2018年中考英語試題分項(xiàng)版解析匯編（第02期）專題13 書面表達(dá)（含解析）

專題13 書面表達(dá)1.【2018年山東省青島市】中央電視臺(tái)經(jīng)典詠流傳節(jié)目的播出，再次激發(fā)了人們對(duì)經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品的閱讀熱情。讀書可以成就更美好的自己，讓讀書伴隨我們成長。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“Growing up with Reading”為題寫一篇英語短文介紹你曾經(jīng)讀過的一本書或首詩，并建議大家多讀書，讀好書。要點(diǎn)提示：讀書的重要性1. 獲取知識(shí)，開闊眼界；2. 提升自我，增強(qiáng)自信讀過的一本書或一首詩1. 作品內(nèi)容簡介；2. 讀書感悟及對(duì)自己的影響。多讀書，讀好書1. 利用閑暇時(shí)間多讀書，養(yǎng)成讀書的好習(xí)慣；2. 多讀經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及地名。3. 詞數(shù)：80-100（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：classic 經(jīng)典作品； open up ones eyes 開闊眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 責(zé)任；cooperation 合作。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. 【答案】Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book's writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in 1816.She had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was self-confident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.2.【2018年安徽省中考】某英文雜志社正面向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文,請(qǐng)從以下要點(diǎn)中選擇一至兩個(gè)方面,并結(jié)合具體事例,用英語寫一篇題為"Thank you, my teacher!"的短文參加此次活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)如下:1.嚴(yán)格要求;2.耐心指導(dǎo);3.熱情鼓勵(lì);， .注意:1. 詞數(shù)80 100 ;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。【答案】Id like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she's helped me a lot.Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to studyharder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, lve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.3.【2018年貴州省安順】每年 6 月 8 日為“世界海洋日(World Oceans Day)”，今年世界海洋日的主題為“清潔我們的海洋（Cleaning Our Oceans）”。據(jù) 2018 年 6 月 7 日 CCTV 晚間新聞報(bào)道，每年流入大海的微塑料達(dá) 1300 萬噸，導(dǎo)致大量魚類死亡?？茖W(xué)家預(yù)測，如果不采取措施限塑，2050 年海洋里的塑料重量比魚類還重。作為中學(xué)生的你，應(yīng)該減少塑料制品的使用。請(qǐng)以“Saying No to Plastics”為題，寫一篇 80-100 詞的英語短文。A.請(qǐng)根據(jù)自己的想法，用完整的英語句子或簡略的英語答語回答下面五個(gè)問題。81. Can you see plastics (塑料)everywhere ?82. Do you often use plastics in your daily life?83. Is using plastics too much good or bad for our environment?84. What can you do to reduce(減少) the use of plastics?85. What advice can you possibly give to others when they are using plastics?【答案】81. Yes./No. 82. Yes./No. 83. 答題內(nèi)容合理, 均可給分。 84. 答題內(nèi)容合理, 均可給分。 85. 答題內(nèi)容合理, 均可給分。【解析】81. 問題：你能看到到處都是塑料制品嗎？根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況，用Yes/No來回答。 82. 問題：你在日常生活中經(jīng)常使用塑料嗎？根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況，用Yes/No來回答。83. 問題：塑料對(duì)環(huán)境的影響是好還是壞？答題內(nèi)容合理即可。參考答案：I think its bad for our environment. 84. 問題：你能做些什么來減少塑料的使用？答題內(nèi)容合理即可。參考答案：I can use a cloth bag or a basket instead while shopping.85. 問題：當(dāng)別人在使用塑料制品時(shí)，你能給他們什么建議？答題內(nèi)容合理即可。參考答案：we should reduce the use of plastics so that we can hopefully protect the earth and make it greener. 4.【2018年黑龍江省綏化市中考】身為中學(xué)生，關(guān)愛兒童是我們應(yīng)盡的義務(wù)。本周六我班將組織一次去兒童福利院（the children's home)看望兒童的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為本次活動(dòng)制定計(jì)劃，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。內(nèi)容包括：出發(fā)時(shí)間，集合地點(diǎn)，出行方式以及在兒童福利院的具體活動(dòng)安排。提示詞；tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息。