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短文改錯(cuò)及解析兩則發(fā)布時(shí)間：2005年6月17日 11時(shí)07分短文改錯(cuò)口訣                               動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)，                               注意形和副；                               非謂動(dòng)詞細(xì)辨別，                               習(xí)慣用法要記?。?#160;                              句子成分多分析，                               邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注。Id like to tell you anything about the problem of 1._pollution we are facing to. As we know, the factory 2._besides our school gives off heavy smoke all day 3._long. Very loud voices hurt our ears. Rubbish and 4._waste are thrown here or there. It also sends out 5._polluting water and poisonous gases. All this has 6._made great harm to the health and study of the 7._teachers and students. But as time goes on, a little 8._has done to change the situation. I dont think we can 9._study well until the problem is solved. We do hope 10._you will help and support us.1Something 2. 去掉to 3. beside 4. noises5and 6. polluted 7. made-done 8. 去掉 a 9. 加been 10. 正確Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school 81、_sports meet. It was holding on Oct.6, which was a 82、_fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers 83、_attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 84、_100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds 85、_and broke in the school record. The sports meet 86、_was really success. That was because we were 87、_all trying to do my best. 88、_Although I was not one of the winner, I 89、_was proud of that we had done. 90、_Looking forward to receiving your letter.Yours,Li Ping1、去掉more 2、holding改held 3、正確 4、attend改attending 5、finish改finished6、去掉in 7、success前加a 8、my改our 9、winner改winners 10、that改whatSarah and Janet have been friend ever since they 51._start school. They do everything together: study, read, 52._watch TV, play sports and listen music. If one has a 53._problem, the others is there to help. When Sarah was in 54._third grade, some of the other students were making fun 55._of her because of she was shy. Janet told the other students 56._to stop making fun of Sarah, and she helped Sarah overcome 57._her shyness. In the fifth grade, Janet has problems with maths 58._Sarah helped her with her homework and patient explained every 59._exercise to Janet. Finally Janet even got a A in the maths exam. 60._51. friendfriends 52. startstarted53. listenlisten to 54. othersother55. the third 56. because ofbecause57. 58. hashad59. patientpatiently 60. aanI never realized how useful the internet could be since I made 76 until friends online ! Its amazed to talk to people through computers . 77 amazing Obvious , I am careful when I meet these strangers . It is dangerous 78 Obviously to give out personal information like my address or my school, that I 79 which never do them . It all started in a chat room on the Web about Chinese 80 them history . It turns that many Westerners of my age share my interest in 81 out China as well ! It was so interesting that , soon enough , a whole hour 82 had past and I was still engaged in the conversation !We all promised 83 passed to meet again for other lively discussion . It is so easy to make online 84 another friends . Simply email or message a introduction with your name and 85 an a few hobbies or jokes . Maybe you could even meet another pen pal. One possible version Friendship is importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all76. our lives we cant live without friendship just like we cant77. live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on78. well with one another to go ahead under different kind of 79. difficulties in front of us. But real friendship is easy to80. come by, True friendship must be sincerely and be based81. on understand each other but not on benefits of each 82. other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us.83. By his advice we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore84. more friends we have, the better we can improve ourseIves.85. 76. important; 前加of 77. like-as 78. get 79. kinds 80. easy前加not 81. sincere 82. understanding 83. 正確 84. persueded 85. more前加the It was a long time since we last saw each other. You can 76. hardly imagine how I miss you. How are you getting with 77 .your first job? I remember you once tell me you were eager 78. to graduate and to become an English teacher. Now you must 79. have many first hand experience. How do you find your English 80. teaching?Is teaching kids English as interested as you expected 81. in college? And do your student enjoy your classroom teaching? 82. Anyway, I believe you must be very popular with the kids, for 83. you are a born teacher. Hope you great success in your work! Yes, 84. why not give me a call or come for get-together this weekend? 85. 76.wasisIt is+時(shí)間+since主did.77.gettingon/alongget along(on) with 與相處78.telltold由once可知，此處表“過(guò)去”。79.to becomebecome此處同graduate處于并列關(guān)系。80.manymuchexperience 作“經(jīng)驗(yàn)”講，是不可數(shù)名詞。81.interestedinterestingsth is interesting。此處主語(yǔ)是teaching kids English。82.studentstudents不只一個(gè)學(xué)生。83.84.HopeWishwish sb sth祝某人85.gettogetheragettogether是可數(shù)名詞，表“（非正式的）會(huì)議；聚會(huì)；聯(lián)歡會(huì)”，相當(dāng)于party。