雅思大作文范文：男女平等

In many countries, women join the army as men do. However, some people argue that the army solely needs males. What is your opinion?Stepping into the 21st century, women have set foot in nearly every walk of life. However, the army is still a male-dominated area in much of the world. A great many people hold bias against womens enrolment in the army. In my view, females can contribute to/ serve the army just as males do, despite some of their shortcomings.Join the army = enroll in the army shortcut shortage water shortage/scarcity Contribute to +n./doing = make a great contribution to +n./doing 為。做貢獻The army is still a place/an area (which is) dominated by males UnsupportedThe first standpoint/viewpoint to conscribe females is that they now have more chances to receive education. In comparison with the past, when the army recruitment policies focused on strength and fitness, the current focus is on academic ability. Physical fighting, either armed or unarmed, no longer features in modern warfare. It has been replaced by battles between tanks, armours, missiles or warplanes, most of which are computerised. In other words, females can perform military tasks as their male counterparts do, provided that they are well-educated and well-trained.Be characterised/featured by +n. 以。為特征Air travel is characterised by high speed and efficiency.Conscribe vt. = recruit 招募Experience capability The educational facilities in the countryside are inferior to their counterparts in the urban areas. Superior Secondly, women have inborn/innate merits that stand them in good stead. Females are less likely to commit faults, for(因為) they are accustomed to dealing with matters with accuracy and caution. Patience and consideration of others account for the high presence of females in army hospitals or logistics departments. Other impressive personality traits include their endurance of hardships, especially in grueling/tough conditions, and their tenderness, a character(that is) required in the caring profession in the army.Considerate adj. considerable adj. a considerable number of That accounts for why .這就解釋了為什么。Because of = on account of With +n. =adv. With ease =easily with efficiency = efficiently with accuracy and caution= accurately and cautiously Notwithstanding/despite their strengths, females have some limitations they may need to overcome. The first obstacle is the social attitudes. Females have to cope with the pressure （that is） exerted by their families, acquaintances, or friends, as serving the army is widely/generally seen as a deadly job, which is exclusively for males. The second obstacle is sexual discrimination and harassment, which seems common in most armies and can discourage females from serving their countries.Exert/have adverse impacts/effects/influences on sb/sth Exert pressure on sb 給某人施加壓力Encourage/enable sb to do sth Discourange/disable sb from doing Racial discrimination ethnicity Be perceived/recognised as exclude include exclusive inclusiveIn conclusion, females presence in the army should be approved and encouraged. Their performance can be guaranteed by their innate/inborn strengths, despite the fact that they might have to cope with prejudices and other external disturbances.Bias = prejudice = preconceived notion 偏見Conscribe = enlist = enrol 征召入伍Stand sb in good stead =advantage sb 對。有利Gruelling = harsh = tough = difficult = severe = arduous 惡劣的