人物介紹高中英語寫作.ppt

人物介紹,晨 讀 背 誦,相關短語,1. 出生于貧窮家庭 2. 中國國籍 3.上學 4.在歲時 5.在他童年時 6.幽默感 7.總是樂于,be born in a poor family (of) Chinese nationality attend school at the age of during/in his childhood sense of humour be always ready to,7. 謙虛誠實 8. 被認為是 9. 在方面有天賦 10. 在上下苦功夫 11. 致力于 12. 從畢業(yè),modest and honest be regarded as have a gift for work hard at devote ones life to graduate from,13. 積極參加 14. 樂觀開朗 15. 被錄取;考入 16. 出國深造 17. 因而受到尊敬 18. 因著名 19.夢想成為作家,take an active part in open-minded and optimistic be admitted to go abroad for further studies be honored for be famous/well-known for dream of being a writer,20. 對做出貢獻 21. 對有濃厚興趣 22.對產生興趣 23. 在某人三十多歲時 24. 通過網絡學習 25. 設法做成某事,make contributions to have a strong interest in develop an interest in in ones thirties by network/online learning manage to do sth. succeed in doing,26.安排學習時間 27.創(chuàng)造一項世界記錄 28.獲得第一個學位 29.獲得博士學位 30.受到老師表揚 31.獲得獎學金 32.因而授予諾貝爾獎,arrange ones study time set a world record got ones first degree get/obtain a masters degree get/win praise from ones teacher gain a scholarship,be awarded the Nobel Prize for,1. 他小時候就對數學非常感興趣。 When he was a boy, he showed/developed a great interest in maths. 2. 查爾斯狄更斯于1812年出生在一個小鎮(zhèn), 由于家里窮,只上了兩年的學。 Born in a small town in 1812, Charles Dickens was able to attend school for only two years owing to his poor family.,Practice,3. 作為一名教師, 她善良、助人而有耐心, 因此我們都喜歡她。 As a teacher, she is so kind, helpful and patient that all of us like her. 4. 王萍, 來自高三三班的一個十八歲女孩, 熱愛讀書。 Wang Ping, an 18-year-old girl from Class 3, Senior 3, loves reading books.,5. 她總是樂于幫助同學提高他們的閱讀。 She is always ready to help her fellow classmates improve their reading. 6. 她為科研獻出了一切, 對國家作出了巨大貢獻。 She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country.,7. 他被認為是中國最偉大的科學家之一。 He is considered to be one of the greatest scientists in China.( is regarded as) 8. 她因在化學方面的科研成就被授予了諾貝爾獎。 She was awarded the Nobel prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement.,1.介紹人物的文中一般會用到一般過去時、一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時。若描述其出生和具體的過去行為過去時, 對現(xiàn)在的影響成就現(xiàn)在完成時，世人的評價以及他的地位-一般現(xiàn)在時。 2.介紹人物的基礎寫作一般都是以人物的出生家庭時間地點開頭，以人物的最大成就或世人對他的評價結束 3.動筆之前把相關信息按5個句子合理均與的分配好。 4.積累常用的人物外貌、性格和成就描寫的語匯，熟練一些常用的句型和高級語言結構。,技 巧 點 撥,(1)“so + adj. /adv. + that” Mary is so diligent that she always comes first in her study. (2) adj. +enough to do sth. Bob was confident enough to solve all the problems by himself. (3) “a person with + n.” John, a person with imagination, is able to make up many new stories.,(4). 使用副詞或“with + n.”的狀語結構描寫人物行為動作。 David carefully positioned the cup on the edge of the shelf. =David positioned the cup on the edge of the shelf with care.,(5). 使用同位語、定語從句、非謂語豐富人物信息,Mr. Smiths, an experienced professor, is willing to help and therefore is thought highly of by all his students. Einstein, of American nationality, was a Jewish born in Germany.,陳明，曾是一位英語演講比賽的冠軍，愿意同我們分享他的學習方法 Chen Ming, who was once the champion of the English Speech Contest, is glad to share his learning methods with us. 