高考英語(yǔ)大一輪復(fù)習(xí) 第3部分 寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練 八 吸引眼球的高級(jí)詞匯與復(fù)雜句式及演講致辭課件 新人教版

學(xué)案八吸引眼球的高級(jí)詞匯與學(xué)案八吸引眼球的高級(jí)詞匯與復(fù)雜句式及演講復(fù)雜句式及演講/致辭致辭寫(xiě)作時(shí)，如果僅局限在把內(nèi)容交代清楚這一層次，只選用一些普通的詞，或一律使用簡(jiǎn)單句平鋪直敘，那么習(xí)作就會(huì)顯得呆板、單調(diào)，沒(méi)有可讀性。要想寫(xiě)出高分作文，不僅要把要求表述清楚，而且還要嘗試使用高級(jí)詞匯與復(fù)雜句式。如能運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，哪怕只用上一、兩處，也會(huì)為習(xí)作增添色彩，給閱卷老師留下深刻的印象。寫(xiě)作運(yùn)用探究1.標(biāo)新立異恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┨N(yùn)含感情色彩或其他考生不容易想到的高級(jí)詞匯，會(huì)彰顯自己的水平。高考佳句Ill thank you if you think about my suggestion.Ill appreciate it if you take my suggestion into consideration. (福建高考滿(mǎn)分作文)一、運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯三原則I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is important for me，so I didnt reply to you without delay.I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is vital for me，so I didnt reply to you without delay.(山東高考滿(mǎn)分作文)As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.(遼寧高考標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文)Well try our best to improve the working conditions.Well spare no effort to promote the working conditions.(山東高考標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文) 2.短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先寫(xiě)作中，要想寫(xiě)出“亮點(diǎn)”就要注意挖掘自己現(xiàn)存的詞匯潛力，多使用詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替一些單詞，會(huì)使短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)更有力度，增添文采。高考佳句To achieve ones dream，one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.To achieve ones dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.(北京高考滿(mǎn)分作文)Whats more，we can pour out the troubles we face，and release our pressure from different aspects.Whats more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.(重慶高考滿(mǎn)分作文)To tell you the truth，I dont really like your new novel.To tell you the truth，I really show no interest in your new novel.(湖南高考滿(mǎn)分作文)3.手法多樣在表達(dá)相同或相近的意思時(shí)，要盡量避免過(guò)多地使用同一個(gè)單詞，用其他相應(yīng)的詞或短語(yǔ)來(lái)代替，這樣能讓閱卷老師感覺(jué)到你詞匯量豐富。實(shí)在找不到，可以變更說(shuō)法，“曲徑通幽”或許會(huì)有更好的效果。高考佳句I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. (江西高考滿(mǎn)分作文)It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from the way of education of China.It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from that of China.(湖北高考滿(mǎn)分作文) 【即時(shí)演練】用較高級(jí)詞匯代替黑體的單詞或短語(yǔ)1.We all have the same opportunity.2.More and more visitors have been attracted to this place.3.The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.4.Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.5.I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.6.Would you please help me to turn down the radio?答案1.possess2.An increasing number of3.challenging4.promote5.put up with6.do me a favor 二、運(yùn)用高級(jí)句式的七大策略1.運(yùn)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，重點(diǎn)更鮮明高考佳句We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.(廣東高考書(shū)面表達(dá))Im delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to selecting the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.Im delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to selecting the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.(上海高考滿(mǎn)分作文)2.運(yùn)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句，重點(diǎn)更突出高考佳句His great efforts helped me out of the trouble.It was his great efforts that helped me out of the trouble.(安徽高考滿(mǎn)分作文)Without hesitation，I decided to follow them and we had lots of fun that day.Without hesitation，I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day.(2015浙江，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文)Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.Its our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.(重慶高考滿(mǎn)分作文) 3.運(yùn)用倒裝句，語(yǔ)言更活潑高考佳句Books are not only shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.Not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.(2015重慶，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文)I was so excited that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.(2014福建，滿(mǎn)分作文)The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(福建高考滿(mǎn)分作文)4.運(yùn)用省略句，行文更簡(jiǎn)潔高考佳句Maybe it is a better idea to take outdoor activities when you feel bad.Maybe it is a better idea to take outdoor activities when feeling bad.