高考英語(yǔ)大一輪復(fù)習(xí) 第3部分 寫作基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練 九 讓寫作渾然一體的銜接與過(guò)渡及通知課件 新人教版

學(xué)案九讓寫作渾然一體的銜接學(xué)案九讓寫作渾然一體的銜接與過(guò)渡及通知與過(guò)渡及通知銜接與過(guò)渡是高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)的重要評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一，因此，在句與句之間，段與段之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┏猩蠁⑾碌倪B接詞是非常必要的。常用的連接(過(guò)渡)詞主要有：寫作運(yùn)用探究一、表示起始關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞above all, to begin/start with, first of all, now, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to, with the development of.等。 高考佳句First of all，the theme of the show is environmental protection，which is of great importance in todays society.(2016全國(guó)，滿分作文)首先，展覽的主題是環(huán)境保護(hù)，這在當(dāng)今社會(huì)中的重要意義。To start with，I have been learning and speaking Mandarin for about 17 years.(2015四川，滿分作文)首先，我學(xué)說(shuō)普通話已經(jīng)大約17年了?！炯磿r(shí)演練】完成句子1._ the Internet，computers play an important role in peoples life.隨著因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，計(jì)算機(jī)在人們的生活中起著重要作用。2._，the more you practise，the more skillfully you can write in English.總的來(lái)說(shuō)，你練習(xí)越多，用英語(yǔ)寫作就越熟練。答案1.With the development of2.Generally speaking first(ly)，then，later，in the end，finally，at last，after that，afterwards，since then，immediately，suddenly，meanwhile等。二、表示時(shí)間順序的過(guò)渡詞高考佳句Firstly，people may feel forced when asked to do things that they dont want to.(2016江蘇，滿分作文)首先，當(dāng)被要求做他們不想的事情的時(shí)候人們是可能感到是被迫的。Secondly, Id like to share my books with others as well.(2015重慶，滿分作文)其次，我也喜歡與別人分享我的書籍?！炯磿r(shí)演練】完成短文3._，I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place._ I wiped the dust off all the furniture._，I swept and mopped the floors.首先，我把所有的書籍、報(bào)紙和其他的散落在屋子里的東西收集起來(lái)放好，然后我掃去所有家具上的灰塵，之后我掃地、拖地。答案Firstly；Then；After that 三、表示并列關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞and，or，also，as well as，neither.nor.，not only.but also.，either.or.，not.but.等。高考佳句By doing so，I can not only share good ideas with others, but also learn to express myself clearly.(2015浙江，書面表達(dá))通過(guò)這樣做，我不僅能與其他人分享好的觀點(diǎn)，而且學(xué)會(huì)了清晰地表達(dá)自己。She finally earned respect of them，who eventually became confident as well as well-behaved.(2015廣東，滿分作文)她最后贏得了他們的尊重，他們最終變得自信，表現(xiàn)也不錯(cuò)?！炯磿r(shí)演練】翻譯句子4.努力學(xué)習(xí)，你就會(huì)升入重點(diǎn)大學(xué)。_5.游泳不但對(duì)身體有好處，而且能培養(yǎng)我們的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志。_答案4.Work hard，and you will be admitted to a key university.5.Swimming not only benefits our health，but also helps us have a strong will. 四、表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞 but，yet，however，while，otherwise，on the contrary等。高考佳句However，as a proverb goes，“Every coin has two sides.”(2016江蘇，滿分作文)然而，正如諺語(yǔ)所說(shuō)，“每個(gè)硬幣都有兩面”。On the contrary，the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth，so they are eager to experience the future life on the Mars.(廣東高考滿分作文)相反，這些志愿者說(shuō)，他們厭倦了地球上的生活，因此他們渴望體驗(yàn)未來(lái)火星上的生活。 【即時(shí)演練】翻譯句子6.然而，使你最驚訝的是下述新的功能。_7.相反，智能手機(jī)不僅占用我們寶貴的時(shí)間，而且對(duì)我們的健康造成極大的危害。_答案6.However，what amazes you most is the following new function.7.On the contrary，smart phones not only take up our valuable time，but also do great harm to our health. because，as，since，for，thanks to，due to，as a result of，so，therefore，as a result/consequence等。五、表示因果關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞高考佳句The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you dont have to worry so much.(安徽高考滿分作文)真相是每個(gè)人都會(huì)有事情看上去要變得糟糕的時(shí)刻，所以你不必過(guò)分擔(dān)心。As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.(福建高考書面表達(dá))結(jié)果，孩子們變得太依賴于父母，以至于他們沒(méi)有獨(dú)立的思想和創(chuàng)造性的想法。 【即時(shí)演練】翻譯句子8.多虧醫(yī)生的及時(shí)治療，他獲救了。_9.因此，我建議應(yīng)該給我們更多的時(shí)間用于體育運(yùn)動(dòng)和睡眠。 _答案8.Thanks to the doctors timely treatment，he was saved.9.Therefore，I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep. if，unless，in case of，as/so long as，on condition that等。