2018年中考英語試題分項版解析匯編（第01期）專題13 書面表達（含解析）

專題13 書面表達1.【2018年江西中考】 假如國外中學生來你校進行為期一周的交流學習,期間計劃參加一項中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題活動,為此向你們征求活動方案(plan)請你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息提示,寫一篇英語短文,介紹你提供的活動方案,內(nèi)容包括:茶或者民樂介紹,活動安排以及與之相關(guān)的理由。要求:1.從表格中任選一個主題,合理安排活動;2.短文條理清楚,行文連貫,內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮;3.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名;4.詞數(shù)不少于80,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Chinese CultureIntroductionScheduleReasonsTeaPast and presentTime:_Places: tea farm, tea houseActivities:1. tea processing2. a tea art performanceFolk MusicMusic piecesandtraditional instrumentsTime:_Places: music room, school hallActivities:1. take musical instrument classes2. attend a folk music concertHello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I'd like to introduce _Hope you will have a good time.【答案】Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I'd like to introduce tea. It has a long history. It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.On Saturday morning, you are going to visit a big farm where you can learn about tea processing. On Saturday afternoon, you are going to a tea house after dinner where you can watch a tea art performance.Why do we plan a visit to a tea house for you? Because you can lean a lot more about tea culture there. You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets, You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.Hope you will have a good time.點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。2.【2018年內(nèi)蒙古包頭市中考】假設你是李華,請給你們的美籍教師Bob寫一封電子郵件,向他簡要介紹你校即將舉辦的英語文化節(jié)( English Culture Festival),邀請他參加本次活動,并請他在節(jié)目最后做一個關(guān)于如何學好英語的講座。郵件還應包括以下內(nèi)容:1.活動時間:本周五下午14:30-17:30;2.活動地點:報告廳( Lecture Hall);3活動內(nèi)容:學生演唱英文歌曲注意:1.詞數(shù)90左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實人名、地名等內(nèi)容。Dear Bob,How is it going?_Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Bob,How is it going?An English Culture Festival will be held in our school. All of us students do hope that you could come and join us.The activity will begin in the Lecture Hall at 14: 30 this Friday ant last about 3 hours. We've prepared many programs for it, for example, English songs. What's more, some students will perform plays in English.As you know, many students in our school have difficulty in learning English well. So when the performance finishes, it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li hua點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可運用適當?shù)倪B詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。 3.【2018年山東德州市中考】樹立自我保護意識，健康快樂地成長是每個青少年的必修課。下面是某地關(guān)心下一代工作委員會為青少年編寫的青少年自我保護健康成長所手冊的部分內(nèi)容。作為一名中學生，寫一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：陳樹你是怎樣踐行手冊中提及的三條事項的；補充至少一條你認為重要的其他事項。要求：1.語言通順，要點齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學校名稱；3.80100詞，文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.First, I always obey the traffic rules In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.【答案】Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I wont go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because its safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. Its important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other.Whats more, Id like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, its dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or river. So dont do that.In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.亮點說明：1. 本文書寫的內(nèi)容完整、條理清楚。2. 在文中使用了First，Second，Third等詞匯，使文章層次分明。易于理解。3. 作者所加的一條很好，防溺水，是當今安全隱患最大的。同時還運用了句型Its dangerous for us to do sth. 使文章增色不少。因此本文為上等之作。4.