【創(chuàng)新設(shè)計(jì)】2020高考英語(yǔ)一輪提能訓(xùn)練 Module1 Basketball外研版選修7

【外研版創(chuàng)新設(shè)計(jì)】2020高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)提能訓(xùn)練必修7Module 1Basketball能 力 闖 關(guān).單詞拼寫(xiě)1The tournament is open to amateurs as well as p_.2What is the a_ rainfall for August in your country?3Such a courageous behavior really d_ to be praised.4Teaching isnt just a simple piece of work；its an art b_ on science.5At midnight they crossed the river and took p_ of the village.6They have _(任命)a new headteacher at my daughters school.7Jack is an intelligent pupil，but he lacks _(動(dòng)力)8My _(一代人)has grown up without the experience of a world war.9My employer will _(證實(shí))that I was there on time.10He works very hard and now he is a(n)_(出色的)pupil.答案：1.professionals2.average3.deserves4.based5.possession6.appointed7.motivation 8generation9.confirm10.outstanding.單項(xiàng)填空1The man was very _ not to tell the manager that he could not do the job. Acare Bcareful Ccareless Dcarelessness解析：句意：“那人非常小心沒(méi)有告訴給經(jīng)理他不能做那份工作?！笨疾閏are的派生詞的詞義和用法。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境，答案是B。答案：B2The plane landed _ at the airport.Asafe Bsafely Csafety Dsave解析：本題考查副詞用法。safe形容詞，安全的；safely副詞，安全地；safety名詞，安全；save動(dòng)詞，挽救，節(jié)省。由此及句意可知，此處應(yīng)用副詞safely修飾動(dòng)詞landed，故應(yīng)選B。答案：B3A clean environment can help the city bid for the Olympics，which _ will promote its economic development.Ain nature Bin return Cin turn Din fact解析：in turn意為“又反過(guò)來(lái)”，句意為：清潔的環(huán)境有利于申辦奧運(yùn)，而申辦奧運(yùn)又可以促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展。C項(xiàng)符合句意，為正確答案。in nature“實(shí)質(zhì)上，性質(zhì)上”，in return“作為回報(bào)”，in fact“實(shí)際上，事實(shí)上”。均不合題意。答案：C4I can see this job was done by a _ worker.Aprofession Bprofessor Cprofessional Dprofessed解析：本題考查形容詞的用法。此處是形容詞professional用作名詞worker的定語(yǔ)。答案：C5The boy showed great _ in fighting against the enemy.Abrave Bbraved Cbravery Dbraving解析：本題考查句意理解。那個(gè)男孩在和敵人的戰(zhàn)斗中表現(xiàn)出極大的勇氣。形容詞great后應(yīng)跟名詞bravery。答案：C6Have you handed in your schoolwork yet?Yes，I have.I guess it _ now.Ahas graded Bis graded Cis being graded Dis grading解析：句意：“還沒(méi)交上你的作業(yè)嗎？”“我交上了。我猜老師正在批著?！庇蒼ow便知，用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，而且用被動(dòng)式。答案：C7The doctors advice _ him from drinking and smoking.Aencouraged Bdiscouraged Cgave courage Dgave discouragement解析：句意：“醫(yī)生的忠告鼓勵(lì)他戒煙戒酒?！笨疾閏ourage的派生詞的應(yīng)用，discourage sb. from doing sth.“阻止干”，故答案是B。答案：B8He is determined to make great _ in life.Asuccess Bsucceeded Csuccessful Dsuccessfully解析：本題考查動(dòng)賓搭配。success是名詞；succeeded是過(guò)去式或過(guò)去分詞；successful是形容詞；successfully是副詞。動(dòng)詞make之后應(yīng)跟名詞success作賓語(yǔ)，故選A。答案：A.翻譯句子1拍賣(mài)會(huì)過(guò)后幾天，我們才真正擁有了那輛汽車(chē)。(take possession of)_2他的新書(shū)立即獲得成功。_3他們應(yīng)該受到懲罰。(deserve)_4我認(rèn)為我們可以信賴(lài)德里克，他不會(huì)告訴任何人。(rely on)_5我把嬰兒抱在懷里。_答案：1.We didnt take possession of the car until a few days after the auction(拍賣(mài))2His new book became an instant success.3They deserve to be punished.或They deserve punishing.4I think we can rely on Derek not to tell anyone.5I held the baby in my arms.