劍橋商務(wù)英語(yǔ)中級(jí)寫(xiě)作.ppt

BEC-ProposalWriting,大學(xué)英語(yǔ)拓展課程劍橋商務(wù)英語(yǔ)（BEC）中級(jí),常州大學(xué)外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)院楊國(guó)萍,IntroductiontoProposalWriting,Basically,proposalsarepersuasivepresentations.Purpose:tosolveaproblem,alteraprocedure,findanswerstoquestions,orconductresearchonatopicofmutualinterest.,120-140wordsnosignificantdifferencebetweentheformatrequiredforproposalsandreportsProposalscanusevariousdeliverymedia,suchasletter,fax,email,etc.,IntroductiontoProposalWriting,ATypicalStructureforProposals,IntroducingtheProposalProvidingReasons/ComparingProsandConsBalancingandConcluding,Lead-in:Readingexerciseonp.72,Inresponsetoyourenquiryabout/FurthertoAtpresentthecompanyseemstobeperforming(wellbadly),OntheonehandbutontheotherOneadvantage/disadvantageisthatOneotherthingtoconsideris,DespiteIwouldstillsuggestthat.Overall,Iwouldstronglyrecommendthat.Thefactthatmakesthisagood|poorinvestmentopportunity.,GototheWritingTaskonp.73,Reading:AProposal,Asalespersonwhoworksforacompanyrentingofficespacehasfaxedtheproposalbelowtoaclient.Readitandanswerquestion1-3.1.Whataretheneedsoftheclient?2.Isthesalespersonabletomeetthoseneeds?3.Whatarethebenefitsofthesecondlocation?,DearMr.RiceThankyouforyourorderbyfax.Furthertoyourrequestforofficespacefortwelvemonths.IdliketomentionthatIcanalsoofferyoua10%discountforbookingsofaneighteen-monthperiod.YouenquiredaboutavailabilityattheVirginiaWalkCentreandofficesarestillvacant.However,pleasenotethatthereislimitedparkingandsomeofficesareondifferentfloors.Asaninterestingalternative,youmightwishtoconsideranewpremisescalledDockside(aboutonemiledowntheriversidefromVirginiaWalk).Ithasthefollowingfeatures:afirst-flooropen-planofficespace(75m2)withwonderfulviewsoftheoldharbour.aconvenientthree-minutewalkfromthestationandidealforcyclistswithapathalongtheriversidesuitableparkingfacilitiesforovertwentystaff.,FAX,Pleaseconsiderthispossibilityandnotethediscountwouldstillapply.Avisittothispremisescanbearranged,althoughIwouldsuggestapromptdecisiononthissecondoption.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouintheverynearfuture.YourssincerelyHugoJones,1.Whataretheneedsoftheclient?2.Isthesalespersonabletomeetthoseneeds?3.Whatarethebenefitsofthesecondlocation?,Theclientneedsofficespacefor12months.,Thesalespersoncanmeetthoseneedsandalsowantstotryandsellalittlemoreinaddition.,Thesecondlocationofferedhasthesebenefits:officesonthesamefloorwonderfulviewsmoreconvenientthantheotherlocationfortransportsuitableparkingfacilities,DearMr.RiceThankyouforyourorderbyfax.Furthertoyourrequestforofficespacefortwelvemonths.IdliketomentionthatIcanalsoofferyoua10%discountforbookingsofaneighteen-monthperiod.YouenquiredaboutavailabilityattheVirginiaWalkCentreandofficesarestillvacant.However,pleasenotethatthereislimitedparkingandsomeofficesareondifferentfloors.Asaninterestingalternative,youmightwishtoconsideranewpremisescalledDockside(aboutonemiledowntheriversidefromVirginiaWalk).Ithasthefollowingfeatures:afirst-flooropen-planofficespace(75m2)withwonderfulviewsoftheoldharbour.aconvenientthree-minutewalkfromthestationandidealforcyclistswithapathalongtheriversidesuitableparkingfacilitiesforovertwentystaff.Pleaseconsiderthispossibilityandnotethediscountwouldstillapply.Avisittothispremisescanbearranged,althoughIwouldsuggestapromptdecisiononthissecondoption.