【2018年山東濟寧地區(qū)中考】某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學生征文，標題為“ A time when I made someone happy”，請你寫一篇英文稿件，內(nèi)容需包括以下要點:1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意：1詞數(shù)：100左右（題目不計入總詞數(shù)）。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)可能透考生真實身份的任何信息?！敬鸢浮縇ast summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫作分析：這是一篇給定標題的材料作文，需要逐條完成要點問題的回答，描述一次自己讓別人開心快樂的經(jīng)歷，是一篇記敘文，首先要讀懂5個問題，其次要用恰當?shù)恼Z言和銜接手段把這五個問題的回答聯(lián)系在一起，變成一篇短文，同時也要注意在描述過去的故事的時候要正確運用過去時態(tài)。5.【2018年山東聊城地區(qū)中考】假如你要競選你班的體育委員，請你用英語進行競選演講。演講的主要內(nèi)容包括：1自己喜歡體育，身體健康；2擅長球類運動，尤其是足球和籃球；3可以傳授運動技藝，助大家比賽取得最佳成績。注意：1詞數(shù)：80左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3演講內(nèi)容中不得出現(xiàn)真實的學校和個人名字；4演講的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。I want to be the PE monitor. _【答案】I want to be the PE monitor. I enjoy sport, and I can run very fast. Im really fit and healthy. Just watch me in the playground between lessons! I play most ball games well. But Im really good at football, and I play basketball in the school team. Because I have a lot of good playing skills. I usually get the best score in every match. I can teach you some if you like. Choose me for the PE monitor and you can get the best score too!6.【2018年山東省青島】現(xiàn)在，中學生在校內(nèi)能保證一定時間的運動量，但在校外普遍缺少運動甚至不運動。請就 此現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文，談談你的看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 缺少運動甚至不運動的原因；2. 缺少運動甚至不運動對學生的影響；3. 針對這種現(xiàn)象提出合理的改善建議。要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80100（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名。 參考詞匯：be short of 缺少Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now 【答案】Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now.They think doing exercise can affect their studies.Therefore they have less time to study.Doing sports is good for their health. A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit. In the school, students are forced to take exercise in the PE class, they need to join certain activities.In this way, students live in a healthy lifestyle, they wont get sick easily.But after they leaving school, no one forces them to do so, so they are lazy to take exercise so that their bodies get weaker.I think students should take exercise every day outside the school.In a word, exercise is helpful, important and absolutely necessary.7.【2018年山東省威海市】 “照鏡子”是生活中的平常事，以生活為鏡，可以照出現(xiàn)實中真實的自己。請以“Me in the mirror”為題，寫一篇80詞以上的英語短文。圍繞自己最突出的一至兩個優(yōu)點和缺點，重點談談在未來的生活和學習中如何揚長避短、完善自我，成長為更好的自己。要求：1.題目已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.觀點正確、條理清晰、表達流暢；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和學校名稱?！敬鸢浮縈e in the mirrorLooking at myself in the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and I'm always ready to help them. So I'm very popular in my school. But I have a big problem, I'm less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class. In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed.When I go to senior high school I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends. I hope we can help each other and learn from each other. I will make a good study resolution and try my best to go for it. I decide to have a healthier lifestyle. I'll spend more time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. What's more, I will read more books and master good leaning methods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me.【高分句型一】I'm less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class. 我對功課不太感興趣，上課也不能集中精力。be interested in短語的使用，使文章增色不少?！靖叻志湫投縄n my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed. 業(yè)余時間，我花太多的時間在電腦游戲上，所以我沒有取得好成績，這使我的父母很失望。which make my parents disappointed. 是由which引導的定語從句。【高分句型三】I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. 我將集中精力在課堂上，認真完成我的學習任務。說明作者在后來認識到了錯誤，而努力學習。8.【2018年陜西省中考】假如你是李華,上周日你獨自在家照看你五歲的妹妹Nana,請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容,寫一篇短文?