As is known by all , nowadays the Internet is 76_ _playing more and more important part in our daily 77_life . On it , we can only read news at home and abroad 78_ _but also get so much information as possible . 79_We are often send e-mails to our classmates or our 80_teachers or make telephone call to our families as well 81_as our friends. However , we can go to school on the net , 82_ _read different kinds of books and even teach myself English . 83_We can also enjoy music , watching sports and play computer 84_games on the net . We can do shopping even without leaving 85_our homes.76.by改為to 77. 在playing后加a 78. 在can后加not 79. so改為as80. 去掉are 81. 在call后加s 82. 把However改為Besides 83. 把myself改為ourselves 84. 把watching改為watch 85. Jack was used to be a healthy boy, but over a 76. wasyear ago, he get into the habit of eating lots of junk food 77. gotand snacks. Besides, he spent a lot of time lie on the sofa78._lying_and watching TV, and did little exercise. As the result, 79._a_he put on so much weight that he found that difficult to 80._it_climb the stairs. So Jack decidedchange this 81._to _healthy way of life. He began to have a balanced diet. 82._unhealthy_He also took part in various sports activities such as 83._swimming, skating or playing basketball. To peoples 84._and_surprised, he became as healthy as before months later. 85._surprise_During the summer holiday, I traveled Qingdao to visit my uncle here. The journey was very long and a little boring. And as soon as I arrived, I fell in love with this place. Its so beautiful a city that I can hardly find words to describe them. The seas is clean and the sky is blue. If you walk alongthe coast, you can feel the wind blowing on your face. The seais vast and sometimes you can see a boat or ship. You may also do some fishing, as far as it permitted. However, I think the drivers drive too much fast down the street. You can never be too carefully when crossing the street.71. _to_ _72. _there_73. _But_74. _it _75. _are_ _76. _ _77. _a_ _78. _long_ _79. _ much _80. _careful Senior citizens were permitted on the bus to travel 76._cheaply if she had a special card. Mrs. Matthews lived 77._in the country, but she went into town and buy food for 78._ the family. She always had to pay the full price for her ride. 79._ Then she reached the age sixty and got her senior 80._Citizens card. And when she used it for the first time 81._on the bus, it made her feel very older. 82._ The driver noticed that her feeling unhappy. 83._So after she had paid her money, he whispered, “Not 84._forget give your mothers card back to her if you see 85._her again.” Mrs. Matthews was very happy at this.76the a。on a bus意為“乘汽車”，此處非特指乘哪一輛汽車。77she they。they與前句的citizens一致。78and to或buy改為bought。改成目的狀語(yǔ)或使bought和went平行。79。80age后加上of。表示年齡。81And But。邏輯上為轉(zhuǎn)折。82older old。此處無(wú)比較的語(yǔ)境，而且前面是副詞very。83去掉that。notice sb. doing sth.為固定結(jié)構(gòu)。84Not Dont或Not Never。祈使句的否定式為dont或never加動(dòng)詞原形。85give前加上to。forget后接不定式to do sth. 作賓語(yǔ)。Dear friends,It is real a good chance to have met all of you here.76._We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the77. _English Club. Although we have been members for a short78. _period of time, we have made a great progress. That is79. _because we are all very much active and the activities are not 80. _only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers 81. _here work hard and try his best to make the activities82. _lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of83. _us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am 84. _looking forward to see all of you again in the near future! 85. _Dear friends,It is real a good chance to have met all of you here.76._really_We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the77. _ weekends_ _English Club. Although we have been members for a short78. _ _period of time, we have made a great progress. That is79. _a_because we are all very much active and the activities are not 80. _much_only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers 81. _but_here work hard and try his best to make the activities82. _their_lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of83. _interesting_us / greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am 84. _have_ _looking forward to see all of you again in the near future! 85. _ _seeing_ _Thank you.By midday the sun was very strong, Jim was so tired 1. to walk. There was no trees near the road, so he rested 2. under a big rock. After drinking some water, he took his 3. shirt, lying down on the ground and fell asleep at once 4. He was very tired that he didnt wake up until the evening. 5. He was just about to get up while he felt something moving 6. near his feet. He looked up and saw a long black snake. 7. Jim was so frightening that he didnt dare to move. The 8. snake began to crawl across his legs. It crawled on and 9. on until it was disappeared under the rocks, Jim jumped 10. to his feet, picked up his shirt and ran down the road.Keys: 1.sotoo, 2.waswere, 3.took后加off, 4.lyinglay, 5.veryso, 6. while when, 7.updown, 8.frighteningfrightened, 9.正確 10.去掉was.Yesterday afternoon, when I walked out the1. _school, the weather was changed. Dark clouds were2. _gathering together. I began to feel worried because3. _I didnt have either my raincoat and my umbrella with4. _me. It soon started to rain. Just as I was hurrying5. _home, I heard anyone calling me from behind. I turned6. _round and saw it was Li Ping. He had umbrella with him7. _and offer to share it with me. He walked all the way8. _with me to my home. With Le Pings help, I would have got 9. _wet through. How thankfully I was to his kindness!10. _1. out -of 2. 