張明，正在劍橋大學進修，做兼職賺外快 Zhang Ming, furthering his study at Cambridge University, does a part-time job to earn extra money.,還可根據信息量的多少，同時使用同位語、分詞或定語從句，從而完成2個、3個或多個信息(姓名，出生家庭/時間/地點，職業(yè)/身份，畢業(yè)學校) Born in a poor family on April, 18, 1976, in Lianhua, a mountain village in the northeast of Hebei Province, Li Jing, a well-known writer, whose pen name is Jing Yan, graduated from Beijing University,阿爾伯特愛因斯坦：20世紀最偉大的物理學家 出生地點:德國西南的烏耳姆城 家庭背景：父母猶太人 出生日期: 1879年3月14日,Born in a Jewish family on March, 14, 1879, in Uhm, a city in the southwest of Germany, Albert Einstein, who was of American nationality, is the greatest scientist in physics in the 20th century.,典 型 例 題,請根據以下信息，介紹一位傳奇人物 姓 名：Allan Stewart 國 籍：澳大利亞 出生日期：1915年3月7日 世界紀錄：2006年獲碩士學位時年齡最大 學習態(tài)度：挑戰(zhàn)自我，永遠為時不晚。 第一個學位：1936年獲得 第二個學位：醫(yī)學博士 第三個學位：80多歲時決定學習法律，2006年獲得碩士學位。 第四個學位：2012年通過網絡學習獲得，善于合理安排學習時間，受到老師表揚。,(2012廣東高考)你接受了一項寫作任務，要為英語校報寫一篇人物介紹。 寫作內容：,*碩士學位：masters degree; *博士：doctor,1.認真審題，弄清寫作要求:本文要求介紹一位傳奇人物，共含姓名、國籍等9個信息點。所介紹的事跡都是已經發(fā)生過的，主體時態(tài)要用一般過去時，但在運用“學習永不為晚”這句諺語時，諺語要用一般現(xiàn)在時。 2.信息分組，便于五句表達:我們按事情發(fā)生的先后順序，可以分成以下五組，以便各用一個英文句子來表達。,例題導寫：,(1)姓名、國籍、出生日期； (2)獲得第一個學位，第二個學位。 (3)學習態(tài)度：挑戰(zhàn)自我，永遠為時不晚。 (4)第三個學位：80多歲時決定學習法律，2006年獲得碩士學位；,(世界紀錄：2006年獲碩士學位時年齡最大。2006年獲得碩士學位時,年齡創(chuàng)世界紀錄,是同一件事,因此放在一起,作為一個要點),(5)第四個學位：2012年通過網絡學習獲得，善于合理安排學習時間，受到老師表揚。,第一句：我們也可以將獲得博士學位時年齡破世 界紀錄，跟姓名、出生日期、國籍等放在第一句，以突出其傳奇色彩 第二句：介紹其學習態(tài)度。然后按獲得學位的先后順序寫。 第三句：寫他獲得第一個學位和第二個學位。 第四句：寫他獲得第三個學位。 第五句：寫他獲得第四個學位。,(1)澳大利亞國籍 _ (2)出生于3月7日_,3.推敲詞句，翻譯五個句子: 翻譯以下短語，為寫作掃清障礙：,be born on March 7,a citizen of Australia/an Australian,(3)獲得第一個學位 _,get/obtain/receive his first degree,(4) 醫(yī)學博士學位 _ (5) 獲得碩士學位_ (6) 創(chuàng)造世界紀錄_,doctors degree of Medicine,obtain a masters degree,set a world record,(7) 挑戰(zhàn)自我 _ (8) 學習永遠為時不晚 _ (9) 在他80多歲_,in his eighties,challenge oneself,one is never too late to learn,(10) 通過網絡學習 _ (11) 安排學習時間 _ (12) 受到老師表揚 _,get/win praise from his teacher,by online learning/by network learning,arrange his study time,4.連句成篇：,Version 1：Allan Stewart, of Australian nationality, was born on March 7, 1915. He got his first degree in 1936 and then his second degree of Doctor of Medicine. He believed that one is never too old to challenge oneself. Therefore, in his eighties, he decided to study law, and in 2006 he set a world record for becoming the oldest person to get a masters degree. Because he was so good at arranging his study time, he got praise from his teacher, and in 2012 he managed to get his fourth degree by network learning.,Version 2：Born on March 7, 1915, Allan Stewart, (who is) an Australian, become the oldest man to obtain a masters degree over the world in 2006. He believed that one is never too old to challenge oneself. He got his first degree in 1936 and then his doctors degree of medicine. In his