；顒由衔缰v故事，唱歌，中午煮面（cook noodles），休息（have a rest），下午玩游戲，看動畫片（watch cartoons）感受要求:1.參考表格內(nèi)容,可適當發(fā)揮;2.語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;3.文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4.詞數(shù):不少于70詞。(開頭已給出但不計入總詞數(shù)。)Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home._【答案】Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.寫作亮點：善于分段，可以用首段進行概括性描述，闡明背景（my parents were not at home）。第二段可以進一步開始細節(jié)描述。涉及到的短語有told her many funny stories，sang and danced happily，taught her to speak a few simple English words，cooked noodles，had a rest等等，使用短語的時候也有亮點，能夠通過副詞happily或者介詞短語with tomatoes and eggs讓動詞短語的含義更加豐富。文章最后收尾簡潔，用一句話點出了自己的感受，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 9.【2018年四川成都市】 假如你是圖中女孩，你與家人于4月29日共度周日。請根據(jù)圖中所示寫一篇英文日記，講述你當天所見和所做之事。注意：1.日記應包含圖中所有信息2.日記中須寫出當天的一些感受3.日記應格式正確,語句通順,句式多樣4詞數(shù):100左右。參考詞匯:城堡 castle螃蟹crab【答案】Sunny Sunday,April 29(th)Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. a boat sailed itself in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.10.【2018年四川廣安市中考】假設下周你所在的班將開展為期一周的研學活動。請根據(jù)下面的提示用英語寫一則通知告知全班同學。陽光農(nóng)場之旅活動時間一周活動地點陽光農(nóng)場活動內(nèi)容1.幫助清理農(nóng)場垃圾,搞好農(nóng)場衛(wèi)生;2.學習種菜、植樹;3.野餐,采摘水果(蘋果,梨)安全 tips不要到河里游泳,不要單獨行動。要求:1.字跡工整,書寫規(guī)范,包含全部要點,適當發(fā)揮;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的學校、班級名稱;3.80詞左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);4.請將書面表達內(nèi)容寫在答題卡上相應的位置。參考詞匯: rubbish(垃圾) clear away(清理) Sunshine Farm(陽光農(nóng)場)Hello, everyone,May I have your attention, please?_That's all Thank you!【答案】Hello, everyone,May I have your attention, please?Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm. The journey will last for one week. On the farm we're going to do some cleaning and help clear away rubbish at first. Then, we'll learn how to plant trees and grow vegetables. During the week, we will have a picnic and help the farmers pick fruits such as apples and pears. For our safety, we mustn't go swimming in the river and we should keep together. Nobody is allowed to leave the class group and go alone.Wish you a happy journey!Thats all. Thank you!寫作亮點：首先要點明主題“下周要去做什么”，用到了“have a journey to”（去旅行）這個短語。其次就針對這次旅行做出較為細致的描述，描述時間，描述即將進行的事件，提到了“do some cleaning”（幫助清掃），“help clear away rubbish”（幫助清除垃圾），plant trees（種樹）、“grow vegetables”（種植蔬菜），“have a picnic”（去野餐），“help the farmers pick fruits”（幫助農(nóng)民采摘水果），“be allowed to do”（被允許去做），其中情態(tài)動詞must的用法準確，we mustn't go swimming in the river 意為“我們禁止去河里游泳”，mustnt表示“禁止”。結(jié)尾處有祝福語“Wish you a happy journey!”，總體來說短語使用準確，時態(tài)正確，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，有相關(guān)細節(jié)的補充，行文連貫，完成了既定的寫作任務。11.【2018年四川省樂山市】現(xiàn)在，戴眼鏡的學生越來越多；為此，國家把每年 6 月 6 日定為愛眼日。請你結(jié)合自己的體會，就如何愛護眼睛，給校報英語欄目寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1. 吃有益于眼睛的食物，如：胡蘿卜、雞蛋等；2. 多做眼保健操，長時間用眼后可看看遠方；3. 養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習慣，如：不躺著玩手機或看書等。注意：1.詞數(shù) 80 詞左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. _【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, its helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good eye habit. Dont read books or use a cell phone in bed.In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。12.【2018年天津市】請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“The Story of Li Hua”為題，為學校廣播站英語專欄寫一篇短文，介紹發(fā)生在你班同學李華身上的一件事。（1）上周五放學后李華乘公交車回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在車上。（2）李華把橘皮撿起，放進垃圾桶。（3）乘客用手機拍了照片，發(fā)布到網(wǎng)上。（4）老師知道后表揚了李華，李華說這是他應該做的。（5）你覺得參考詞匯：果皮peel 垃圾桶dustbin 發(fā)布post 表揚praise要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80-100個。