(2014安徽，滿(mǎn)分作文)Are you looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! Itll be held from 15：00 to 17：00.Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! Itll be held from 15：00 to 17：00.(2014遼寧，滿(mǎn)分作文)As it is scheduled，English Talent Show will be held today.As scheduled，English Talent Show will be held today.(2014陜西，滿(mǎn)分作文)Although they were faced with many problems，they didnt lose heart.Although faced with many problems，they didnt lose heart.(山東高考滿(mǎn)分作文)5.運(yùn)用感嘆句，感情更強(qiáng)烈高考佳句From the expression on the face，I knew my math teacher was surprised.What a surprised expression was on my math teachers face！(2015湖南，滿(mǎn)分作文)It is a very splendid moment.How splendid a moment it is！(遼寧高考滿(mǎn)分作文)6.運(yùn)用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)、分詞(短語(yǔ))等，結(jié)構(gòu)更簡(jiǎn)明高考佳句Our school lies at the foot of a mountain，there is a river flowing in front of it.At the foot of a mountain lies our school，with a river flowing in front of it.(北京高考滿(mǎn)分作文)The teacher came into the lecture hall，many students followed him.The teacher came into the lecture hall，followed by many students.(廣東高考滿(mǎn)分作文)I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.But he didnt hear me and rode away.After picking up the case，I shouted at the man loudly，but he rode too fast to hear me.(湖南高考滿(mǎn)分作文) 7.運(yùn)用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，表達(dá)更傳神高考佳句I missed being hit by the car with your help.Without your help，I would have been hit by the car.(安徽高考滿(mǎn)分作文)It is high time for both local government and residents to take effective measures.It is high time that both local government and residents took effective measures.(福建高考滿(mǎn)分作文)8.運(yùn)用復(fù)合句，句式更多變高考佳句To our surprise，the little girl knows so many things.What surprised us most is that the little girl knows so many things.(重慶高考滿(mǎn)分作文)It was quite an experience for both of us，and I will never forget it for the rest of my life.It was quite an experience for both of us，which Ill never forget for the rest of my life.(陜西高考滿(mǎn)分作文)9.運(yùn)用it句式，表達(dá)更豐富高考佳句Personally，drinking plenty of boiled water every day is necessary.I think it necessary that we should drink plenty of boiled water every day.(陜西高考滿(mǎn)分作文)我認(rèn)為我們每天喝大量的開(kāi)水是必要的。Whats worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think obeying traffic rules is vital.Whats worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.(2015江蘇，滿(mǎn)分作文)更糟糕的是，一些司機(jī)，騎自行車(chē)者和行人沒(méi)有認(rèn)識(shí)到交通規(guī)則的重要性。You should provide some money to fund our program，as well as offer us some practical suggestions.Thats our desire.Its our desire that you should provide some money to fund our program，as well as offer us some practical suggestions.(重慶高考滿(mǎn)分作文)我們渴望你能為我們的項(xiàng)目提供一些資金，還能提供一些實(shí)用的建議?！炯磿r(shí)演練】按要求轉(zhuǎn)換下列句子7.Above all，we must do something to stop pollution.(用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài))_8.I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(用強(qiáng)調(diào)句)_9.We dont know its value until we lose health.(用倒裝句)_10.If it isnt well organized，the meeting will be a failure.(用省略句)_11.We had a very good time with the peasants that day.(用感嘆句)_12.Because there was too much noise，I couldnt go on studying.(用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))_答案7.Above all，something must be done to stop pollution.8.It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.9.Not until we lose health do we know its value.10.If not well organized，the meeting will be a failure.11.What a good time we had with the peasants that day!12.With the noise going on，I couldnt go on studying.請(qǐng)用高級(jí)詞匯替換下列句子中的畫(huà)線部分1.He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.2.Developing very quickly，the Internet causes the breakdown of face-to-face communication.3.When you are bored with the people sometimes，youd better find a quiet place，listening to some classical music.4.He didnt listen to what I said in the class.單句跟蹤演練5.Suddenly I thought of an idea that someone had broken into my house.6.As soon as he arrived，he began his research.答案1.determined/made up his mind2.gives rise to 3.fed up with4.turned a deaf ear to5.I came up with an idea/an idea occurred to me6.On/Upon his arrival .按要求轉(zhuǎn)換下列句子1.I didnt take his advice，so I failed in the exam.(用虛擬語(yǔ)氣)_2.If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.(用省略句)_3.We can achieve our goal in this way.(用倒裝句)_4.Much to our surprise，Mary failed in the final exam.