閱讀理解In the dictionary，the word “applause” means to clap your hands to show praise or welcome.Clapping is not usually used to protest against something.But when David Beckham made this mistake，he was punished with a red card.The England football captain was shown a yellow card by referee Arturo Dauden Ibanez during a match between Real Madrid and Valencia in Madrid，Spain on Oct.23.Beckham then half­turned his back on Ibanez and applauded.His protest made the referee very angry.In return he gave Beckham a red card.The Spanish Football Association withdrew the red card last week due to Real Madrids protest.But Beckham still has to pay a 60­euro­fine for his mistake.Beckham，no doubt，is one of the best footballers in the world.He was among the 50 candidates for the European Footballer of 2020.He first made everyone take notice when he scored a wonderful goal,60 yards away from his own half on the first day of the 1995/6 England football season.He then led England into the quarter finals of the 2002 World Cup.But he is more than a footballer.His handsome appearance is as powerful as his outstanding performance on the field.Few pop stars can match him in terms of pure style.He has attracted millions of teenagers to follow his way of dressing.“I have come to accept that if I have a new haircut，it is front page news.But having a picture of my foot on the front page of a national newspaper is a bit exceptional，” he once said.He appears in advertisements as often as on the field.Beckham is now the richest footballer in the world with an average annual income of 8 million pounds，mainly from advertisements for beauty treatments，mobile phones and motor oil.In November 2020，Beckham was honored with the best award ever receivedan OBE(Officer of the Order of the British Empire) from the British Queen.1Beckham received a red card because he _.Abroke a rule Bhurt the referees feelingCdid wrong to the referee Dshowed anger to the audience解析：文章第三段說(shuō)，貝克漢姆的抗議使裁判很生氣，作為回報(bào)裁判給了他一張紅牌。答案：B2Beckham first became famous because of _.Aan excellent goal Bhis special dressChis handsome appearance Dhis beautiful wife解析：根據(jù)文章第四段第三、四句可知。答案：A3Which of the following is true according to the passage?AWhat attracted teenagers most was not his look but his performance.BBeckham became rich just by advertising for some companies.CBeckhams red card was taken away by the football association.DIt was a great honor for Beckham to be awarded an OBE.解析：本題是細(xì)節(jié)題。吸引青少年的不僅僅是他的技術(shù)還有他的外貌，A錯(cuò)；貝克漢姆非常富有，其中做廣告占很大的成分，B錯(cuò)；那張紅牌被足協(xié)取消了，而不是拿走了，C錯(cuò)。答案：D閱卷現(xiàn)場(chǎng)(教師用書(shū)獨(dú)具)第七節(jié)作文(書(shū)面表達(dá))常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題與解決方法在講解問(wèn)題之前我先介紹一下高考英語(yǔ)作文閱卷流程：高考英語(yǔ)作文閱卷的流程在正式閱卷前，先組織全體閱卷老師學(xué)習(xí)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，然后根據(jù)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對(duì)事先挑選出來(lái)的各檔次學(xué)生范文進(jìn)行試評(píng)，給出你認(rèn)為恰當(dāng)?shù)姆謹(jǐn)?shù)，再集中進(jìn)行對(duì)比討論，統(tǒng)一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)后，正式開(kāi)始閱卷。今年英語(yǔ)高考作文實(shí)行雙評(píng)，對(duì)于分?jǐn)?shù)出入較大的，還進(jìn)行了三評(píng)，力求做到公平公正。因此，教師在平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練中也必須分別對(duì)待，獨(dú)立訓(xùn)練與評(píng)價(jià)。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(可以讓學(xué)生結(jié)合具體范文熟悉高考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn))考試說(shuō)明中作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)做了以下描述：1本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。(在2020年高考中山東作文分?jǐn)?shù)已調(diào)整為30分)。2評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。