高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 寫作系列 道歉信課件.ppt

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道歉信 — 技法點撥,什么是道歉信？,? 道歉信是指因過失或疏忽做錯了事，給別人帶來了麻煩或損失，發(fā)覺后要立即寫信給對方賠禮道歉時寫的信件。道歉是一種禮貌，道歉信要寫得坦率，誠懇。,? 道歉信通常包括三部分內(nèi)容： 1、表示歉意，道歉的原由； 2、出現(xiàn)差錯的原因，提出彌補措施； 3、請求原諒。 ? 語言要誠摯，解釋的理由要真實。好的道歉信不僅會取得對方的諒解，還會增進彼此的感情。,寫作“三步曲“,表示歉意 說明具體原因、提出補救辦法 再次致歉，希望得到理解。,Structures,Para 1：簡明說明寫信目的，為自己的過失表示歉意，希望得到對方的諒解。 Para 2：詳細(xì)說明當(dāng)時情況，解釋原因，語氣要誠懇。 Para 3：提出補救方法，具體提出自己的想法，希望能彌補過失，消除誤會。 Para 4：再次表示歉意，愿意為此負(fù)責(zé)，希望以后不再出現(xiàn)類似不愉快事件。,I’m very sorry that I can’t go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you. I’m writing to tell you the reason for it. Just now, my cousin, Li Ming, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that he would return the next Saturday morning. He asked me to pick him up at the airport with his parents. As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I’ll have to help him in the first place. I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing. Wish you have a good time this weekend!,未能赴約原因： 1. 我叔叔從美國回來,2:30時下飛機。然而，我爸爸媽媽沒時間去接，因此我不得不去機場接他。 Yesterday afternoon, my uncle came from America and got off at 2:30, but my parents had no time to pick him up, in which case I had to meet him at the airport. After that it was too late to meet you. Thus I missed our appointment.,2.我妹妹生病了，她才四歲，不能照顧自己，而爸爸媽媽又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顧妹妹。 ①My younger sister had a bad fever. She is too young to look after herself, and my parents were at work. Therefore / In that case, I had to stay at home to take care of her. That caused me unable to meet you as appointed. ② My younger sister had a bad fever. She is too young to look after herself, and my parents were at work, in which case I had to stay at home to take care of her. That caused me unable to meet you as appointed.,That is owing to the fact that my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning. I have to go there immediately and take care of him. As told by the doctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover .,4. There is an English Speech Contest to be held this weekend. I have just been informed that my teacher finally chooses me to participate in it on behalf of our school. This is an opportunity to both display and enhance my abilities, so I am afraid I cannot be present at the airport.,5. I am indeed very sorry that I missed the…. I feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day. I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital. 6. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow.,Part 1 開頭常用句式,1. I am writing this letter to apologize to you for … 2. I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to … 3. I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to… 4. I am writing this letter to express my regret … 5. I feel dreadful about …,Part 1 開頭常用句式,6. I must beg your forgiveness for … 7. I am very sorry to say that … 8. Excuse me for my not being able to… 9. Please accept my sincere apology for … 10. Here is my deepest apology for… 11. I am terrible sorry, but…,Part 2 結(jié)尾常用句式,1. Please allow me to say sorry again. 2. Will you please accept my apology? 3. I am sorry for any convenience caused. 4. Please accept my apology. I do hope you will understand me and excuse me for my carelessness 6. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 7. Please accept my sincere apologies for this unhappy experience. 8. I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.,Part 3 其他常用句式,1. Would you mind if I change the appointment time? 2. Would it be convenient for you…? 3. I am really sorry for the trouble. 4. It is very kind of you to ask us to … But, to our regret, we cannot accept it. 5. I am sorry I cannot … and I trust that you will be able to understand. 6. I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now. 7. I am sorry that I will not be able to … due to … 8. I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience. 9. I want you to know how badly we feel about it and to assure you that it will not happen again. 10. Thank you for being patient with us. 11. In order to avoid … happening again, I have …,Part 4 常用模板,模板1：過去沒有完成的事情,I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to . The reason is that . I am sorry that I cannot finish in time, but is it possible that I make up the loss by ? If so, I will put everything else aside to . I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.,模板2：將來不能做的事情,Much to my regret / I am terribly sorry that I am unable to . It is mainly because at that time I will be full occupied by which is quite out of my expectation, and that conflicts with your . Therefore I am forced to adjust my schedule and cannot make my presence on your . I sincerely hope that you will enjoy a good time. By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week? I hope to see you soon. I am really sorry again and I trust that you will understand.,實戰(zhàn)演練,假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，上周在外教Mr. Jackson的口語課上使用手機被老師發(fā)現(xiàn)，手機被收走。請用英語給外教寫一封道歉信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點： 1．表示歉意； 2．解釋上課使用手機的原因； 3．提出自己的請求并適當(dāng)表態(tài)。 注意： 1. 可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)使文章連貫；字?jǐn)?shù)100。 2．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。,One possible version,Dear Mr. Jackson, I’m really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week. Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student.,I know any word might sound a made-up excuse. But I did not use the mobile phone for no reason. I was trying to find a part-time job last weekend that day, I got a job offer and they needed my further information immediately. Therefore, I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered.,Anyway, using a mobile phone in the classroom is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will not happen again. But I do need my phone back to keep in touch with others. Will you be so kind to give it back to me? Thanks a million! Best wishes! Yours sincerely Li Hua,Read and recite this article,