(用名詞性從句)_5.Because the weather was good，our journey was comfortable.(用短語(yǔ)代替從句)_6.If you go through the gate，youll find the entrance to Bear Country.(用并列句)_答案1.If I had taken his advice，I wouldnt have failed in the exam.2.If so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.3.Only in this way can we achieve our goal.4.What surprised us most is that Mary failed in the final exam.5.Thanks to the good weather，our journey was comfortable.6.Go through the gate，and youll find the entrance to Bear Country. .根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示完成句子1._ if you could teach me how to use the computer.(陜西高考滿(mǎn)分作文)如果你能教我如何用電腦，我將不勝感激。2._ I wont believe him. (安徽高考滿(mǎn)分作文)無(wú)論他說(shuō)什么，我都不會(huì)相信他了。3._，we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruits，sharing our stories.(遼寧高考滿(mǎn)分作文)美麗的月亮高掛在天空，我們坐在一起吃著月餅和水果，一塊分享我們的故事。4._ about his condition. (湖北高考滿(mǎn)分作文) 我是多么擔(dān)心他的境況呀！ 5._，they didnt lose heart.(江蘇高考滿(mǎn)分作文)雖然面對(duì)那么多的問(wèn)題，他們并沒(méi)有灰心喪氣。6._ words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.(湖北高考標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文)直到那時(shí)我才意識(shí)到話語(yǔ)在積極和消極這兩種方式上是很有力量的。7.From this experience，I realized that _.(2014新課標(biāo)全國(guó)，滿(mǎn)分作文)從這次經(jīng)歷，我意識(shí)到是熱情導(dǎo)致了我的成功。8._ to solve the problem as soon as possible.應(yīng)當(dāng)盡快采取措施來(lái)解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。(廣東高考標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文) 答案1.Id appreciate it2.Whatever/No matter what he says3.With the beautiful moon up in the sky 4.How worried I am5.Although/Though faced with so many problems6.Not until then did I realize7.it was enthusiasm that led to my success8.Effective measures should be taken 演講/致辭常用詞匯1._ n.機(jī)會(huì)2._ v.呼吁3._ v.促進(jìn)4._ n.榮幸5._ together聚會(huì)6.keep sb _陪伴某人7._ behalf of 代表8._ up 歡呼答案1.opportunity/chance2.appeal3.promote pany7.on8.cheer 1.歡迎辭常用語(yǔ)：(1)We are glad to have a chance to get together with.(2)We feel greatly honoured to have a chance to be with.(3)Lets give our warm welcome to.(4)Thank you for your accepting our invitation to come to.(5)First of all，allow me on behalf of sb to do sth(6)Now let us ask sb to speak to us.演講/致辭常用句式2.歡送辭常用語(yǔ)：(1)In bidding farewell to sb.(2)To convey our profound friendship to sb.(3)To convey our best regards and respects to sb.(4)To wish sb a pleasant journey home and good health.(5)May the friendship between.be further developed!演講稿是演講者在一定的場(chǎng)合，面對(duì)特定的對(duì)象，為了達(dá)到某種目的而采取的表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)的文字，是高考中較為常見(jiàn)的應(yīng)用文。演講/致辭常用寫(xiě)作方法技巧與注意事項(xiàng) 主要內(nèi)容一般說(shuō)來(lái)，演講稿包括歡迎(送)性和宣讀性?xún)煞N類(lèi)型。前者屬于在正式場(chǎng)合接待或歡送客人時(shí)，主人為了表達(dá)歡迎、感謝或祝愿而進(jìn)行的熱情友好的發(fā)言。此類(lèi)發(fā)言稿通常包含禮節(jié)性語(yǔ)言和有關(guān)的人物或事情(如旅游路線、學(xué)校概況等)的情況介紹兩部分內(nèi)容。后者屬于向聽(tīng)眾講述一些道理，其目的在于希望對(duì)方接受自己的見(jiàn)解。此類(lèi)發(fā)言稿通常綜合了說(shuō)明、議論、敘述等寫(xiě)作手法。演講稿是介紹性說(shuō)明文，在語(yǔ)言使用上一定要準(zhǔn)確簡(jiǎn)明、通俗易懂、層次清楚、條理分明。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意用詞得體，符合場(chǎng)合和語(yǔ)境。寫(xiě)作技巧1.文章結(jié)構(gòu)：演講稿第一段側(cè)重介紹事情的發(fā)生、發(fā)展和結(jié)局。第二段應(yīng)緊扣主題表示歡迎、歡送、號(hào)召、建議、個(gè)人看法等。2.語(yǔ)言直白簡(jiǎn)潔。演講稿是直接面向聽(tīng)眾的，所以我們?cè)谡Z(yǔ)言的選擇上要簡(jiǎn)短，盡可能多使用簡(jiǎn)單句，聽(tīng)眾一聽(tīng)就能聽(tīng)懂，當(dāng)然，一些經(jīng)典的長(zhǎng)句我們也可以用在文中。3.觀點(diǎn)鮮明，感情真摯。演講稿觀點(diǎn)鮮明，顯示著說(shuō)話者對(duì)一種理性認(rèn)識(shí)的肯定，也顯示著說(shuō)話者對(duì)客觀事物見(jiàn)解的透徹程度，能給人以可信性和可靠感，感情真摯才能打動(dòng)人，引起聽(tīng)眾的共鳴。假設(shè)你正在參加全省中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你針對(duì)有些父母經(jīng)常翻看孩子日記或書(shū)包這一現(xiàn)象，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，陳述你的觀點(diǎn)。認(rèn)為同學(xué)們不必為此苦惱；希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷；建議與父母進(jìn)行交流和溝通。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！灸M訓(xùn)練】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，_Thank you!【參考范文】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，Some of us are having problems with our parents，as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it，but theres no need to feel too sad.Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure were not getting into any trouble.They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same.Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is：Tell them we want them to trust us as much as wed like to trust them.If you dont think you can talk to them，write them a letter and leave it lying aroundthey are bound to read it.Thank you！