4評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。5拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)詞匯用法均可接受。6如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，以致影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。7內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)，對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔(很好)；(2125分)1完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。2覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。3應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。4語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。5有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。6完全達(dá)到預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第四檔(好)：(1620分)1完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。2雖漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn)，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。3應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿(mǎn)足任務(wù)的要求。4語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，些許錯(cuò)誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。5應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。6達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第三檔(適當(dāng))：(1115分)1基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。2雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。3應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿(mǎn)足任務(wù)的要求。4有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。5應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫。6整體而言，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第二檔(較差)：(610分)1未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。2漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容。3語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。4有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響了對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。5較少使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。6信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。第一檔(差)：(15分)1未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。2明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。3語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。4較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。5缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。6信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。不得分：(0分)未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息：內(nèi)容太少，無(wú)法評(píng)判；寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清。下面我想列舉出閱卷過(guò)程中所發(fā)現(xiàn)的作文寫(xiě)作的典型問(wèn)題：?jiǎn)栴}一：缺少小品詞如a, the, of, in等。如：考生將“前門(mén)大街有六百年的歷史了”表達(dá)為“Qianmen Street is a famous street over 600 years old”；(正確的表達(dá)法是Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old)問(wèn)題二：可數(shù)名詞的形式不正確我們知道可數(shù)名詞不可以單獨(dú)使用，要么要在它的前面加上a或the，要么要以復(fù)數(shù)形式出現(xiàn)?？墒怯胁簧倏忌诒磉_(dá)“電腦，鼠標(biāo)，游戲，工具”等可數(shù)名詞時(shí)，既不在它們之前加冠詞，又不用其復(fù)數(shù)形式，直接說(shuō)成“computer, mouse, game, tool”，這都是屬于低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤，會(huì)嚴(yán)重失分的。問(wèn)題三：頻繁使用中國(guó)式的英語(yǔ)中國(guó)學(xué)生在學(xué)英語(yǔ)時(shí)最容易犯的錯(cuò)誤便是用中文的表達(dá)方式死搬硬套英文，英語(yǔ)中有個(gè)專(zhuān)門(mén)的詞來(lái)描述這類(lèi)現(xiàn)象，叫Chinglish。例如：“收到你的來(lái)信很高興”表達(dá)為“I very happy to pick your letter”(正確的表達(dá)法可以是Glad to hear from you.或I am very happy to receive your letter.)