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. _【答案】The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. After school last Friday, Li Hua took a bus home and saw someone eating oranges and throwing orange peel on the bus.So he picked it up and put it into the dustbin. The passenger on the bus took photos of Li Hua with their mobile phones and and posted them online. After knowing it, the teacher praised Li Hua and encouraged others to learn from him.I think Li Hua did a good deed. It is impolite to throw litter in public places.點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定短語，為文章增色不少，如take a bus；put··· into ；take photos of； encourage to do sth;；learn from等； and ;so 和固定句型It is +形容詞+to do sth等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。13.【2018年江蘇省徐州市】你校英文報組織了題為“我喜歡的英語諺語，征文活動，你有意參加。請從下面兩句英語諺語中任選一句，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，參加征文活動。 Many hands make light work. Meaning: If lots of people share the work, it will make a job easier to complete.Practice makes perfect. Meaning: If you keep practising，you will be better at it. 短文內(nèi)容須包括： (1）你喜歡的諺語及其含義 (2）體現(xiàn)該諺語含義的個人經(jīng)歷 注意：1短文中已給出的部分（見答題卡）不計入總詞數(shù)。 2短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和地名?！敬鸢浮縈y favourtite English sayingMy English saying is many hands make light work. It means if lots of people share the work, It will make a job easier to complete.Last term, our class decided to give a charity show to help children in poor areas. It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music. Im good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.The charity show turned out to be a great success. We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us. Teamwork really works!點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分為兩段，第一段作者用了兩句話，介紹了自己喜歡的諺語以及這個諺語的含義；第二段作者講述了自己的一個經(jīng)歷，這個經(jīng)歷與自己喜歡的諺語是有關(guān)的，能較好的體現(xiàn)該諺語的含義。兩段的格式使短文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，敘述有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，文章以第一人稱為主，第一段使用了一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；第二段使用了一般過去時態(tài)，謂語動詞形式準確，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式。第三，短文句式表達符合英語的習慣，語言準確、地道。句子以簡單句為主，也用到了很多的復合句，如并列句、賓語從句等，語句之間也用到了一些連接成分。較好的短語和句式有： It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. 、Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. 、Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music.、 Im good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.、The charity show turned out to be a great success.、 We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us.等。14.【2018年云南省】提示:每個人都向往美好的生活,美好的生活需要我們真誠的付出和給予。請以“Doing Something Nice to.”為題,寫一篇英語短文,談談你曾經(jīng)或?qū)⒁獮樗恕⑸鐣茸龅囊患篮玫氖虑?。要求?.請先將題目補全后再做答；2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔,詞數(shù)不少于60個；3.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名,否則以零分計；4.請將短文寫在答題卡上,寫在本試題卷上無效?！敬鸢浮緿oing something nice to my friendA true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart!Jerry is my good friend. He's very thin. Last winter, he got ill. He had to go to hospital once a week. He took lots of medicine. I hoped he would be as strong as me. So every weekend, I asked him to practice playing basketball with me. I taught him how to play it. Now he is much stronger and healthier.I feel very happy to have done something nice to my friend.點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定短語，為文章增色不少，如go to hospital； once a week ；lots of； as as 等；So ；Now ；I feel very happy to 等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。15.【2018年浙江寧波市中考】今年5月11日，你校組織了一次社會實踐活動，部分學生選擇去了紅星農(nóng)場（見導圖一），其余學生選擇去了科技博物館（見導圖二）。請根據(jù)你所選擇的實踐活動寫一篇英語日記，記錄當天的經(jīng)歷和感受。注意：(1)日記必須包括你所選擇導圖的所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；(3)詞數(shù)：80 -100。日記格式及首句己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Friday, May 11thToday I had a school trip. 【答案】Possible version 1:Friday. May 11thToday I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!(98 words)Possible version 2: