高考英語大一輪復習 第3部分 寫作基礎訓練 七 提升檔次的非謂語動詞及建議信課件 新人教版

學案七提升檔次的非謂語動詞及建議信學案七提升檔次的非謂語動詞及建議信眾所周知，作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡單句會讓人覺得單調乏味，句子與句子之間的關系顯得松散；而文章中過多地出現(xiàn)復合句又顯得累贅，讀起來費勁。恰當?shù)剡\用非謂語動詞不僅使句型多樣，而且使習作結構緊湊。寫作運用探究一、非謂語動詞的分類1.不定式高考佳句Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.(2016全國，標準范文)我抱歉地說，我不能和你一起在星期五下午去書店了。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.(2015福建，標準范文)我們應當通過學習盡力提升自己，為未來做好準備。2.動名詞高考佳句Doing the same sports on the playground gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship.(2016天津，標準范文)在操場上做同樣的運動給了我們機會促進我們的友誼。Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.質疑能夠尋求到答案。(2015湖北，滿分作文)3.現(xiàn)在分詞高考佳句A week before Earth Day，posters were put up around our school，calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.(2016北京，標準范文)一周前的世界地球日我們的學校張貼了海報，呼吁我們參加一個綠色的地球的行動。In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.(2015福建，標準范文)在這幅畫中，我們可以看到一個穿著破舊衣服的男孩，坐在一張放著一摞書的舊木桌旁。 4.過去分詞高考佳句It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.(2015全國，標準范文)它刊登了由外國朋友寫的有關他們國家的文章。Compared with the escaped driver，I am proud of what I did.(2014湖北，滿分作文)與那些逃逸的司機相比，我為自己做的事感到自豪?！炯磿r演練】完成句子1._，we are all filled with joy and cheer.(2014浙江，滿分作文)聽說你將成為我們的一名新成員，我們心里充滿了興奮和快樂。2.Another suggestion is _.(2015四川，滿分作文)還有一項建議是練習說的能力。3.Hopefully，these books will help the students _.(2015天津，滿分作文)讓人滿懷希望的是，這些書籍將有助于學生更好地了解和學習漢語。 4._ your temper in this way can avoid hurting others.(2014安徽，滿分作文)用這種方式釋放自己的情緒能避免傷害別人。5._，we will go for an outing tomorrow.天氣允許的話，我們明天去郊游。答案1.Hearing youll be a new member of us2.to practice speaking3.(to) know and learn Chinese better 4.Letting out5.Weather permitting 寫作時，我們可以利用非謂語動詞對兩個簡單句進行轉換，使其成為較高級的表達方式。轉換時可采用“三步法”：第一步：寫出兩個簡單句。第二步：找準兩個簡單句的對接點，讓一個句子作為主干，另一個句子用非謂語動詞進行改寫。第三步：判斷應用何種非謂語動詞，把握好時態(tài)和語態(tài)，最后連接起來。二、運用非謂語動詞轉換簡單句示例第一步：寫出兩個簡單句。In the newspaper of our school there is a column called “Foreign Culture”.It aims to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.第二步：讓句作主句，用非謂語動詞改寫句。第三步：讓句作定語，由于其動詞aim與主語it之間為主謂關系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作定語。In the newspaper of our school there is a column called “Foreign Culture”， aiming to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.(2015全國，滿分作文)【即時演練】用非謂語動詞進行句型轉換6.All the people here like the novel.It is written by Tom.(用過去分詞作定語)_7.The boy came to school late again.This made the teacher very angry.(用動名詞作主語)_8.The boys were making the most of time.They wanted to finish the work earlier.(用不定式作目的狀語)_答案6.All the people here like the novel written by Tom.7.The boys coming to school late again made the teacher very angry.8.The boys were making the most of time so as to finish the work earlier. 用非謂語動詞轉換復合句比轉換簡單句要容易一些，因為需轉換的一般是從句部分，這時只需要判斷用何種非謂語動詞，再把握好時態(tài)和語態(tài)即可，所以只需兩步。三、運用非謂語動詞轉換復合句示例第一步：寫出復合句。Since you have realized that your time is limited，youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.第二步：把since引導的原因狀語從句轉換為非謂語動詞，realize與you之間為主謂關系，且表示完成，故用現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式作狀語。Having realized that your time is limited，youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.(2014安徽，滿分作文)【即時演練】用非謂語動詞進行句型轉換9.When we are faced with difficulties，we need friends to give us comfort and help._，we need friends to give us comfort and help.10.When I saw a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back._，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.11.After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner._，we strongly desired to be the winner. 答案9.Faced with difficulties10.Seeing a car running towards her11.Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months 用非謂語動詞進行句型轉換1.We were touched by the teachers words.We decided to work hard._2.I feel quite sorry for that.I begin to think about what to do to help._3.Because I was amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good._單句跟蹤演練4.Because I had paid a visit to the place，I will go somewhere else this year to spend my summer vacation._5.As the society develops rapidly，its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer._答案1.Touched by the teachers words，we decided to work hard.2.Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help.3.Amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.4.Having paid a visit to the place，I will go somewhere else this year to spend my summer vacation.5.With the society developing rapidly，its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer. 建議信常用詞匯1._ adj.有益的2._ adj.明智的3._ n.建議4._ v.推薦5._ adj.實用的6._ v.關心；涉及7.may/might _ well不妨8.make a _重要9.make _ of理解10.with regard _/as for/as to關于答案1.beneficial2.advisable3.proposal/suggestion/advice4.recommend5.practical6.concern 7.as8.difference9.sense10.to 1.段首常用語：(1)I am writing to express my views concerning.(2)You have asked for my advice about.and I will try to make some suggestions.建議信常用句式2.表達建議常用語：(1)I think the most suitable.for you is.(2)I would like to suggest that.(3)Youd better./Its better to.(4)As far as I am concerned./In my opinion.(5)For one thing.；for another.(6)If I were you，I would.(7)It seems to me that you could.3.段尾常用語：(1)I think it would be more beneficial if you could.(2)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.(3)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/ useful/helpful.(4)I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 建議信是寫信人向收信人對某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信可能是寫給個人，也可能是寫給某個組織或機構。信的內容要包括寫信的原因，建議的內容，提出建議的理由。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。具體寫作步驟一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly，secondly，thirdly或to begin/start with，then，later，last but not least等依次陳述建議，具體為：建議信常用方法技巧與注意事項第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。第二段：應該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點，然后指出需要改進的地方或針對具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬不要讓對方認為是投訴，而不是提建議。第三段：對提出的建議進行總結。要注意有禮貌，使對方容易接受。假定你是李海，你的堂兄李華在國外學習，你們經常用英文通信。他即將完成學業(yè)，不久前來信就是否回國工作征求你的意見。請根據(jù)下列提示回信：1.建議他回國；2.你的理由是：(1)學有所用，就業(yè)容易；(2)照顧父母。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.行文應連貫，內容應完整；3.開頭語與落款已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。【模擬訓練】Dear Li Hua，Im very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago._Yours，Li Hai【參考范文】Dear Li Hua，Im very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.Ive been thinking about the question you asked me.In my opinion，you should come back after you finish your studies abroad.For one reason，what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China.It will be quite easy for you to find a good job.In fact，I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you.For another reason，I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old.Therefore，I think its a good idea for you to return.So what are you waiting for?Best wishes.Yours，Li Hai