（宜賓專版）2019屆中考英語總復(fù)習 第3部分 中考題型攻略篇 題型8 書面表達（精講）練習.doc

題型八書面表達題 型 特 點知己知彼,百戰(zhàn)不殆。首先,我們了解一下宜賓中考英語書面表達的評分標準?！緓x宜賓市中考英語書面表達評分說明】1.本題總分15分,按5個檔次評分。2.評分時,先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。網(wǎng)閱時,也可以按要點打分。3.詞數(shù)少于70的(一般要求90詞),從總分中減去1分。4.評分時應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點,應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性及上下文的連貫性。5.拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時,應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。6.如書寫較差影響交際,將其分數(shù)降低一個檔次。按表達要點的多少和使用語言的情況,劃分為五個檔次,列表說明如下：給分范圍評分標準第一檔1315分包含67個要點,內(nèi)容完整,語句通順,意思連續(xù)。沒有或基本沒有語法、拼寫錯誤,書寫規(guī)范,詞數(shù)符合要求第二檔1012分包含45個要點,內(nèi)容較完整,表達基本清楚,語句較通順,有少量語法、拼寫錯誤,書寫規(guī)范,詞數(shù)基本符合要求第三檔79分寫出23個要點,語句基本通順,但句子較簡單,表達不夠清楚,有部分語法、拼寫錯誤第四檔46分僅能寫出12個要點,語句不夠通順,表達不夠清楚,有大量語法、拼寫錯誤,通篇只有個別句子可讀第五檔13分沒有要點,通篇只有個別單詞可讀0分只字未寫、通篇不知所云或?qū)懙膬?nèi)容與所要求的內(nèi)容無關(guān)寫 作 指 導(dǎo)通過分析常見中考書面表達的類型,有助于指導(dǎo)我們寫作,我們將從下面幾個方面予以溫馨提示。一、英語中考作文解題步驟1.認真審題,弄清要求。細讀題目要求,明確文章主題,掌握表達要點信息(它包含哪些情景、內(nèi)容和要求,要明確題目有哪些要點,且要點必須齊全),確定題材(究竟用記敘文、議論文還是應(yīng)用文等),確定時態(tài),確定人稱(究竟用第一人稱,第二人稱還是第三人稱),做到心中有數(shù),不跑題偏題。2.構(gòu)思框架,合理分段。根據(jù)書面表達類型,首先理清寫作要點間的空間順序、邏輯順序、分出層次。如果是看圖作文,就按圖構(gòu)思；如果是提綱思維導(dǎo)圖作文,則注意要點間潛在的因果聯(lián)系,理清總分關(guān)系等。英語中的書面表達一般采用三段式表達,這樣閱卷老師一目了然。3.緊扣要點,遣詞造句。根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,在理解好中英文提示的基礎(chǔ)上,認真選詞,用準確的英文句子把文章的完整意思表達出來。有時一個句子可能有幾種表達方式,要根據(jù)實際情況選用最有把握的一種。遇到自己不是十分確定的詞句,可采用變通的方法來表達同樣的意思,切忌使用難詞、難句。4.巧用連詞,恰如其分。在寫作過程中,除了語言表達的準確性外,還要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn)、自然流暢。5.認真校對,規(guī)范謄寫。仔細檢查,修改草稿,默讀12遍,尤其要注意人稱、時態(tài)、大小寫、習慣用語有無錯誤,要點有無遺漏,語句有無病句,行文是否流暢。最后就是規(guī)范、工整地將作文抄寫在試卷規(guī)定答題的地方,千萬要注意卷面整潔,禁止涂改。二、寫作儲備1.順序詞(1)開始陳述：(第一,首先)to start with,to begin with,in the first photo,above all(2)另外,還有：(第二,其次)secondly,whats more,besides,in addition,as well as(3)結(jié)束陳述：(第三,最后)thirdly,finally,lastly,in the end,in short,in a word,in conclusion(用于總結(jié),常用于最后一段)2.換一種方法表述：in other words(換句話說)3.用于陳述事實：that is to say,in fact,to tell you the truth,to be honest4.顯示資料來源：according to5.可被替換的高級連詞：however,instead,on the one handon the other hand可替換but,therefore6.常用連接詞：(1)并列連詞：and,besides,whats more,bothand,neithernor(2)轉(zhuǎn)折連詞：but,while,only,or,however,though/although(3)因果連詞：for,because,so(4)表觀點：think,in ones opinion(5)表列舉：for example,such as,like7.常用句型：(1)Its adj. for/of sb. to do sth.(2)Youd better (not) do sth.(3)動詞不定式作目的狀語：To get out of trouble,they tried their best.(4)動名詞作主語：Reading is useful.(5)it作形式賓語：find/make/think it adj. for sb.to do sth.書 面 表 達 五 種 類 型類別一敘事類(xx宜賓中考)初中生活即將結(jié)束,6月6日下午,你班的班長方華組織了一次畢業(yè)聚會：話友誼、憶過去、簽名留言、拍照紀念。請根據(jù)圖片的先后順序描述此次聚會的過程。注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校的名稱；2.至少用兩句話描寫每幅圖畫的內(nèi)容,可以適當發(fā)揮；3.首句已給出,不計入總詞數(shù),詞數(shù)80以上；4.參考詞匯：簽名sign ones name,班長monitor,心形的heartshaped【參考范文】As_the_junior_life_is_ending,our_class_decided_to_have_a_party_to_celebrate_it. At the beginning,we talked about friendship.Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.No one can sail the ocean of life single handed.When in trouble,we need friends to offer us help,support and encouragement.With success achieved,we also need friends to share our joys.We cant forget the happy time that weve spent with our classmates and teachers.We learn how to face difficulties,and we also learn how to get on well with friends.Our school life is meaningful and colorful.In a word,it is unforgettable,isnt it? Next,everyone wrote down one of the most memorable things on the paper.And put them together to form a heartshaped essay pattern.Then we signed our names for each other.Finally,we took a picture of a group photo in front of the teaching building.We had a wonderful time,but we didnt want to say goodbye to our junior high school life.類別二介紹類(xx金華中考)在即將舉行的中學(xué)生國際文化交流活動中,你將代表學(xué)校介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日,請你從所給的卡片中任選一張,用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,介紹該節(jié)日。注意：1.發(fā)言稿中必須包含卡片上的信息,并適當發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學(xué)校等信息；3.詞數(shù)80100；4.文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。【參考范文】Ladies_and_gentlemen,Welcome_to_the_Chinese_culture_tour.Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals,the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival falls in January or February.It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of a year.So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner.Many people stay up late to welcome the new year,hoping they will have a bright new start.During the festival,people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year.Children can often get hongbao from their elders.Do you think it interesting?Thats_all.Thanks_for_listening.類別三做法類(xx宜賓中考)班級將舉辦英語演講比賽,請根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖,以“How to Be Happy”為題目,寫一篇90詞左右的演講稿。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。要求：1.短文應(yīng)條理清楚,行文連貫,段落分明；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、學(xué)校、地名等信息；3.短文應(yīng)包括全部信息,可圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。Good_morning,_everybody!_The_topic_I_want_to_talk_about_today_is_“How_to_Be_Happy”.The_following_are_my_suggestions.First of all, we should have life aims. When we have life aims, we can be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life.Next, we must keep healthy. Without good health, we will have nothing. So we should have good life habits and try our best to take exercise every day. Finally, we ought to be ready to help others. When we help those in trouble, we can get much happiness. I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.Thats_what_I_want_to_share_with_you._Thank_you!類別四觀點建議類(xx廣州中考改編)假如你是英語校報編輯李華,校報收到初一新生Ben的來信,他提出了所面臨的兩個問題。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封回信,說明Ben的問題,提出你的建議并陳述理由。Bens problemsYour advice and reasons朋友少,感覺孤單1.參加學(xué)校社團(club)結(jié)識更多朋友2.？(請你補充)英語單詞難記1.多閱讀英語故事、新聞在運用中學(xué)單詞2.？(請你補充)注意：1.回信應(yīng)包括所有要點；2.詞數(shù)80左右(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))；3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息。【參考范文】Dear Ben,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school.In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends.I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school.In this way,you can make more friends who share the same interest with you.Besides,youd better be friendly to others.Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.On the other hand,you found it difficult to remember English words.Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way.In addition,if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day,it will be easier for you to remember more words.I hope you will find these suggestions useful.Good_luck_with_everything!Li_Hua類別五社會熱點類(xx恩施中考)xx年3月至今,北京八達嶺野生動物園發(fā)生了多起游客違反入園規(guī)則而導(dǎo)致的人員傷亡事件,這些悲劇發(fā)人深省。俗話說“沒有規(guī)矩,不成方圓?！弊鳛橹袑W(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該遵守哪些規(guī)則？請結(jié)合下圖和要點提示,寫一篇英語短文。要點提示：1.遵守交通規(guī)則；2.不插隊；3.遵守入園規(guī)則；4.補充兩點其他的規(guī)則。要求：1.文中必須包含所有提示要點,可適當發(fā)揮,使行文連貫；2.條理清晰,字跡工整,詞數(shù)不少于80；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：jump the queue(插隊)；fence(圍欄)【參考范文】As students,what can we do to keep our daily life in order？Here are some suggestions.First,while walking or driving on the road,we should obey the traffic rules.Besides,do remember not to carve or draw anywhere during visiting places of interest.Whats more,making a loud noise in public is also a kind of pollution.It is as harmful as littering and spitting everywhere.Last but not least,when we go to the zoo or other public places,we should do as we are required,for example,“Dont jump the queue.”O(jiān)nly when we behave well,can we live in a wellordered society.實 戰(zhàn) 演 練A(xx宜賓中考)目前很多學(xué)生整天忙于學(xué)習,成績卻不理想。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容,結(jié)合自身實際,寫一篇關(guān)于“怎樣提高學(xué)習效率”的短文。學(xué)習方法1.listen to the teacher2.take notes3.review in time4.correct mistakes體育鍛煉1.exercise其他方面1.make good use of time2.ask sb.for help 要求：1.