問(wèn)題四：隨便使用代詞it, they等，導(dǎo)致指代不明或引起歧義有考生將“我們到達(dá)后，就立即開(kāi)始干活，一些人挖坑，一些運(yùn)小樹(shù)苗，其他人澆水”表達(dá)為“When we arrived, we began to work immediately. They were digging holes. They were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them.”在這一句話(huà)中，作者連續(xù)用了兩個(gè)they和一個(gè)them，可是仔細(xì)分析一下，我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)這三個(gè)詞不可能指代同一伙人。此句可以這樣表達(dá)“Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them.”問(wèn)題五：筆誤繁多在這一次的作文中，最常見(jiàn)的筆誤是將they寫(xiě)成the，將If或It寫(xiě)成I。這種筆誤實(shí)在要不得，因?yàn)樗呀?jīng)影響了讀者的理解。我們要求我們的考生在寫(xiě)完之后，一定要仔細(xì)閱讀一遍，避免此類(lèi)低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤的發(fā)生。解決方案與指南1狠抓學(xué)生英語(yǔ)基本功的訓(xùn)練英語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作基本功是什么？從高考的閱卷中得出結(jié)論：書(shū)寫(xiě)和句子。英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力并非一朝一夕就形成的，它是一個(gè)由淺入深，由易到難，循序漸進(jìn)，一環(huán)緊扣一環(huán)的訓(xùn)練過(guò)程。句子是文章最基本、最重要的單位。句子的正確表達(dá)是書(shū)面表達(dá)最基本的要求。因此，一定要訓(xùn)練學(xué)生寫(xiě)完整的句子，至少要寫(xiě)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子。在此基礎(chǔ)上，再讓學(xué)生加入一些適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，過(guò)渡句等。卷面的整潔在高考中尤為重要，因?yàn)樵u(píng)卷老師首先是從卷面來(lái)確定其得分的檔次。高考評(píng)卷老師對(duì)一篇作文的判定時(shí)間是以秒來(lái)計(jì)算，速度之快可想而知。要在如此短的時(shí)間內(nèi)做出判斷，靠什么大家可以思考。寫(xiě)作短文時(shí)，要注意審題，對(duì)寫(xiě)什么和怎么寫(xiě)必須有一個(gè)清晰的思路。很多考生動(dòng)筆就寫(xiě)，錯(cuò)了以后再涂改，嚴(yán)重影響卷面整潔，也影響了成績(jī)。其次，要在遣詞造句上多下功夫。盡可能運(yùn)用較熟悉的詞組、短語(yǔ)或成語(yǔ)。第三，要力求變換各種句式。當(dāng)然，也不能片面追求花哨文字，拼湊錯(cuò)誤百出的句子，使成績(jī)大打折扣；行文連貫是閱卷教師比較看重的一個(gè)方面。要有好的開(kāi)頭和好的結(jié)尾；為了使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)密，增強(qiáng)說(shuō)服力和感染力，考生應(yīng)該在句與句之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┻^(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)。另外，考生很容易出現(xiàn)句與句之間不使用連接詞的錯(cuò)誤，這是英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中的大忌。最后，考生應(yīng)該把寫(xiě)完的作文閱讀兩遍，認(rèn)真檢查是否有拼寫(xiě)方面的錯(cuò)誤，是否有時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)方面的錯(cuò)誤，是否存在中式英語(yǔ)等等。2注意訓(xùn)練學(xué)生作文答題技巧、答題方法(1)仔細(xì)審題，弄清大意。審題是寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵所在，仔細(xì)審題才能深刻理解題目所要表達(dá)的主要意思。不論是漢語(yǔ)提示寫(xiě)作還是看圖寫(xiě)作，都要仔細(xì)審題，弄清寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，如背景、人物、時(shí)間、體裁等的要求。(2)編擬提綱，擬出要點(diǎn)。在弄清了題目所要表達(dá)的主要意思后，便可根據(jù)主要內(nèi)容列出提綱，即整理出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。理清要點(diǎn)的目的就是為了把握短文的脈絡(luò)，不至于遺漏內(nèi)容的要點(diǎn)。(3)緊扣要點(diǎn)，擴(kuò)寫(xiě)成文。在列出要點(diǎn)后，依據(jù)要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)寫(xiě)成文。擴(kuò)寫(xiě)時(shí)，可運(yùn)用想象適度發(fā)揮。但切記不可隨意亂寫(xiě)，要緊扣畫(huà)面或漢語(yǔ)提示，適當(dāng)描述，連貫通順即可，不能把漢語(yǔ)提示全部譯成英語(yǔ)。(4)反復(fù)檢查，修正錯(cuò)誤。擴(kuò)寫(xiě)成文后，考生應(yīng)將擴(kuò)寫(xiě)后的文章認(rèn)真讀一讀，檢查是否有錯(cuò)誤。在檢查時(shí)，著重看短文是否扣住了提示或圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)是否有遺漏。同時(shí)，還要注意有無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，如時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)等，是否符合文體特點(diǎn)、格式，等等。(5)寫(xiě)作，要注意留夠時(shí)間，一般需要20分鐘。最好能打草稿，這樣可以減少錯(cuò)誤，書(shū)寫(xiě)也比較清晰工整。作文注意內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要全，語(yǔ)言要通順。提倡用小詞小句來(lái)寫(xiě)，適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。直擊高考與警示1范例引路，夯實(shí)雙基學(xué)生在進(jìn)行短文寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練過(guò)程中，教師應(yīng)提供各種文體、各種題型的范文，講明各種文體的要求，如日記，便條，書(shū)信，通知的格式等，并給予必要的提示。