六、表示條件關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞高考佳句Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.(浙江高考滿分作文)若你們能考慮一下我的建議，我將很高興。As long as we stick to our dreams，we will become a winner sooner or later.(湖南高考滿分作文)只要堅(jiān)持夢(mèng)想，我們遲早會(huì)成為贏家。 【即時(shí)演練】翻譯句子10.只要你不灰心，就一定會(huì)成功。_11.如果我們忽視我們的未來(lái)，就像圖畫中的這個(gè)人一樣，我們就會(huì)以失敗告終。_答案10.As long as you dont lose heart，youre sure to succeed.11.If we neglect our future，well end up in failure as what happens to the man in the picture. whats more，furthermore，moreover，besides，whats worse，still less，to make matters worse，worse still，on (the) one hand.on the other hand.，for one thing.for another.等。七、表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞高考佳句Whats more，Im outgoing and warm-hearted.(2015陜西，滿分作文)另外，我性格外向且待人熱心。On one hand，I can earn some money by doing it to help my parents，and on the other hand，I can gain some experience from it，which will do good to my future life.(山東高考滿分作文)一方面，我能通過(guò)做這樣的事賺些錢來(lái)幫助父母，另一方面，我能從中獲得一些經(jīng)驗(yàn)，這會(huì)對(duì)我將來(lái)的生活有益?！炯磿r(shí)演練】完成句子12._，our class also organize a variety of activities to enrich our spare time.另外，我們班還組織了各種各樣的活動(dòng)來(lái)豐富我們的業(yè)余時(shí)間。13._，if we spend too much time on phones，we will lose the communication skills we need in the future.更糟的是，如果我們?cè)陔娫捝匣ㄙM(fèi)過(guò)多的時(shí)間，我們會(huì)失去將來(lái)需要的交際技能。 答案12.Besides/Whats more/In addition/Moreover/Furthermore13.Worse still/To make matters worse such as，for example/instance，take.for example，that is to say，as follows，in other words等。八、表示列舉事實(shí)的過(guò)渡詞高考佳句They are of different shapes，such as diamonds，butterflies，flowers and birds.(新課標(biāo)全國(guó)滿分作文)它們形狀各異，諸如像鉆石、蝴蝶、花、鳥(niǎo)。In fact，Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages，say，“ganbu” or “minzhu” from Japanese.(江蘇高考滿分作文)事實(shí)上，漢語(yǔ)從來(lái)就沒(méi)有停止過(guò)從別的語(yǔ)言中錄入一些單詞，比如，日語(yǔ)中的“ganbu”或“minzhu”。 【即時(shí)演練】完成句子14._，it is one of the oldest cities in the world.就拿北京來(lái)說(shuō)吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。15._，if you want to succeed，you have to believe in yourself.也就是說(shuō)，如果你想成功，必須相信自己。答案14.Take Beijing for example15.That is to sayin my opinion，in my view，in my point of view，as far as I am concerned，as for me，personally，I think.等。九、表示觀點(diǎn)的過(guò)渡詞高考佳句As far as I am concerned，they stand for love，friendship and unity.(新課標(biāo)全國(guó)滿分作文)以我看來(lái)，他們代表愛(ài)、友誼和團(tuán)結(jié)。I think the picture conveys a message that everyone has his or her advantages.(北京高考滿分作文)我認(rèn)為這幅畫傳達(dá)了這樣的信息：人人都有自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)?！炯磿r(shí)演練】翻譯句子16.就我而言，我喜歡財(cái)富，但我更看重健康。_17.按照我的觀點(diǎn)，人們不應(yīng)該在公共場(chǎng)所抽煙。_答案16.As far as I am concerned，I love wealth，but I value health more.17.In my opinion，people shall not smoke in public places. in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a/one word，to sum up，all in all，on the whole，in general，generally speaking等。十、表示總結(jié)的過(guò)渡詞高考佳句In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful.(新課標(biāo)大綱全國(guó)滿分作文)總之，我的生活將會(huì)更加豐富多彩。All in all，traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.(山東高考滿分作文)總的來(lái)說(shuō)，旅游是充實(shí)自己、準(zhǔn)備迎接新的挑戰(zhàn)的最好的選擇。 【即時(shí)演練】完成句子18._，a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.總之，一個(gè)好市民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。19._，I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.總的來(lái)說(shuō)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自行車比摩托車更令人喜歡。答案18.In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief/To sum up19.On the whole/In general 用方框內(nèi)的過(guò)渡詞完成下面的短文Passage One單句跟蹤演練because of，first，second，as a result，therefore，finally，in additionIn the past twenty years or so，great advances have taken place in the world.1._，we have seen one of the most important advances in agriculturethe Green Revolution.2._ this advance we can now produce more food with less land.3._，industry has been made more and more automatic.4._，fewer and fewer people are needed to operate factories and offices. 