（姓名、校名、地名等）【答案】We are going to the children's home to visit the children there this weekend. Well meetat the school gate at eight on Saturday morning. Then well go there on our school bus. What should we do at the children's home? Here are our plans.First, we'll take some gifts to them, such as colored pencils, books and some toys. Second at the children's home, we'll draw pictures with them, read stories to them and help with their lessons. Last, we'll have a party. We can sing and dance together. We can also play games with them and tell jokes to cheer them up.I'm sure they'll enjoy the time with us.點(diǎn)睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定短語，為文章增色不少，如such as ，have a party ， play games，tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up等；First, Second，Last等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。5.【2018年湖北省恩施州中考】2009年3月至今,北京八達(dá)嶺野生動(dòng)物園發(fā)生了多起游客違反入園規(guī)則而導(dǎo)致的人員傷亡事件,這些悲劇發(fā)人深省。俗話說“沒有規(guī)矩,不成方圓”,作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該遵守哪些規(guī)則,請(qǐng)結(jié)合下圖和要點(diǎn)提示,寫一篇英語短文。要點(diǎn)提示：1.遵守交通規(guī)則;2.不插隊(duì);3.遵守入園規(guī)則;4.補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)其他的規(guī)則。要求：1.文中必須包含所有提示要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫;2.條理清晰,字跡工整,詞數(shù)不少于80；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。提示詞匯: jump the queue (插隊(duì)); fence (圍欄)【答案】As students, what can we do to keep our daily life m order. In my opinion, we should behave as follows:First, while walking or driving on the road, we should obey the traffic rules. Besides, do remember not to carve or draw anywhere during visiting places of interest. What's more, making a loud noise in public is also a kind of pollution. It is as harmful as littering and spitting everywhere. Last but not least, when we go to the zoo or other public places, we should do as we are required, for example, "Don't jump the queue".Only when we behave well, can we live in a well-ordered society.寫作亮點(diǎn)：首先，可以用一兩句話陳述清楚寫作的目的（keep our daily life in order），然后可以逐條寫出需要遵守的規(guī)則。在一條一條羅列的 時(shí)候，可以恰當(dāng)?shù)亟柚幌略~來表達(dá)邏輯關(guān)系，比如first，besides，whats more，last but not least等，具體在寫規(guī)則的時(shí)候要注意短語運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，例如obey the traffic rules 遵守交通規(guī)則，visiting places of interest 參觀名勝古跡，making a loud noise in public 在公共場合大聲喧嘩。此外，句式的靈活運(yùn)用也是亮點(diǎn)，例如用到了asas.同級(jí)比較的結(jié)構(gòu)，在末段用到了only+從句，主句倒裝的結(jié)構(gòu)，這些結(jié)構(gòu)的使用使得文章語言更加鮮活。最后，文章用一句話結(jié)尾，總結(jié)了全文，完成了寫作任務(wù)。6.【2018年湖南省常德市】假設(shè)你是Amy，根據(jù)第二節(jié)（回答問題）材料，請(qǐng)用英文向市圖書館經(jīng)理寫一封80詞以上的郵件，告訴他你丟失手機(jī)的事，如果他找到手機(jī)的話請(qǐng)他歸還給你。注意：1. 內(nèi)容包括第二節(jié)問題答案的所有信息（順序可調(diào)整）；2.不得出現(xiàn)校名和人名等真實(shí)信息。【答案】Dear manager,I am Amy.I lost my phone at the City Library on the afternoon of May 16.It is red.I attached my name on the phone.I want to get it back because I want to call my friends.If you find it ,you can call me at 0736-7891180.I will thank you a lot.Yours,Amy7.【2018年江蘇省連云港市】積極鍛煉是非常重要的，為此，某英文報(bào)開展了一次關(guān)于初中生段煉情況的調(diào)查活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列圖表和相關(guān)文字提示,以“Exercising is important!”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)具體內(nèi)容調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)每天鍛煉的時(shí)間不經(jīng)常鍛煉的原因鍛煉的意義有益身體健康;保持思維敏銳;變得自信快樂。你的建議就如何更好地開展鍛煉，提出你的建議(至少兩點(diǎn))。注意：(1)短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使文章連貫;(2)詞數(shù)90左右,短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(3)短文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名等信息。