短文應(yīng)條理清楚,行文連貫,段落分明,90詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、學(xué)校、地名等信息；3.短文應(yīng)包括全部信息,可圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。How to improve our study effectively A great number of students cant finish their tasks,which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study.How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions.First,we are supposed to have good study methods,such as previewing the lessons before class,listening to the teacher carefully in class,taking notes in time,reviewing in time,doing homework on time,correcting mistakes at any time.Then,its helpful for study to have good health.So we should spend at least an hour (in) exercising our body every day.Besides,wed better make good use of time.Dont put off what we can do today till tomorrow.We should ask the teacher or classmates for help if we have some questions. If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above,you will be successful.B(xx蘇州中考)現(xiàn)在,越來越多的外國友人開始關(guān)注中國文化。假定你是蘇華,你的加拿大筆友Ryan是一個中國迷,他想在中秋期間來中國看看。請認真閱讀他寫給你的郵件,根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容及你的了解用英語回復(fù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)；2.回復(fù)須包括所有要點,可適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順；3.文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。To：suhuachina.comFrom：ryan2003canada.comSubject：Chinese cultureDear Su Hua,How are you? I hope you are well.As a fan of Chinese culture,Im thinking about going to China during the MidAutumn Festival.Would you please tell me the following things？How do you usually celebrate the MidAutumn Festival？Which city in China is most worth visiting? Why？What is the best way to travel between cities in China？What gift can I buy for my friends？Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,RyanDear Ryan,Im glad to hear youre coming to China.China is a country with a long history and rich culture.The MidAutumn Festival is a traditional festival in China.That day,families get together and have a big dinner.We eat mooncakes and enjoy the full moon.Its great.Therere many beautiful cities in China.Beijing is one of the best choices.Its the capital of China and it has many famous sights like the Great Wall,the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum.After visiting Beijing,you can take a highspeed train to visit other cities.And you can buy Chinese knots or chopsticks for your friends.I hope my reply is of some help to you.Looking forward to seeing you in China.All the best,Su HuaC(xx龍東中考改編)(A)話題作文：近幾年來,校園欺凌(school bullies)事件時有發(fā)生,學(xué)會自我保護是我們中學(xué)生需要具備的一種意識和能力,我們應(yīng)該珍惜生命,注意自己的人身安全,做好自我保護。請以“How Can We Protect Ourselves？”為題寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文,談?wù)勗谏钪形覀儜?yīng)該怎樣自我保護(selfprotection)。提示：1.不單獨游泳；2.謹慎交友；3.遇到危險報警或向老師求助；4.飲食及交通安全等_How_Can_We_Protect_Ourselves_Selfprotection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.First,we should be careful when we make friends,especially online.Second,if we are in danger,we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely.Besides,we shouldnt crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.Last but not least,summer is coming.We must remember its dangerous to swim alone.All in all,everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.(B)圖示作文：仔細觀察下列六幅圖片,展開合理想象,寫一篇短文。要求：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.字跡工整,語法正確,意思連貫,合乎邏輯,可適當發(fā)揮。This morning my mother didnt go to work and she wanted to do some washing at home.First,she put some dirty clothes into the washing machine,and then she went back to the bedroom to look for other dirty clothes with its door open.At that moment,my pet cat ran out of the bedroom happily and rushed into the washing machine.When my mother returned and was about to close the door,I came in with a dirty Tshirt.“Mom,could you please help me clean it？” “Of course,my dear.” Suddenly,my pet cat rushed out of the washing machine.My mother and I were both shocked.My God! What would happen if I didnt give Mom the Tshirt？