己喜歡的衣服，不同的款式和不同的顏色，提示：每一個人都有自己喜歡的衣服，不同的款式和不同的顏色，能讓一個人看起來有不同的風格。請以能讓一個人看起來有不同的風格。請以“My Favorite T-shirt”為題，介紹一下你喜歡的原因、你什么時候穿這件衣為題，介紹一下你喜歡的原因、你什么時候穿這件衣服、這件衣服由什么制成的等等。服、這件衣服由什么制成的等等。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。典例剖析【審題指導】【審題指導】1文體：本文是介紹自己喜歡的一件衣服，為說明文；文體：本文是介紹自己喜歡的一件衣服，為說明文；2時態(tài)：介紹衣服的顏色、風格等特點用一般現(xiàn)在時；時態(tài)：介紹衣服的顏色、風格等特點用一般現(xiàn)在時；3人稱：介紹衣服用第三人稱人稱：介紹衣服用第三人稱it；4寫作要點：寫作要點：開頭點明我喜歡的衣服是這件開頭點明我喜歡的衣服是這件T恤；恤；介紹介紹T恤的顏色、材質(zhì)、喜歡的原因、是朋友作為生日禮恤的顏色、材質(zhì)、喜歡的原因、是朋友作為生日禮物送給我的；物送給我的；總結(jié)：帶給我很多美好的記憶?？偨Y(jié)：帶給我很多美好的記憶。【寫作導圖寫作導圖】【高分范文】【高分范文】My Favorite T-shirtAmong all my clothes, I like one of the T-shirts best.It is white. It is made of cotton, so it feels comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. Its a special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we spent together. This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.第第10篇篇My Favorite Subject_提示：作為一名中學生，你學習了很多課程，其中肯定有你最喜歡提示：作為一名中學生，你學習了很多課程，其中肯定有你最喜歡的科目，請以的科目，請以“My Favorite Subject_”為題，寫為題，寫一篇英語短文，簡述一下你最喜歡的科目、喜歡的理由以及一篇英語短文，簡述一下你最喜歡的科目、喜歡的理由以及學習的方法。學習的方法。要求：要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。寫作練兵【高分范文】【高分范文】My Favorite SubjectEnglish Of all the subjects I like English best. The main reason is that I think it is full of fun and the English teacher really makes his class interesting and lively. He always tries his best to help us learn English better and master good learning skills. Every morning I read English for fifteen minutes after I get up. In class, I listen to the teacher carefully and take notes as much as I can. Whenever I have problems I will ask the teacher for help. On weekends, I always practice my spoken English for half an hour. Now the more I learn English, the easier it is for me to master this language.第第11篇篇My First Gift提示：我們收到的第一份禮物往往是最珍貴的，你的第一份禮物是提示：我們收到的第一份禮物往往是最珍貴的，你的第一份禮物是什么？什么？ 請以請以“My First Gift”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，簡要為題，用英語寫一篇短文，簡要介紹這件東西并談?wù)勀阆矏鬯睦碛伞＝榻B這件東西并談?wù)勀阆矏鬯睦碛?。要求：要求?.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；個；2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計?！靖叻址段摹俊靖叻址段摹縈y First Gift Among all the gifts I have received, I like my first gift best. Its a hand-made calendar. My best friend, Jane, gave it to me on my 14th birthday. She made it by herself. On each page of the calendar, there is a picture of Jane and me with some words. Those words not only encourage me to move on, but also tell me how happy I am. Whenever I look at the calendar, I am touched by something warm. This present is a memory of the wonderful time we spent together. I will keep the gift forever.