(4)參考詞匯:敏銳的sharpExercising is important!Recently, we have done a survey about students exercising. According to the survey, 【答案】Exercising is important!Recenly, we have done a survey about students exereising, Aocording to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good a exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it.As we all know, exercising is god for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy.In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising, Besids, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. (104 words)8.【2018年江蘇省無錫市中考】假設(shè)你名叫張華，是“2018無錫馬拉松”組委會(huì)的一名工作人員。近日，外聯(lián)絡(luò)部轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)給你一位牙買加選手的電子郵件，并附上了組委會(huì)的處理意見。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容及處理意見給他回復(fù)。Dear sir/madam,I'm Alfred from Jamaica. I took part in 2018 Wuxi Marathon on March 25 and I got a silver medal. I didn't realize you had got my name wrong until I showed the medal to my friends. My family name is Morrison, with double 'r'. However, there's only one 'r' on the medal. How could this happen?! :-(Yours sincerely,Alfred MoRRison處理意見：1.重制獎(jiǎng)牌，6月25日前寄出；2.提供一張免費(fèi)機(jī)票作為補(bǔ)償(compensation),兩年內(nèi)可從世界任意地點(diǎn)飛往上海；3. 舊獎(jiǎng)牌須收回。注意事項(xiàng)：1.郵件內(nèi)容須根據(jù)處理意見自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；2.詞數(shù)在80個(gè)左右，郵件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 郵件必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上?！敬鸢浮緿ear Morrison: It is true that we have got your name wrong. I am sorry for making such a mistake. We have decided to have made a new model for you after discussing it. It will be sent to you before June 25th. Meanwhile, we will offer you a free air ticket as compensation. You can fly to Shanghai from anywhere over the world within two years. But the old model must be taken back. If you have anything else, please contact with us anytime.Thank you for supporting our work and wish you a good trip!Yours sincerely,Zhang Hua【解析】這是一篇材料作文，以“2018無錫馬拉松”組委會(huì)工作人員張華的名義給牙買加選手回復(fù)一封電子郵件，注意書信的格式。首先要認(rèn)真閱讀所提供的電子郵件，掌握其書信內(nèi)容：來自牙買加的艾爾弗雷德在2018年無錫馬拉松比賽獲得了銀牌，但獎(jiǎng)牌上的名字“Morrison”漏寫一個(gè)“r”，質(zhì)疑組委會(huì)怎么會(huì)出現(xiàn)這種情況。在寫作中要結(jié)合組委會(huì)的處理意見予以回復(fù)。首先要對(duì)所犯的錯(cuò)誤表示道歉，然后結(jié)合三點(diǎn)處理意見逐一回復(fù)，最后要感謝對(duì)方對(duì)工作的支持并祝旅行愉快。在寫作中，要注意有兩處用到被動(dòng)語態(tài)來表達(dá)：獎(jiǎng)牌于6月25日前寄出（一般將來時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)），舊獎(jiǎng)牌須收回（含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)）。9.【2018年山東省濱州中考】某校正在開展“走進(jìn)新時(shí)代，爭當(dāng)合格中學(xué)生”的演講比賽，請(qǐng)以“We act, we improve” 為主題，寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生除了學(xué)習(xí)課本知識(shí)之外，還應(yīng)該做些什么？ 演講稿應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：1.學(xué)會(huì)自立，誠實(shí)友善，舉止文明；2.培養(yǎng)習(xí)慣，發(fā)展興趣，不斷創(chuàng)新；3.關(guān)心他人，和諧相處，懂得感恩； 4. 要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名；3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當(dāng)加 23 分；4.詞數(shù)：80 詞左右。開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。We act, we improveLadies and gentlemen,We have entered a new era. As students, its our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.【答案】We act, we improveLadies and gentlemen,We have entered a new era. As students, its our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.First, we should learn to be independent and honest. Were supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Second, we should have good habits. Habits play an important role in our life. Wed better develop our interests and the ability to create. Third, we should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. Value the time we spend with our family and friends in our daily life. Last but not least, I think we should exercise more to keep healthy.In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“We act，we improve”為主題，寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生除了學(xué)習(xí)課本知識(shí)之外，還應(yīng)該做些什么？