eighties, he decided to study law, after which he obtained his third degree in 2006. In 2012, he managed to get his fourth degree by online learning and won praise from his teacher for his good time management in study.,中文名: 管謨言 筆名:莫言 出生背景: 山東省北部高密市一個農民家庭 出生日期: 1955年2月17日 畢業(yè)時間及院校: 1986年畢業(yè)于解放軍藝術學院,Born in a farmers family on February, 17 ,1955, in Gaomi, a city in the northeast of Shandong province, Guan Moye, whose pen name is Moyan, graduated from Peoples Liberation Army Academy of Arts in 1986.,2. 請使用不同的表達完成句子。 (1)他是個既聰明又友好的人。 He is _ _. (2)他是如此的誠信, 以致所有認識他的人都稱贊他。 He is _those who know him all _him. He is _those who know him all _ him.,both smart and friendly/clever as well as friendly/intelligent and nice(as well),such an honest person that,think highly of,so honest that,praise,(3)他的謙虛, 給我們留下了很深刻的印象。 His _left us a deep _. We were all _. (4)每當我們向他求助時,他總是很耐心地幫助我們。 Whenever we _, he will always help us _. Every time we _, he will always _.,modesty,impression,deeply impressed by his modesty,ask him for help,patiently,give us a helping hand with patience,turn to him for help,Mr Li Qiang, our English teacher, has taught English for 14 years, during which he has been awarded the title of a model teacher for many times and once won the first prize in the teachers speech contest of the city. With a sense of humor and a good command of English, he can always make every lesson lively and interesting. In fact, he is not only our good teacher but also our good friend because he is kind to us and is always ready to help us.,即時練習,A volunteer teacher,Mr Li, who shows great enthusiasm for his work and is willing to meet the challenges, will set off for Xinjiang next month and work there as a volunteer teacher for two years. He sets such a good example to us that we all respect and love him.,亮點點擊：本文的寫作難度不大，介紹一位老師，貼近考生生活，基本按照內容提示的順序來寫。范文里有人物介紹的常用短語:be awarded, win the first prize, set a good example 等等；用not onlybut also 和suchthat 表示并列與因果關系；還穿插使用同位語、定語從句、with的用法, 這些都是本文的亮點所在。,Mo Yan, whose real name is Guan Moye, was born into a peasant family, in Gaomi County, Shandong Province, on February 17th, 1955. Since 1981, he has written many novels, including Red Sorghum, Frog, and so on. He won the 2012 Nobel Prize for Literature on October 11th for what is called “hallucinatory realism”, combining folk stories, history and modern events in his works.,課外作業(yè),Mo, who was once so poor that he ate tree bark and weeds to survive, is the first Chinese-language writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature and received his Nobel diploma, a medal and the 1.1 million dollars at a ceremony in December. Minutes after the award was announced, millions of Chinese expressed pleasure and pride for Mo Yan on social media websites.,亮點點擊：熱點人物介紹，描述具體的過去行為，則使用一般過去時。本文內容較多，應注重信息點整合和句子的連接。范文運用了whose和who引導的定語從句, 非謂語動詞, 以及sothat, after 引導的狀語從句等，把內容有效地整合在一起。,Thank you !,