高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 第一部分 微專題強(qiáng)化練 七 書(shū)面表達(dá)2 圖表式作文課件.ppt

走向高考 英語(yǔ),第一部分,微專題強(qiáng)化練,七 書(shū)面表達(dá),第一部分,2 圖表式作文,考 向 分 析,考 題 引 路,強(qiáng) 化 訓(xùn) 練,2,3,1,Writing 1 (2014課標(biāo)全國(guó)) 假定你是李華，計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請(qǐng)給該校寫封信，詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。,注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右。 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3. 參考詞匯： 住宿accommodation _ _ _ _ _,立意與點(diǎn)撥：,答案： Dear Sir/Madam， I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad，and Id like to know something more about your sixweek English course.First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides，I wish there would not be many students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?,I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully Li Hua,Writing 2 (2014北京) 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三(1)班的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，為?？坝⒄Z(yǔ)園地”寫一篇短文，記述你和同學(xué)們向?qū)W校提建議，解決自行車存放問(wèn)題的過(guò)程。 注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于60。 2短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. _ _ _ _ _,立意與點(diǎn)撥：這篇情景作文主要涉及四個(gè)要點(diǎn)。在寫作時(shí)要以時(shí)間為主線，事件為輔助，寫清事件的過(guò)程。,答案： There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report.Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him.He accepted our suggestions.Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened for us to the parking place.Now it is easy for us to park our bikes there.,要點(diǎn)殘缺，一盤散沙 作為社區(qū)的志愿者，你與同班的幾名同學(xué)每隔一周的星期六就會(huì)到學(xué)校附近的兒童福利院，為暫時(shí)無(wú)法回家的兒童做一些力所能及的事情。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示及圖畫內(nèi)容為學(xué)校的墻報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道。,注意：詞數(shù)100左右。 參考詞匯：兒童福利院 childrens home 錯(cuò)因分析：寫這篇看圖作文時(shí)，考生沒(méi)有仔細(xì)觀察圖畫中的細(xì)節(jié)，忽視了第一幅圖畫中的“鐘表”指的是兩點(diǎn)而第四幅圖畫中“鐘表”指的是四點(diǎn)這個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)。另外，考生容易忽略第二、三幅圖畫中的一些活動(dòng)等。由于這四幅圖畫是一個(gè)連環(huán)畫，敘述的是事情的整個(gè)過(guò)程，所以應(yīng)當(dāng)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)進(jìn)行銜接。如果要點(diǎn)殘缺或者語(yǔ)句之間缺乏必要的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)，整篇文章便顯得雜亂無(wú)章。,答案： As volunteers in the neighborhood, my classmates and I visit a nearby childrens home every other Saturday.We usually get there at 2：00 p.m.and leave two hours later.At the childrens home, some of us help to do some cleaning and collect waste there to make everything tidy.And some of us chat with the children or read newspapers for them. A few of us play games with the children to make them happy and forget their troubles. During our stay there, we all try our best to let them know they are taken good care of by society, and we hope they will return home happily as soon as possible.,解析：看圖作文高分策略 1審題定調(diào)無(wú)偏差。 看圖作文依據(jù)內(nèi)容可能會(huì)讓考生寫記敘文、說(shuō)明文或者議論文(漫畫)。它們的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱也有所不同。 2寫好開(kāi)頭是前提。 考生可以采用“總分總”結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行寫作，開(kāi)始直接點(diǎn)明文章主題，能夠達(dá)到出奇制勝的效果。如：April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.( 2009北京卷),3要點(diǎn)齊全是保證。 高考書(shū)面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)一般為46個(gè)，78句話。因此找準(zhǔn)要點(diǎn)可以確保文章起碼的得分檔次。 4句式多變升檔次。 除了簡(jiǎn)單句之外，考生還應(yīng)嘗試運(yùn)用倒裝句、復(fù)合句、省略句以及非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等，提升文章檔次。 注意：在高考寫作中“要點(diǎn)齊全”是高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的基本要求之一。所以，在寫作中切忌遺漏內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，四幅圖畫中人物的活動(dòng)、到什么地方去、干了些什么、持續(xù)了多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間，在行文中都要交代清楚。要做到表達(dá)清晰、意思連貫，考生就不能忽視語(yǔ)句之間的連接詞的作用。提醒一點(diǎn)，在文章的最后要注意表達(dá)自己的感想。,