結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I think，F(xiàn)irst, we usually learn to，Second, we should，We must not等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用，不要漏掉任何一個(gè)寫作要點(diǎn)，注意敘述順序符合邏輯關(guān)系。 可能用到的詞組：learn to do sth., be supposed to do, be friendly to sb., play an important role in, had better, the ability to create, care more about等等。高分句型： 1. We should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. 我們應(yīng)該更加關(guān)心別人，感謝所有幫助過我們的人。care more about更加關(guān)心，be thankful to對(duì)感恩，who have helped us.為定語從句，修飾先行詞the people。2. In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve. 總之，我們行動(dòng)越多，我們的提高就越好。兩個(gè)比較級(jí)的句子疊加，表示“越越”。10.【2018年山東省棗莊市】Use the following information to write a paragraph about bees.Be as busy learning all their subjects as bees are busy gathering honeyThey have sharp stings(刺) to harm them and protect themselves.Wise and busyNo gainsDoes its own workDriven from the hive to be stopped from eating the honey before winter comesJoin together to build cells of wax（蠟質(zhì)房子） for their honeyHow busy they are alwaysDon't workThat have six sides and are all of one shape and sizeA house called a hiveOne queenBees live in. They are. There is,. in each hive. They a. Each bee.TheyBees live in They are There is in each hive. They all Each bee They build cells Its pleasant to see But drones They are Children shouldnt touch bees No pains Shouldnt children【答案】Bees live in a house called a hive. They are wise and busy. There is one queen in each hive. They all join together to build cells of wax(蠟質(zhì)房子) for their honey. Each bee does its own work. They build cells that have six sides and are all of one shape and size. It's pleasant to see how busy they are always, But drones don't work. They are driven from the hive to be stopped from eating the honey before winter comes. Children shouldn't touch bees because they have sharp stings(刺) to harm them and protect themselves. No pains, no gains. Shouldn't children be as busy learning all their subjects as bees are busy gathering honey?11.【2018年上海市中考】Write at least 60 words on the topic" My progress(以“進(jìn)步了”為題,寫一信不少于60個(gè)詞的短文,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)你在生活或?qū)W習(xí)中一定取得過不少進(jìn)步,比如生活技能的獲得、學(xué)習(xí)方法的掌握、良好習(xí)慣的養(yǎng)成。請(qǐng)選取其中一個(gè)方面,結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,談一談你是如何取得這一進(jìn)步的。（注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息,否則不予評(píng)分。）The following is for reference only(以下表達(dá)僅供參考)used to do/betry my best to domake progress in( doing.【答案】I used to write badly, especially in English. It affected my performance every composition. I felt annoyed because I didnt know how to do it.Several months ago, our English teacher reminded us to pay attention to our English Writing. He prepared a copybook for each student. We were asked to practice every day. I tried my best to copy well. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. With the help of my English teacher, I made progress in writing.No pains no gains. I will study hard to achieve greater progress and I believe I will do better and better.【解析】作文要求以“My progress”為題，敘述自己一次進(jìn)步的過程。故取得怎樣進(jìn)步是描述的重點(diǎn)，以前怎樣，以后怎樣也需要簡單敘述。時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主，人稱為第一人陳?？梢越梃b所提供的詞組，另外，寫作時(shí)還需注意語句間的銜接，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。12