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1、文體概述文體概述 求助信是當個人遇到一些自己無法解決的問題求助信是當個人遇到一些自己無法解決的問題或困難時向別人請求幫助的一種書信。通常包括或困難時向別人請求幫助的一種書信。通常包括三部分內容:三部分內容:1. 表明寫信目的,請求幫助。表明寫信目的,請求幫助。2. 要清晰陳述請求幫助的具體內容。要清晰陳述請求幫助的具體內容。3. 希望得到幫助。注意語氣委婉、真誠,并要向希望得到幫助。注意語氣委婉、真誠,并要向收信人表示感謝。收信人表示感謝。常用語塊常用語塊1.做某事有麻煩做某事有麻煩 _2. 給某人幫助給某人幫助 _3. 尋求幫助尋求幫助 _4. 遇到一些問題遇到一些問題 _5. 面臨困難面臨
2、困難 _have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth.do sb. a favor / give sb. a handask for help / seek for helpencounter some problemsbe faced with difficulties6. 忙于做某事忙于做某事 _7. 為某事做準備為某事做準備 _8. 集中精力集中精力 _9. 學以致用學以致用 _10. 讓某人失望讓某人失望 _let sb. downbe busy doing sth. / be engaged in doing sth.prepare for sth.c
3、oncentrate on / focus onputinto use11. 克服恐懼克服恐懼 _12. 取得巨大的進步取得巨大的進步_13. 渴望做某事渴望做某事 _14. 提供一些有建設性的指導提供一些有建設性的指導 _15. 因某事感激某人因某事感激某人_be grateful to sb. for sth.overcome the fearmake great progressbe anxious to do sth. / long to do sth.offer some constructive guidance套用句式套用句式1.我寫信想請您幫我一個忙。我寫信想請您幫我一個忙。2
4、. 我遇到三個困擾我的問題。首先,我遇到三個困擾我的問題。首先,其其次,次,最困擾我的是最困擾我的是3. 不幸的是,我覺得做某事很困難。不幸的是,我覺得做某事很困難。3. Unfortunately, I find/feel it quite difficult/hard to do sth.1. I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand.2. I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, Whats m
5、ore, What troubles me most is4. 面對以上的問題,我渴望得到你的幫助。你能面對以上的問題,我渴望得到你的幫助。你能給予我一些關于給予我一些關于的建議嗎?的建議嗎?5. 我想知道你能否幫助我解決這些問題。如果你我想知道你能否幫助我解決這些問題。如果你能幫助我,我將感激不盡。能幫助我,我將感激不盡。4. Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on?5. I wonder if you can help me
6、with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.習作修改習作修改(做短文改錯,背經(jīng)典范文做短文改錯,背經(jīng)典范文)Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua, the Chinese student takes summer courses in your university. I am writing to ask for help. I come here last month and found my courses interested. And I have some difficu
7、lties with note-taking and I have no idea of what to use the library.a taking came interesting But how I told that the Learning Center provides help for students and I am anxious to get help from you. I have no class in Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with
8、you. You may email or call to me. Here is my email address and phone number: ; 12345678. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua was on are 1. the a此處表示此處表示“一個一個”學生,表泛指,學生,表泛指,要用冠詞要用冠詞a。2. takes taking此處是非謂語,且與邏輯主此處是非謂語,且與邏輯主語是主動關系,故用現(xiàn)在分詞語是主動關系,故用現(xiàn)在分詞taking。3. come came由后面的由后面的last month可知,要可知
9、,要用一般過去時。用一般過去時。4. interested interesting此處是指此處是指courses令令人有趣的,是修飾物。人有趣的,是修飾物。5. And But根據(jù)上下文的邏輯關系,此處根據(jù)上下文的邏輯關系,此處應該表示應該表示“轉折轉折”,而不是,而不是“遞進遞進”。6. what how根據(jù)句意應該是不知道怎樣使根據(jù)句意應該是不知道怎樣使用圖書館,故用用圖書館,故用how。7. 在在told前加前加was此處表示此處表示“我被告知我被告知”,應該用被動語態(tài),且是在寫信前被告知,故應該用被動語態(tài),且是在寫信前被告知,故用一般過去時的被動語態(tài)。用一般過去時的被動語態(tài)。8. in
10、 on具體指具體指“星期幾的下午星期幾的下午/上午上午”,要用介詞要用介詞on。9. 去掉去掉call后的后的to因為因為call是及物動詞。是及物動詞。10. is are此句是倒裝句,主語是此句是倒裝句,主語是my email address and phone number,故用,故用are。課堂練習課堂練習 假定你是李華,你正在為高考緊張復習,但假定你是李華,你正在為高考緊張復習,但最近你遇到了一些問題導致無法集中精力學習。最近你遇到了一些問題導致無法集中精力學習。于是你給你校的外籍心理老師于是你給你校的外籍心理老師Kate寫一封求助信寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點如下:尋求幫助。要點如下
11、:1. 作業(yè)多,沒有時間運動。作業(yè)多,沒有時間運動。2. 壓力大,難以入睡。壓力大,難以入睡。3. 希望得到希望得到Kate的幫助。的幫助。注意:注意:1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右。左右。2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫??梢赃m當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。Dear Kate, I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, Ive been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite ha
12、rd to concentrate on my study. So Im writing to ask you for help. Im encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stress
13、ful because I dont want to let them down. What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the above problems, Im anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?Sincerely yours,Li Hua課外作業(yè)課外作業(yè) 假定你是李華,當前你在英語學習方面遇到
14、了假定你是李華,當前你在英語學習方面遇到了一些問題。于是你向你校的外籍老師一些問題。于是你向你校的外籍老師Tom寫一封寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點如下:求助信尋求幫助。要點如下:1. 本人簡介。本人簡介。2. 求助內容。求助內容。3. 希望得到希望得到Tom的幫助。的幫助。注意注意:1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右。左右。2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫??梢赃m當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。Dear Tom, Im Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in your school. Currently, Im having tr
15、ouble learning English. So Im writing to ask you for help. Therere two main problems Im faced with now. First, I find it quite hard to master the English grammatical rules and put them into use. Furthermore, so nervous do I feel in front of my classmates that I cant say a word in English. Therefore, I sincerely hope you can offer me some advice on how to study English grammar and how to overcome my fear of speaking English. I have the confidence that with your help, I can conquer my English. I really appreciate it if you could help me.Sincerely yours,Li Hua