要求學(xué)生背記一些典型的范文，每種至少兩篇，達(dá)到能正確默寫(xiě)全文的程度。還要背記各種特殊場(chǎng)合中的交際用語(yǔ)或習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)。這樣，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)才能靈活運(yùn)用，舉一反三。2限時(shí)訓(xùn)練，及時(shí)講評(píng)訓(xùn)練時(shí)當(dāng)場(chǎng)發(fā)題，限時(shí)交卷，促使學(xué)生瞬間接受信息，快速理解信息，迅速表達(dá)信息，提高實(shí)際應(yīng)用和應(yīng)試能力。這一步是關(guān)鍵，也是學(xué)生的難關(guān)。因?yàn)榭荚囎魑囊髮⑺?guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后，展開(kāi)思維，目的是考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)語(yǔ)言的能力。學(xué)生必須在規(guī)定的時(shí)間內(nèi)完成作文，決不能養(yǎng)成拖拉的習(xí)慣。也許你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)平時(shí)作文寫(xiě)得不錯(cuò)、書(shū)寫(xiě)干凈的學(xué)生在限時(shí)訓(xùn)練中與平時(shí)表現(xiàn)有較大的出入。原因就在于其平時(shí)有較充足的時(shí)間去準(zhǔn)備，構(gòu)思，查閱詞典等。而在限時(shí)訓(xùn)練中，將其置于一定的時(shí)間壓力下和逼真的環(huán)境中，使其思維高速運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)，逐步鍛煉并提高其寫(xiě)作反應(yīng)能力。這樣，學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作水平和應(yīng)試能力都會(huì)有所改善。學(xué)生的習(xí)作寫(xiě)完后，教師要抓緊時(shí)間批改，及時(shí)反饋信息。當(dāng)然作文的批改可根據(jù)實(shí)際采取不同的方式，如老師抽查，學(xué)生互改等。每次作文要認(rèn)真記錄學(xué)生習(xí)作中出現(xiàn)的普遍性和典型性錯(cuò)誤，為講評(píng)作材料準(zhǔn)備。對(duì)于寫(xiě)得好的作文可展示給學(xué)生閱讀思考，并給予鼓勵(lì)表?yè)P(yáng)，以此提高學(xué)生的積極性。當(dāng)然，一種語(yǔ)言能力不是一天兩天的功夫就會(huì)提高的，需要學(xué)生持之以恒地多寫(xiě)，多練，做到在寫(xiě)中學(xué)，在學(xué)中寫(xiě)，從而達(dá)到有效的寫(xiě)作目的。下面附上2020年部分省份的書(shū)面表達(dá)、參考范文，以及簡(jiǎn)單點(diǎn)評(píng)供大家參考：一、(2020·全國(guó)卷、海南、寧夏卷)假定你是李華，正在英國(guó)接受英語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)，住在一戶(hù)英國(guó)人家里。今天你的房東Mrs Wilson不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請(qǐng)給Mrs Wilson寫(xiě)一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：1外出購(gòu)物2替房東還書(shū)3Tracy來(lái)電話(huà)留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton coffee)見(jiàn)面取消2)此事已告知Susan3)盡快回電注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Mrs Wilson，_Li Hua【參考范文】Mrs Wilson，Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5：00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about I oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.Li Hua【解析】作文題仍然同去年一樣，屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，要求學(xué)生就所給內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一張留言條，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性、生活性的原則。考生應(yīng)該注意留言條的寫(xiě)法：留言條是指找人沒(méi)有找到，又沒(méi)有時(shí)間等候，只能留給對(duì)方一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短而明了的條據(jù)。留言條的格式也分三部分：稱(chēng)呼、正文、署名和日期。稱(chēng)呼要頂格寫(xiě)，條子留給誰(shuí)就稱(chēng)呼誰(shuí)。在稱(chēng)呼下一行空兩格寫(xiě)正文，簡(jiǎn)潔明了地把你要給對(duì)方說(shuō)的事情寫(xiě)清楚。在正文下面寫(xiě)清楚誰(shuí)留的條子，并在署名的下一行寫(xiě)清年、月、日?！久麕熀?jiǎn)評(píng)】依然保持全國(guó)卷短文寫(xiě)作的老套路：人物李華(自1999年以來(lái)，中間除了2002年，統(tǒng)統(tǒng)都是李華同學(xué)在寫(xiě)信，歷時(shí)十年，眾多效尤者)，話(huà)題為簡(jiǎn)單的外語(yǔ)外事活動(dòng)，形式為寫(xiě)信(郵件或留言)，實(shí)則依然是短文寫(xiě)作，控制程度較高，體裁以陳述說(shuō)明為主。四、(2020·廣東卷)第一節(jié) 基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作(共1小題，滿(mǎn)分15分)你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況：時(shí)間： 上周末對(duì)象： 眼科醫(yī)生(eye­doctor)王教授主題： 我國(guó)中小學(xué)生近視(short­sightedness)問(wèn)題基本信息： (1)發(fā)生率： 略高于50%；(2)人數(shù)： 世界第一專(zhuān)家解讀： (1)原因： 很復(fù)雜(2)治療： 沒(méi)有哪一種藥物能治愈近視(3)建議： 不要過(guò)度用眼；多參加戶(hù)外活動(dòng)(4)特別提示： 如何握筆也和近視有關(guān)【參考范文】Last weekend, I had an interview with eye­doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students short­sightedness. It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the No. 1 in the world, are short­sighted. Professor Wang said the reason of short­sightedness is complicated and there is still no cure for short­sightedness. He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises. Whats more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short­sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.