5._， to explore the unknown world，more and more satellites have been launched and more and more astronauts have been sent into outer space.6._，new products of all kinds have been produced.7._，our life has become more and more comfortable.答案1.First2.Because of3.Second4.Therefore 5.In addition6.Finally7.As a result8._，online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life.9._，online shopping has many advantages.First，online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things.10._ searching a crowded store，we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like.11._，it is much faster for us to do shopping.We dont have to spend a lot of time going to shops.Third，we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time.Passage Twosecond，so，as a result，despite，on (the) one hand，whats worse，instead of，in aword，on the other hand，as is well-known12._，online shopping also has many disadvantages.The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are.13._，we can be cheated easily.14._，we cannot see the things in detail.15._，16._ the disadvantages of online shopping，I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.17._ we should develop it.答案8.As is well-known9.On the one hand 10.Instead of11.Second12.On the other hand 13.As a result14.Whats worse15.In a word 16.despite17.So 通知常用詞匯1._ n.通知2._ n.注意3.go on a _去觀光4.have a _野餐5.give a _做演講6.have a _ contest有一個(gè)演講比賽7.sign _ (for.)報(bào)名(參加)8.take an _ part in積極參加答案1.notice/announcement2.attention3.tour 4.pinic5.lecture6.speech7.up8.active1.段首常用語(yǔ)：(1)May I have/call your attention，please?(2)Attention，please，everybody!(3)I have an announcement to make.(4)I have something to tell you. 通知常用句式2.段中常用語(yǔ)：(1)There will be a talk this afternoon.(2)The Student Union has decided that.(3)We shall have a lecture on.(4)It has been decided that well pay a visit to.3.段尾常用語(yǔ)：(1)Please be there on time and dont be late.(2)I hope you can have a good time.(3)Thats all.Thank you.通知(notice)是上級(jí)對(duì)下級(jí)、組織對(duì)成員布置工作、傳達(dá)情況或告訴公眾某件事情等時(shí)使用的一種應(yīng)用文體，通常分為口頭通知和書面通知兩種。1.口頭通知是面對(duì)面地把信息傳達(dá)給對(duì)方。這種通知開(kāi)頭應(yīng)有稱呼語(yǔ)，正式場(chǎng)合用Ladies and gentlemen(女士們、先生們)，有時(shí)也可以用Boys and girls或Comrades and friends(同志們、朋友們)等。開(kāi)頭還常有提醒聽(tīng)眾注意的開(kāi)場(chǎng)白，如“Attention，please.”或“May I have your attention，please？”或“I have an announcement to make.”等；結(jié)尾常說(shuō)“Thats all.Thank you.”或“Thank you for listening.”等，以示禮貌。口頭通知中不必說(shuō)明發(fā)布通知的日期和發(fā)布通知的人或單位。通知常用寫作方法技巧與注意事項(xiàng) 2.寫書面通知時(shí)，應(yīng)明確寫出發(fā)出通知的單位和日期。一般情況下，書面通知的首行中央寫上Notice。通知的發(fā)布單位常寫在正文結(jié)束的右下角，也可以寫在Notice的上方或前面，發(fā)布通知的日期一般寫在正文的左下角(在落款的下一行)或?qū)懺谕ㄖ牡挠疑辖?在Notice的下一行)?？陬^通知和書面通知都是宣布即將發(fā)生的事情及其具體內(nèi)容，因而多用將來(lái)時(shí)，一般用祈使句來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)。通知的語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，條理清晰，準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤，特別是時(shí)間概念很重要，必須寫得十分明確，不容絲毫含糊。為了進(jìn)一步教育學(xué)生把寶貴的時(shí)間投入到學(xué)習(xí)中，合肥一中請(qǐng)了安徽大學(xué)的張凱教授進(jìn)行題為“珍惜時(shí)間、遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧”的講座。時(shí)間：本周六上午9點(diǎn)；地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校會(huì)議廳(meeting hall)。報(bào)告結(jié)束后將放映有關(guān)網(wǎng)吧的危害性的電影，之后組織同學(xué)們討論。假如你是班長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容用口頭形式通知全班同學(xué)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫。 【模擬訓(xùn)練】_【參考范文】Everyone，attention please.I have something to tell you.This Saturday，Professor Zhang Kai from Anhui University will be invited to give a lecture at 9：00 am.The topic of the lecture is Value Time，Keep Away From Internet Bars，for more and more students are addicted to games on the Internet.In addition，after the lecture a movie about the harm of Internet bars will be shown.And there will be a discussion after that.All the classmates are welcome to take an active part in it.Please arrive at the school meeting hall on time.Thats all.Thank you.