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouintheverynearfuture.YourssincerelyHugoJones,FAX,Writing:Afax,Spacesaver,companywhichrentswarehousespacetobusinesses,hasbeensentthisfax.Lookatthefaxandtheotherinformationbelowandanswerthefollowingquestions.,To:SpacesaverFrom:RandyBurrSubject:RentingwarehousespaceFurthertoourdiscussionlastweekinwhichIoutlinedourneedforwarehousingoverthenexteighteenmonths,IwouldliketoenquireifthewarehousespaceisstillavailableattheW1site.Wewouldhavethefollowingrequirements:warehouseof100m224-houraccessmusthavesecurityadequateparkingfortwentyandeasyaccess,BROWN-;-.,Step3:Reasoning/ComparingProsandCons,alittlefurtherfromthecentreofthecitythanW1,thefollowingfeatures,easyaccessforlorriesandadequateparkingfortwenty,securitywithCCTV,spaceavailabilityof100squaremeters,PossibleAnswer,PleasealsonotethatitwouldbethepriceOfW1andthediscountforatwo-yearbookingwouldstillapply.Avisittothesepremisescanbearranged,althoughIwouldliketosuggestapromptdecisiononthissecondoption.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouintheverynearfuture.Yourssincerely,Step4:BalancingandConcluding,twothirds,10%,Tipsforthiswritingtask:,referredtothecustomersneedsIncludeinformationfromthehandwrittennotesUsedfixedexpressionsandasemi-formalbusinesstoneStressedthebenefitsofthesecondlocation.,Inyourproposal,youshouldhavedonethefollowing:,Suggestions,建議書(shū)目標(biāo)要明確且合乎實(shí)際實(shí)事求是地?cái)[明實(shí)力或優(yōu)勢(shì)條件具體明確地提出達(dá)到計(jì)劃目標(biāo)的辦法和解決問(wèn)題的措施規(guī)定完成計(jì)劃的時(shí)間。表明哪些做到，哪些做不到，把握分寸確信解決問(wèn)題的方法和實(shí)施項(xiàng)目的目的一致總之，商務(wù)建議書(shū)可以不拘一格，但是它應(yīng)當(dāng)簡(jiǎn)潔清晰、立意完整、目標(biāo)明確、論點(diǎn)鮮明、論據(jù)確鑿，行文生動(dòng)并富有感染力。,AnintroductiontomanagementProgrammeincludes:-Planningandsettingobjectives-Communicationskills-DelegatingworkThree-daycourseMaximum20participantsIncludesworkinsmallgroupsJuly6-8orSeptember14-16Priceincludesnotesonkeytopicsforfutureuse5%reductionifyoubookbeforetheendofMay,Veryusefulinmyjobexplainwhy,Goodwayofworking,Septbetter-saywhy,Colleaguescanusethem,Good!Letsbooknow!,Youcompanyiswillingtopayforyoutoattendamanagementtrainingcourse.Youhavereceivedaleafletaboutasuitablecourse.Readtheleafletbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotesThenusingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeaproposalforyourTRAININGMANAGER,explainingwhyyouwouldliketoattendthecourse.Write120-140words,DearTrainingManager,Iwouldliketoattendthe“Introductiontomanagement”trainingcoursewhichisdescribedintheattachedleaflet.BENEFITSTheprogramlooksveryuseful,particularlythesectiononcommunicationskills.ThisisbecauseIamnotveygoodattalkingtootherstaffaboutpoorstandardsofwork.Thecourseincludesworkinsmallgroups,andthatishowIlearnbest.Hearingotherpeoplesideaisstimulating.Participantswillbegivennotesonkeytopics.Thesewillbehandy,bothformeandforsomeofmycolleagues.DATESIwouldprefertoattendtheSeptembercourse,asIhavearrangedtotakeannualleaveinJuly.PRICEThereisa5%pricereductionforearlybooking,soIhopethatyouwillagreetobookthecourseformebeforetheendofMay.Yourssincerely,TrendsDescription(P111),a.可以使用的動(dòng)詞或動(dòng)詞詞組：toincreasetogouptorisetogrowtojumptoleaptosoartoshoottopickup,線性圖表(上升),1.對(duì)于上升趨勢(shì)的描述：,b.可以使用的名詞：anincreaseagrowthajumpasoaranupwardtrend,2.對(duì)于上升到某個(gè)位置的描述：a.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞to具體數(shù)據(jù)。b.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞tothepeakof具體數(shù)據(jù)。c.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞reachingthepeakof+具體數(shù)據(jù)。d.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞reaching+具體數(shù)據(jù)。e.topeakat具體數(shù)據(jù)f.toclimbto+具體數(shù)據(jù),3.對(duì)于上升的程度的描述：a.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞by具體數(shù)據(jù)。b.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞副詞。,a.可以使用的動(dòng)詞或動(dòng)詞詞組：tofalltodecreasetogodowntoslidetocollapsetodeclinetodrop,線性圖表(下降),1.對(duì)于下降趨勢(shì)的描述：,b.可以使用的名詞：acollapseadecreaseafalladeclineadrop,2.對(duì)于下降到某個(gè)位置的描述：a.