【解析】本文題材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，這個(gè)話(huà)題真正地做到了“話(huà)題來(lái)源于學(xué)生實(shí)際生活”。近視眼是每個(gè)校園所必不可少的現(xiàn)象，是學(xué)生校園生活的隱形熱點(diǎn)。因此今年的基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作題目讓每個(gè)學(xué)生都有話(huà)可說(shuō)?？忌⒁馊笠c(diǎn)和表格內(nèi)容，恰當(dāng)表達(dá)即可?！久麕熀?jiǎn)評(píng)】本題話(huà)題為近視問(wèn)題，天津卷曾涉及過(guò)(2020天津卷：How to Protect Our Eyesight)。但角度有不同。廣東卷側(cè)重的是問(wèn)題本身的描述，而天津則是強(qiáng)調(diào)的如何保護(hù)視力。不過(guò)，有做天津卷的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，對(duì)廣東卷也就不會(huì)有難的感覺(jué)。更何況廣東卷所給信息非常充分，對(duì)于考生而言，剩下的主要是組織句子了。第二節(jié) 讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)(共1小題，滿(mǎn)分25分)閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be unhappy too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off.Thats right­sleep it off. The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable. How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you?* 考拉即樹(shù)袋熊寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容1以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；2然后以約120個(gè)詞就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：(1)人們?cè)趨⒂^動(dòng)物園時(shí)為什么喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照；(2)假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境，你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)；(3)你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。寫(xiě)作要求1在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縏he passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be kinder to animals.The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people. Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to have. But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals.If I were in the same position as the animals in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed. Not having peaceful surroundings to sleep, dont you suffer restless and fidgets. No doubt we do and so do the animals.I think it necessary to ban tourists taking pictures with animals, making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals.【解析】今年的讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)讓學(xué)生就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”展開(kāi)議論。議論文的寫(xiě)作有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生正確的價(jià)值觀，糾正不正確的價(jià)值觀。今年的讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)暗中旨在培養(yǎng)學(xué)生保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的觀念、把多一點(diǎn)的空間還給動(dòng)物的觀念、與動(dòng)物和諧共存的觀念。如果考生從“應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”這一觀點(diǎn)入手的話(huà)就迎合了閱讀材料，同時(shí)也能夠受到改卷老師的青睞?！緦?zhuān)家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】自2020年廣東卷改革以來(lái)，寫(xiě)作部分的兩個(gè)試題在寫(xiě)作要求上均過(guò)于詳細(xì)，控制程度很高。尤其是后者，盡管是閱讀后的寫(xiě)作，但要領(lǐng)已經(jīng)被列出，實(shí)際上難度已經(jīng)大大下降。當(dāng)然，廣東卷這么做的主要目的無(wú)外乎便于教師閱卷，收縮考生的思維，不給考生跑題的機(jī)會(huì)。但是若往深處追問(wèn)，本題給學(xué)生的思維空間并不多，這個(gè)值得考量。三年來(lái)，廣東卷已經(jīng)在短文寫(xiě)作上逐漸形成定勢(shì)。