去掉was 3. 去掉together 4. andor 5. 6. anyonesomeone7. umbrellaan 8. offeroffered 9. WithWithout 10. thankfullythankfulRadio and television are very useful on the 1. _world. They may be seen everywhere. Thousands 2._and thousands people watch TV. Perhaps even more 3. _people listen to radio. Television, of course, is4. _more useful than radio. On TV we can see that is 5. _happening around us. However, radio is no disappeared,6. _it is still with us. It can be done very small. It 7. _is easy to take. You can put one in your pocket8. _and listen to in the bus or on your bike when9. _you go to work. And radio is much more cheaper10. _ than television.1 onin 2 maycan 3 thousandsof 4 radio the 5 thatwhat 6 disappeareddisappearing 7 donemade 8 9 toit 10Li Hua won the first place in our city in this year College 56 Entrance Exam, and she has admitted to Beijing University. As a57 good friend of her, Id like to talk about her study in the school. 58 First of all, she was very confident and believe in herself. She was 59 determined to go to Beijing University but she was sure she could60 manage. Whats more, she had a carefully plan about what to do 61 every day. She had formed a good habit of study. For an example, 62 she always put off what she should do today till tomorrow and 63 seldom did she stay up late at night . She also pleased to help others. 64 As a result of which, all the teachers and students liked her. 65 56yearyears 57has后加been 58herhers59believebelieved 60butand 61carefullycareful62去掉an 63alwaysnever 64She后加was65whichthatLast week, my uncle went to a store to buy a tie.The salesman showed him a few tie, but he had no 76._idea what one would suit him. At last, he picked 77._out a brown one, thinking about that it might match 78._his new shirt well. On his way home, he is 79._rather exciting. However, after he got home, tried 80._the tie in and looked at it this way and that, 81._his excitement was over. He found it was not 82._so nice to look at home than it was in the store. 83._Know that he couldnt change it in the store, he 84._decided he had better hide in the cupboard for some time. 85._ 76. tie-ties 77. what-which 78. 去掉about 79. is-was 80. exciting-excited 81. in-on 82. 正確 83. than-as 84. know-knowing 85. 在hide后加 itDear Kang Li,I havent heard you for a long time. How 1._are you? I had just finished the exams. Now Im 2._glad I have time to write for you. Our teacher 3._tells us that China is a big country has the 4._most population in the world. Its on the other 5._side of the world. Now the sun is shining bright 6._here and perhaps youre sleeping in the dark 7._night . I wish to know anything more about the 8._Chinese way of living. I wonder at if you can 9._tell me about it in next letter. Please write soon. 10._76. heard后加 from  77. had-have           78. for-to      79. has前加that 或which80. most-largest 81. bright-brightly  82. and-but 83. anything-something84. 去掉at       85. When I think about the people whom have influenced 1._me most in life, my parents, my brother or some 2._friends come to mind From my young age through 3._the beginning of my adult lives my parents have been 4._the biggest of influence on me. They were taught 5._me everything I needed to know about take care of myself. 6._They taught me what to work, speak, and 7._most important gave my first morals. Everything I 8._started with my parents. Not only has my parents 9._and friends influenced me, also my role-models. 10._76. whomwho   77. orand   78.     79. liveslife  80. were taughttaught   81. taketaking82. whathow   83. importantimportantly   84. hashave   85. alsobut alsoDear editor,In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. 1._Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. In 2._order to build house and grow more crops, people cut down 3._ more and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was 4._almost destroyed. Gradually the green hills have changed into 5._wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from 6._which we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people should 7._realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. 8._Whats more, they should take good care of the forests and plant 9._trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions. 10._76.去掉was77.去掉in78.househouses79.WithAs或went going80.81.struckstrike 82.HoweverSo83.terriblyterrible  84.theywe85.instead后加ofMy birthday was coming. Father asked me how I would 76_what_want for my birthday present. I told him I need no present Just 77_needed_a party. Father said OK, When I recited the name of my seven 78_names_friends I planned to invite, he wondered why his guest list didn t 79_my_include my new neighbor Tom. I told him I didn' t like to be with 80_right_a person whom I'm not familiar with. And Father insisted that I 81_But_seize the chance to make new friends. In my birthday, Tom 82_On_came besides my seven friends. Very quick we became good 83_quickly_friends. From this I realized give others a chance means giving 84_giving_myself a chance. It was really unforgettable birthday.85_an_1. 2006高考題： An