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞to具體數(shù)據(jù)。b.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞tothebottomof具體數(shù)據(jù)。c.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞reachingthebottomof+具體數(shù)據(jù)。d.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞reaching+具體數(shù)據(jù)。,3.對(duì)于下降程度的描述：a.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞by具體數(shù)據(jù)。b.1.a.中的動(dòng)詞副詞。,對(duì)于平穩(wěn)的趨勢(shì)的描述：可以使用的動(dòng)詞或動(dòng)詞詞組：tohardlychangetohavelittlechangetokeepsteadytolevelofftoremainconstanttostaythesame,表示程度的副詞：1.程度較大：considerablydramaticallygreatlymarkedlyobviouslyquicklyrapidlysharplysignificantlysuddenly2.程度較?。簊lightlygraduallyslowlysteadily,時(shí)間的嵌入嵌入時(shí)間時(shí)所使用的介詞和介詞詞組：infromtobetween.andduringandatthestartofbytheendofoverattheendofthroughout時(shí)間s+具體數(shù)據(jù),上升和下降趨勢(shì)的組合描述（嵌入了時(shí)間和程度之后）：1.先上升后下降的句型：.increasedslowlyduringandbutfellsharplyin.Asteadyfallinduringandfollowedthesharpincreasein.2.先下降后上升的句型：fellbeforebegantomakearecoverycontinuetherecovery,climbingtodroppedduringbutincreasedagaininfellandthenpickupduringcollapsedbeforerisingtoattheendof3.起伏波動(dòng)的句型：fluctuatedsharplyallthrough4.波動(dòng)不大的句型：hardlychangedthroughtheperiodbetweenand,柱狀圖形的描述轉(zhuǎn)換為線形圖形的描述,餅狀圖形的描述對(duì)于百分比進(jìn)行描述所使用的句型：%theis/has/have/areaccountsfor%ofthetotaltakesup%inthewholechart,趨勢(shì)的比較1.表示相似的句型(實(shí)例)：BothsharepricesrosesharplyinJanuary.Neithercompanyhasmadeaprofityet.LikeX,YfellinJune.XrosejustassharplyasY.2.表示差異的句型（實(shí)例）：Xfellsharplywhereas/whileYremainedsteady.XfellquicklycomparedtoY.UnlikeY,Xroseby10%.XrosefarmoredramaticallythanY.3.表示倍數(shù)的句型：thedoubled/tripledincomparedwiththosein4.客觀比較的句型：isincontrastto,數(shù)據(jù)的修飾1.表示不足的詞或詞組：uptobelowunderalmostnearly2.表示超過(guò)的詞或詞組：overmorethanjustover3.表示大約的詞：about,A：TrucksalesrosesteadilyfromOctobertoDecember.,B：AsteadyfallinsalesduringNovemberandDecemberfollowedthesharpincreaseinOctober.,C:TrucksalesdroppedduringNovemberbutincreasedagaininDecembertoexceedOctobersales.,D:Trucksaleshardlychangedthroughouttheperiod,exceptforaslightincreaseinNovember.,E:AslowbutsteadyincreasewasfollowedbyasharpfallandanincreasetowardstheEnd.,F：TrucksalesdroppeddowninOctober,butremainedunchangedfortherestoftheperiod.,KeytoEx.5inP113,DearMr.Keating,InresponsetoyourenquiryaboutSungreenPower,thecompanyseemstobeperformingwell.OnethingtoconsideristheirnewsalesagreementwithMainlineEnergy,worth190millioneuros.Thisshouldhelptheirsharepricewhichrecentlyhalved.Onthehand,thiswascausedbyashortageofsilicon,butontheotherhandSungreenspecializeintechnologywhichrequireslesssilicon.Sodespitethefall,Iwouldstillsuggestyouconsiderinvesting.Thefactthatsolarpowercostshavecontinuouslyfallensincetheearlyninetiesandlooksettoequalnormalenergycostsinthenextfewyearmakesthisagoodinvestmentopportunity.Feelfreetocallmetodiscussanyfurtherqueriesyoumighthave.Bestregards.,KeytoExinP95,ReportonFindingsfromFocusGroupResearchIntroductionTheaimofthisreportistomakerecommendationsbasedonfindingfromtenfocusgroup.FindingsFirstly,nearlythree-quartersofresponsestothecherryflavorwereverypositivewithonly7%beingneitherpositivenornegativeabouttheproduct.Ontheotherhand,abouttwo-thirdssaidtheydislikethestrawberryflavorbecauseofthesugarandartificialtaste.Finally,withregardtothenormalanddietversions,approximately20%morepeoplepreferredthedietcherryversionandnearlythreetimesasmanypreferredthedietstrawberryversion.RecommendationsBasedonthesefindings,Iwouldrecommendthatthecompanylaunchestwotypesofcherryflavordrink.WhileIwouldntsuggestanormalstrawberryversion,thecompanycouldconsiderproducingadietversionwhichwasclearlymorepopular.,Clicktoeditcompanyslogan.,ThankYou!,